09-08-2014, 12:15 PM | #1 |
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Windu Tuako vs Profit - PROFIT WINS
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09-08-2014, 12:58 PM | #2 |
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Checkmate.
10 lines? Lmk |
09-08-2014, 06:01 PM | #3 |
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Check.
10 lines is cool. |
09-09-2014, 05:32 PM | #4 |
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Profit's verse
Got a gun but not the type to pull it You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..! You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off! & with girls he gets no love, they don't know him even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind! This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw! |
09-12-2014, 10:48 PM | #5 |
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"I hope to win but if not its a learning experience. Good luck to everyone. Lets all show out this tourny" - Profit
"Yo @Sharp Nine if Muzzles going to be in this I think someone needs to educate him on how to write a battle verse. Lets say they agree for 8 lines, he's gonna write an obnoxious amount and go over. So @theMuzzl3 it goes like this (1)blah blah blah blah blah blah end rhyme...." - Profit Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/ Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/ You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy) So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/ Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/ We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/ Numbers omit details so trusting ya record's a no no then/ So you should've did this battle like ya only victory and no showed Win!/ (Windu) I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/ Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/ Last edited by Window Taco; 09-12-2014 at 10:53 PM. |
09-14-2014, 10:27 AM | #6 |
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Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..! You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off! This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw! Vs Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/ Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/ Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/ Good lines from both. Wind had a couple of misses while Profit had no real discernable miss Vote-Profit ________________ |
09-14-2014, 03:20 PM | #7 |
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This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! vs Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/ Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/ Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/ v/windu, didnt like this battle tbh nothing really stood out i think prof had lotb but wasnt enough win had one more ok bar.
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09-14-2014, 10:57 PM | #8 |
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You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all
Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off! & with girls he gets no love, they don't know him even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind! This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw! vs Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/ Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/ You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy) So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/ Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/ We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/ ok battle here, i thought profit had a clean, consistent verse. his punches hit every time, "service off" was LOTB. thought win had some ok lines but his wording was weak like, thank you badly and the muzzle/bane fan lines didnt hit cuz they both were worded badly. vote: profit
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09-15-2014, 02:33 PM | #9 |
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& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind! This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! I think Profit got this one. Didn't like Widdus verse much 'cept for the 'no show win' line. Both were pretty mediocre but I think Profit brought a little more. |
09-15-2014, 03:07 PM | #10 |
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Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..! NAH You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off! HAD POTENTIAL & with girls he gets no love, they don't know him even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind! NAH This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! OKISH Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw! NOT FEELING THIS VS Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/ Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/ NAH, WORDED POORLY AS WELL You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy) So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/ NOPE Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/ We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/ IRONY LOL, BUT STATEMENTISH Numbers omit details so trusting ya record's a no no then/ So you should've did this battle like ya only victory and no showed Win!/ COOL I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/ Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/ NOPE Both were kinda rough but I'll give the edge to profit for having harder shots. Vote: Profit |
09-15-2014, 07:50 PM | #11 |
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Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..! You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off! & with girls he gets no love, they don't know him even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind! This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw! 1st line im barely seeing the creativity here 2nd was alright was worded ok. 3rd is weak 4th is no and 5th is a huge no windu Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/ Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/ You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy) So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/ Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/ We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/ Numbers omit details so trusting ya record's a no no then/ So you should've did this battle like ya only victory and no showed Win!/ (Windu) I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/ Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/ 1st was ehh 2nd was no 3rd was no 4th was iight and 5th was ok too got windu takin it barely with more clever attempts at punchlines and actual creativity |
09-15-2014, 09:30 PM | #12 |
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Nothing
vs. I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/ Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!! ehh this wasn't a strong battle in my opinion but the winner came more personal and had better misses and connections.. v/ Windu |
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09-16-2014, 10:01 AM | #14 |
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& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind! This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! vs. Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/ Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/ Profit had one more quote and IMO, just had better concepts that he was able to execute. V/ Profit |
09-16-2014, 10:29 AM | #15 |
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& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind! This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker! vs. Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/ Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/ This was close. Both had some misses but I felt profit had the smoother wording in his bars. Win had dope concepts but a few fell short V/ Profit |
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