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09-04-2014, 04:15 PM
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Notebook vs. Muff [Muff Wins]
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09-08-2014, 02:47 PM
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This pussy is sick? It seems the logic in your ploy's bent
..Besides the fact Muff gets checked more than Gynaecologist appointments |
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09-08-2014, 03:27 PM
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DOHpe since 02'
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rly?
I indulge in the ganja. I get the absolute package I stay smokin on that Sticky, Note..u use to getda "kick me" 1s on ur back u Faggot ah w.e gtg
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Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 09-08-2014 at 07:41 PM. |
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09-08-2014, 08:37 PM
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not sure what it is but your punch flowed well, it just didnt have that much of an impact and lacked creativity. muff i liked this, my only gripe would be the use of the word, "faggot" to complete the rhyme, i thought it wasnt needed or could've been worded a bit more sharper. good drop tho fellas. vote: muff
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09-08-2014, 10:54 PM
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can I help u?
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I feel Muff won this. His flow and setup were stellar, but the imagery and overall punch combined with the nameplay was the most effective. Note's line was decent, but it lacked the amount of impact and extra that Muff employed. I think had Note flowed better and added a rarer reference for muff then he might've offset Muff loading up his bar with extra elements.
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09-08-2014, 11:08 PM
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Notebook: Muff-as-pussy jokes are horribly played, but your wording was substantially better here.
Muff Diggity: I liked this concept but not the wording all that much. But it wasn't so bad as to cost you the win. Vote: Muff Diggity
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09-09-2014, 02:36 AM
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Muff wins
Simple concept worded decently beats terribly played concept worded poorly
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09-09-2014, 03:28 AM
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Muff had a much better constructed bar and it was more appealing and entertaining. Note's wasn't bad either, the np was just kind of obvious lol. Other than that it was humorous.
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09-09-2014, 09:22 AM
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I like notes set up still relating to the punch...I thought it was dope...worded good maybe a lil predictable for a nameplay tho...solid
Muff...U lucky u didnt keep that 1st punch u posted cuz that wasnt touchin his... But this one was creative...didnt like the rhyming wordz...but the creativity edges the easier nameplays to me Vote...muff daddy |
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09-10-2014, 09:06 AM
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Muff got it. Note not bad, though...
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09-12-2014, 10:07 PM
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The muff/pussy hits are mad played n this one was just average. Sticky note was a good flip/word play
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09-13-2014, 11:18 AM
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Bags will be avenged
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muff other dude was just too played
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09-14-2014, 09:39 AM
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Not a big fin of either but muff had the better punch
vote muff
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09-14-2014, 09:40 AM
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Muff was better
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