09-17-2014, 08:55 PM | #1 |
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09-18-2014, 12:17 AM | #2 |
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09-18-2014, 09:18 AM | #3 |
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09-22-2014, 10:42 PM | #4 |
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09-22-2014, 11:24 PM | #5 |
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I got 8 too, So i can take the Ext but ima drop sometime around 1am/2am or the afternoon depends on how im feeling.
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09-22-2014, 11:35 PM | #6 |
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09-23-2014, 12:27 PM | #7 |
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12. AKA Chris Sherman
I've made winning an awesome habit, text for me is automatic To be nice w/ the Penetrate you're familiar with too...Now get back on all 4s you faggot Workin for me is easy. Clients love me cuz the bud is purple Assailant a big deal to me…Til you fuck it up & I become one & murk you You don’t get pussy, all them stories ya tellin is lies Truth is, Sherman ain’t been seen w/ a bitch since American Pie I fuck w/ Philly dudes cuz they Ball, you do that til ya rectum is gushin I been a Sixers fan forever, you just got turned on by page 1 of Sral’s thread in discussion Can’t hold up in 1-2, but expect to win here? I’m Certain it’s tragedy dude Ironic ^ that battle ended w/ Surplus in votes yet somehow you still managed to lose You’ve made no name for yaself so you get no respect when you text The fact Unbeknown as a Vet is just < that to me and, well…everyone else on the Net |
09-23-2014, 04:09 PM | #8 |
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. . . T & Kwal!ty would have questionable sleepovers, that got his Mom afraid, Doubting. while Kwal & Gallop horsing around til Nightfalls often enough to inspire modern day Jousting. But he acts like he was raised with psychos, this noobs time's through, Yea your around basket cases.. thats made for holding fruits like you Girls get evasive intentions when they step your direction, So much reports of females avoiding Tacs.. It caught the IRS' attention. You ain't creative enough to puzzle basic readers, You can't be the king, Only times you seen lines go over heads.. Spiderman's senses was tingling. I bet you got a bunch of rap dreams filling your thoughts, But your chances with a mic'll get shot down so fast.. you'll receive a Darren Wilson response. He'll hide his blk & blues after I punch and hurt this punk, When T eye cover releases.. it's so bad TIP's Gfx designer will be out of work for months. |
09-25-2014, 10:48 PM | #9 |
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I've made winning an awesome habit, text for me is automatic
To be nice w/ the Penetrate you're familiar with too...Now get back on all 4s you faggot lol ok opener Workin for me is easy. Clients love me cuz the bud is purple Assailant a big deal to me…Til you fuck it up & I become one & murk you sail sale is iffy but it was still worded nicely You don’t get pussy, all them stories ya tellin is lies Truth is, Sherman ain’t been seen w/ a bitch since American Pie ehhh, old ass reference I fuck w/ Philly dudes cuz they Ball, you do that til ya rectum is gushin I been a Sixers fan forever, you just got turned on by page 1 of Sral’s thread in discussion lmao dope lotb Can’t hold up in 1-2, but expect to win here? I’m Certain it’s tragedy dude Ironic ^ that battle ended w/ Surplus in votes yet somehow you still managed to lose not feeling this one You’ve made no name for yaself so you get no respect when you text The fact Unbeknown as a Vet is just < that to me and, well…everyone else on the Net choppy Vs T & Kwal!ty would have questionable sleepovers, that got his Mom afraid, Doubting. while Kwal & Gallop horsing around til Nightfalls often enough to inspire modern day Jousting. lol not hard hitting but funny But he acts like he was raised with psychos, this noobs time's through, Yea your around basket cases.. thats made for holding fruits like you not feeling this Girls get evasive intentions when they step your direction, So much reports of females avoiding Tacs.. It caught the IRS' attention. cool flow to this never seen tac battle so wp is fresh to me You ain't creative enough to puzzle basic readers, You can't be the king, Only times you seen lines go over heads.. Spiderman's senses was tingling. not feeling this I bet you got a bunch of rap dreams filling your thoughts, But your chances with a mic'll get shot down so fast.. you'll receive a Darren Wilson response. ehhhh He'll hide his blk & blues after I punch and hurt this punk, When T eye cover releases.. it's so bad TIP's Gfx designer will be out of work for months. alright Slow start but ended solid That's Lars punch was fire yo! MVGT tac |
09-25-2014, 11:33 PM | #10 |
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I bet whoever I vote for, gets no other votes… lol.
I already lost my round, but I'm gonna vote anyways… just to put in my 2 cents. I've made winning an awesome habit, text for me is automatic To be nice w/ the Penetrate you're familiar with too...Now get back on all 4s you faggot (3/10) Over all, decent lines, but not great -- bragged on yourself and then called him a faggot. "Penetrate" should be penetration in correct Englsih… I'm guessing you said Penetrate, capitalized, on purpose. Also "too" should be "to"… and "Now should not be capitalized. With lack of grammar and the lines not flowing well, I couldn't score this high. Workin for me is easy. Clients love me cuz the bud is purple Assailant a big deal to me…Til you fuck it up & I become one & murk you (2/10) Again, 1st line brags. Second line was a horrible follow up. You don’t get pussy, all them stories ya tellin is lies Truth is, Sherman ain’t been seen w/ a bitch since American Pie (9/10) This was good, both lines insulting; second line followed the first one and had me LOL. I fuck w/ Philly dudes cuz they Ball, you do that til ya rectum is gushin I been a Sixers fan forever, you just got turned on by page 1 of Sral’s thread in discussion (5/10) I didn't really understand this, but I'm gonna give it a 5 because maybe my lack of understanding is my own fault. Can’t hold up in 1-2, but expect to win here? I’m Certain it’s tragedy dude Ironic ^ that battle ended w/ Surplus in votes yet somehow you still managed to lose (4/10) Lack of rhymes. Decent content, but again, its apparent you didn't pass your English classes. You’ve made no name for yaself so you get no respect when you text The fact Unbeknown as a Vet is just < that to me and, well…everyone else on the Net 5/10) This was better. Wasn't super great. I could have seen your potential rise to a better closing 2 lines. 28 vs. T & Kwal!ty would have questionable sleepovers, that got his Mom afraid, Doubting. while Kwal & Gallop horsing around til Nightfalls often enough to inspire modern day Jousting. (8/10) This was a good opener. Rhymed and flowed very well; and was insulting. But he acts like he was raised with psychos, this noobs time's through, Yea your around basket cases.. thats made for holding fruits like you (8/10) Again both good lines. Good creativity. Girls get evasive intentions when they step your direction, So much reports of females avoiding Tacs.. It caught the IRS' attention. (9/10) best lines so far. This was comical but also held direct insults, which were to the point. You ain't creative enough to puzzle basic readers, You can't be the king, Only times you seen lines go over heads.. Spiderman's senses was tingling. (3/10) This was cool, but not really punchlines. Bringing up spiderman was kind of lame. King doesn't quite rhyme with tingling, as well. I bet you got a bunch of rap dreams filling your thoughts, But your chances with a mic'll get shot down so fast.. you'll receive a Darren Wilson response. (4/10) Good content. Structure was not great. You'd have to speak really fast to get the 2nd line to match up. He'll hide his blk & blues after I punch and hurt this punk, When T eye cover releases.. it's so bad TIP's Gfx designer will be out of work for months. (7/10) Decent closing line. I wish they matched up better. The idea behind the lines was solid and did not stray. 39 /v Unfukwitable |
09-25-2014, 11:49 PM | #11 |
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Tic Tac..
I've made winning an awesome habit, text for me is automatic To be nice w/ the Penetrate you're familiar with too...Now get back on all 4s you faggot Penetrate/Pen-a-trait was a good attempt but too much of a stretch (word wise) so in the end it was funny but missed Workin for me is easy. Clients love me cuz the bud is purple Assailant a big deal to me…Til you fuck it up & I become one & murk you nice wordplay You don’t get pussy, all them stories ya tellin is lies Truth is, Sherman ain’t been seen w/ a bitch since American Pie probably old diss but liked it anyways I fuck w/ Philly dudes cuz they Ball, you do that til ya rectum is gushin I been a Sixers fan forever, you just got turned on by page 1 of Sral’s thread in discussion lol good bar Can’t hold up in 1-2, but expect to win here? I’m Certain it’s tragedy dude Ironic ^ that battle ended w/ Surplus in votes yet somehow you still managed to lose Surplus was a nameplay off Certain. if u were battling Certain and he had previously lost in a 1-2 punch battle this line woulda been dope, but it ended up a miss connect You’ve made no name for yaself so you get no respect when you text The fact Unbeknown as a Vet is just < that to me and, well…everyone else on the Net dope closer Vs Unfuk.. T & Kwal!ty would have questionable sleepovers, that got his Mom afraid, Doubting. while Kwal & Gallop horsing around til Nightfalls often enough to inspire modern day Jousting. nice nameplay, setup line coulda been condensed tho But he acts like he was raised with psychos, this noobs time's through, Yea your around basket cases.. thats made for holding fruits like you lol solid bar, strong opening so far Girls get evasive intentions when they step your direction, So much reports of females avoiding Tacs.. It caught the IRS' attention. i'm pretty sure this is played on him but i liked the way it was worded so it works You ain't creative enough to puzzle basic readers, You can't be the king, Only times you seen lines go over heads.. Spiderman's senses was tingling. ok I bet you got a bunch of rap dreams filling your thoughts, But your chances with a mic'll get shot down so fast.. you'll receive a Darren Wilson response. LOTB He'll hide his blk & blues after I punch and hurt this punk, When T eye cover releases.. it's so bad TIP's Gfx designer will be out of work for months. this was a horrible Nice battle by both. i feel a couple misses hurt Tic Tac and Unfuk was consistent for the most part (except for the closer) Vote-Unfuk |
09-27-2014, 02:05 AM | #12 |
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Thought tac had better wording n two haymakers.
Rectum n opener were fire. Un had a good verse n one haymaker with the tax evasion line. Ultimately tac was more well rounded and his misses were slightly better. V tac Enjoyed this battle thoroughly bruhs. Last edited by Blanco Bishop; 09-27-2014 at 02:07 AM. |
09-28-2014, 07:36 PM | #13 |
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Tic Tac: penetrate was a miss, assailant was cool, Sherman was light.. Nothing hard hitting, sixers fan was ok, didn't like surplus, closer could have been worded better.
Unfuckwitable: opener was too wordy.. Plus I've seen like 3 other Galloping wps on RB, played concept.. Flip is ight though, Tacs had potential to be dope.. Execution made it OKISH but ur best bar by far, Spider-Man senses was wack, seen a lot of ferguson punches not feeling it, closer was wack. IMO I thought Tic Tac won this easy w/ better material and punches. V/Tic Tac |
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53-49 Tic Tac. Both had 4 lotbs. Tic's final 4 bars were pivotal as they were all lotbs and hit in succession. Fuk benefited by opening and closing viciously but the middle of his verse struggled. v-Tic Tac |
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09-30-2014, 02:36 PM | #15 |
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You don’t get pussy, all them stories ya tellin is lies Truth is, Sherman ain’t been seen w/ a bitch since American Pie I fuck w/ Philly dudes cuz they Ball, you do that til ya rectum is gushin I been a Sixers fan forever, you just got turned on by page 1 of Sral’s thread in discussion Can’t hold up in 1-2, but expect to win here? I’m Certain it’s tragedy dude Ironic ^ that battle ended w/ Surplus in votes yet somehow you still managed to lose You’ve made no name for yaself so you get no respect when you text The fact Unbeknown as a Vet is just < that to me and, well…everyone else on the Net You had a good verse throughout no real misses at all, the assailant line was clever just not to hard hitting or direct, feel like you got stronger throughout the verse & felt like you had a little swagger to it. vs T & Kwal!ty would have questionable sleepovers, that got his Mom afraid, Doubting. while Kwal & Gallop horsing around til Nightfalls often enough to inspire modern day Jousting. But he acts like he was raised with psychos, this noobs time's through, Yea your around basket cases.. thats made for holding fruits like you He'll hide his blk & blues after I punch and hurt this punk, When T eye cover releases.. it's so bad TIP's Gfx designer will be out of work for months. You didnt have any real misses either & probably the best work Ive ever seen you post. I feel you had Line of the battle with the opener it was comical smooth & personal. This was honestly a dope battle better then some others that Ive read on this site. Neither had any real misses but Tac brought stronger jabs, where Unfuk had the heavier haymaker. Vote- Tac in a close call, due to consistency.
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