09-03-2014, 10:03 PM | #1 |
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Camarac Hows your back?
You look like a milf that got divorced the same day you got married
I bet you still got the ring...and they let you keep everything Now you only date married men, you probably so thirsty you carry them You'd be commiting a suicide on a trust fall, ya ugly ass, YOU LOOK LIKE A HAIRBALL. with a dimple. I saw your profile pic. it was simple. head turned at an angle. cause the left side of your face is dismantled, You didnt want anybody to see that, honestly who would. But really who should especially after dinner that was really good You fucked with me first like a vampire, you couldnt handle your thirst You lucky you've got rights dumb wife cause thats the only way you can come here and curse That was funny though nice comeback. You fucking hunchback Nah fuck that, he looked better. in fact. you look like the worst weather to ever happen in america. I bet your real name is sandy... Not 1 man was brave enough to enter the storm cause after such an event they'd have to reform, from the porn, which is way better than a washed out overused mom....BOMBED!!! |
09-03-2014, 10:53 PM | #2 |
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"Whipper snapper" and "after that dinner that was good "
My gawd please teach me to rhyme such unorthodox words bro? |
09-04-2014, 04:03 AM | #3 |
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lmaoooooooooooooo @mrmuzzl3 aiyyo Slim, you gon let him get away with that?
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09-04-2014, 07:18 AM | #4 |
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Tbh I stopped reading at "you look like a milf." Just got a little too awkward for me.
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09-04-2014, 07:36 AM | #5 |
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09-04-2014, 10:40 AM | #6 |
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Pretty good for poetry!
This is pretty much a battling site, though your delicately worded phrases were a nice change of pace from impactful & humorous bars with halfway decent concepts and snappy wording.
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10-30-2015, 05:20 PM | #7 |
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thank you
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10-31-2015, 02:27 AM | #8 |
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I saw your profile pic.
it was simple. head turned at an angle. cause the left side of your face is dismantled, ^^Lol. You'll go far here...lack of multies hurts this flow wise for me, tis all that bothers a nigga tbh...actually enjoy raw unedited spits, shows what you really have be on the back burner, that's excitin'. Thanks for feedin' my shit man, Stay uppity. |
10-31-2015, 10:01 AM | #9 |
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lmao isn't Camarac here actually a guy, though, who just rocked TheMuzzl3s wife's pic as his avatar to piss him off?
great diss either way
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10-31-2015, 10:02 AM | #10 |
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