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09-04-2014, 04:10 PM
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Championship Match: BROKE LESNAR vs. Meth [BROKE LESNAR Wins]
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09-04-2014, 04:37 PM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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09-04-2014, 05:21 PM
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09-09-2014, 01:02 AM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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watch me drop Meth then let the fall demolish his spine
n when I put this hard case on his back, it'll inspire the next Otterbox product design Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 09-09-2014 at 01:12 AM. |
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09-09-2014, 02:34 AM
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Lesnar brings pressure to the low tiers, beating all the newbz I say
If Brokedown one more dud on his route, he'll pullover and call for help on the highway
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09-09-2014, 06:32 AM
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DOHpe since 02'
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I like both..think im missing something subtle in brokes..iono meths was better imo although theres something choppy af bout the way u executed it. i like the concept v/meth but close
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Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 09-09-2014 at 06:36 AM. |
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09-09-2014, 07:29 AM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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Wow...dope
Broke...dont see any flaws...pretty solid..hardcase shit is crack!!!..like how u chose to sway from doin a name punch an went wit somethin original...worked good here Meth...the setup really led into the punch...thats the strongest point here...didnt feel the punches.hit.the same but.both up.there with the creativity Vote.....Broke |
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09-10-2014, 02:44 AM
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I like both.
Actually thought meth had alot of potential for the punch but didnt execute the end smoothly enough imo. Broke was smooth in all facets. That spine hard case cover connection was dope. V broke |
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09-10-2014, 09:03 AM
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Shrewd as evearthed
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Broke killed it, fresh as fuck concept and I was just looking at one of these for my iPhone just last night... opted for one of those with the Gorilla Glass you screw in around the phone afterwards:
 thats how my shit looking now. vote - broke
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09-12-2014, 01:23 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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BROKE LESNAR: The setup and the punchline didn't connect at all. You were going to drop him, presumably off a high structure, to watch him become paralyzed or killed by the fall, but then you shot him in the back? I also am never crazy about generic punchlines in 1-2, especially against well-known members. But the punchline was clever and well-worded.
Meth: The rhyme was really bad here, like you forgot to rhyme and then added that "I say" as though that made up for it. I also don't think a dud can be used to describe a person, and I don't think that the wordplay makes sense with that aspect in there, either. "Broke down a dud" isn't a phrase that means anything related to cars. Vote: BROKE LESNAR
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09-12-2014, 10:02 PM
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Broke punch was coo. Could of went with something stronger than hard case but it still hit. Wasn't feeling Meths choice of calling for help on the highway. Wording killed a good concept imo.
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09-13-2014, 11:16 AM
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Bags will be avenged
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broke's was way cleaner
v/broke
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09-14-2014, 09:42 AM
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ghost in the matrix
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Cool battle, felt broke had the better punch an as ppl been telling me broke an Meth nameplays are all old so gotta give it to broke for the cleaner an more creative punch
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09-14-2014, 09:43 AM
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Top Shotta
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Both were coo broke just hit harder n lil more creative
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