Muff vs. Kin [Muff Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 09-24-2014, 10:04 PM

Rebuttal Option (both competitors must agree to it at time of check in)

Due Monday 12am PST

El Muffin · 09-25-2014, 10:50 AM

Sup

Id rather not

Kin · 09-25-2014, 08:12 PM

"Bang Bang"

up jump Muff Diggity Dig-it, He can't Hang
Rappers Da-Light type, they call him Sugar in his Gang!!

El Muffin · 09-25-2014, 08:31 PM

Keep up with hygenics..dude its just simple
The last chick to Pumpkinhead ended up repulsed, scared n refused to continue

Defiant · 09-25-2014, 11:21 PM

Vote muff

A lot better, kin was beyond played

Kin · 09-26-2014, 05:19 AM

@Defiant. At least break it down a lil...makes.me.think its ova ya head.....we both deserve more of a vote then that

theMuzzl3 · 09-26-2014, 06:48 AM

up jump Muff Diggity Dig-it, He can't Hang
Rappers Da-Light type, they call him Sugar in his Gang!!

(8/10) -- its hard for me to give a 10. But, it flowed fairly well. I know you're referring to Sugar as suga-momma or something, but sugar would make him quite heavy… if it was taken that way. Over-all, good lines; lines 1&2 weren't really the same punch (or line 2 wasn't a continuation of punching based on line 1), but it was good.

vs

Keep up with hygenics..dude its just simple
The last chick to Pumpkinhead ended up repulsed, scared n refused to continue

(5/10) -- The over all message was very good. Line 1 had me cracking up. The 2nd line was a bit long in comparison to the 1st line & didn't really follow up with the same clarity of line 1 but was creative. Simple & continue don't quite rhyme, but close to rhyming can be ok.

/v Kin

Packed Graves · 09-26-2014, 06:51 AM

Kin didn't have a punch, he basically was only talking shit with a corny statement.
Muff had a nice nameplay im not familiar with & was over all more creative.

Muff

El Muffin · 09-26-2014, 06:51 AM

When you string the four words together it becomes a slant rhyme

Dude its just simple
Refused to continue

Rhymes perfect to me outloud

Muzzle kills me with these votes smfh

I bet he dsnt see the wordplay

jilti · 09-26-2014, 07:04 AM

Kin-dope bar. Liked the old school hip hop reference. Fresh concept, creative
Muff-dope bar as well, very creative with the nameplay
i'm sure neither of u have seen those wordplay/nameplays used on u before, so props to both on that

Gotta edge this one to Muff

theMuzzl3 · 09-26-2014, 07:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Muff Diggity

When you string the four words together it becomes a slant rhyme

Dude its just simple
Refused to continue

Rhymes perfect to me outloud

Muzzle kills me with these votes smfh

I bet he dsnt see the wordplay

I try to imagine it being spit to a beat. I don't know shit about wordplay.

BROKE LESNAR · 09-26-2014, 07:29 AM

Kin had a cool old school reference as a concept. Muff had an awesome np and reference that's more down my alley. Not that the Rappers Delight reference wasn't. Both had great flow.

v-Muff

Kin · 09-26-2014, 07:37 AM

Thank u broke an.J...They actually get the sugerhill gang flip along wit.the set up..

Good.shit.muff...urs be too much for them to get too haha

Kill Spree · 09-26-2014, 10:49 AM

I thought this was close really. The sugar hill gang old school concept I felt was nice but muffs pumpkin head was a bit harder & more creative IMO

V/muff

Wordz AhGod · 09-26-2014, 11:09 AM

ROFL @ sugar hill gang shit haha but word muff got this easy..

v/muff

Tic · 09-29-2014, 01:01 PM

Muff got this. Kin didn't have enough to explain where his concept was going, otherwise this could have been closer.

Camp Bell · 09-29-2014, 01:08 PM

CRYING @ kin punch. wtf bro? that old school style
doesnt translate well in text, or a 1-2 for that matter.
it was cool that you thought of it, it just doesnt work
in this type of style

muff had me laughing with the pumpkin head nameplay
not mad at it at all. easy win here for muff diggity dig-it

vote: muff

Tomb · 09-29-2014, 01:28 PM

Kin gettin better coo old school feel 2 the punch
Muff just hit harder coo shit

V/muff

El Muffin · 09-30-2014, 05:48 PM

Up 4 ppl who havent yet voted

Getdemlinks

Certain · 09-30-2014, 11:33 PM

Kin: This was terrible. Try being mean or creative. Good starting points.

Muff Diggity: This was slightly less terrible. You had a good name play and squandered it.

Vote: Muff Diggity

09-24-2014, 10:04 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Muff vs. Kin [Muff Wins] Rebuttal Option (both competitors must agree to it at time of check in) Due Monday 12am PST

09-25-2014, 10:50 AM	#2
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	Sup Id rather not __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 09-25-2014 at 10:57 AM.

09-25-2014, 08:31 PM	#4
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	Keep up with hygenics..dude its just simple The last chick to Pumpkinhead ended up repulsed, scared n refused to continue __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

09-26-2014, 06:51 AM	#9
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	When you string the four words together it becomes a slant rhyme Dude its just simple Refused to continue Rhymes perfect to me outloud Muzzle kills me with these votes smfh I bet he dsnt see the wordplay __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 09-26-2014 at 06:53 AM.

09-29-2014, 01:08 PM	#17
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	CRYING @ kin punch. wtf bro? that old school style doesnt translate well in text, or a 1-2 for that matter. it was cool that you thought of it, it just doesnt work in this type of style muff had me laughing with the pumpkin head nameplay not mad at it at all. easy win here for muff diggity dig-it vote: muff __________________ get high. write rhymes.

09-25-2014, 08:12 PM	#3
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	"Bang Bang" up jump Muff Diggity Dig-it, He can't Hang Rappers Da-Light type, they call him Sugar in his Gang!!

09-25-2014, 11:21 PM	#5
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	Vote muff A lot better, kin was beyond played

09-26-2014, 05:19 AM	#6
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	@Defiant. At least break it down a lil...makes.me.think its ova ya head.....we both deserve more of a vote then that

09-26-2014, 06:51 AM	#8
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777844	Kin didn't have a punch, he basically was only talking shit with a corny statement. Muff had a nice nameplay im not familiar with & was over all more creative. Muff

09-26-2014, 07:04 AM	#10
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	Kin-dope bar. Liked the old school hip hop reference. Fresh concept, creative Muff-dope bar as well, very creative with the nameplay i'm sure neither of u have seen those wordplay/nameplays used on u before, so props to both on that Gotta edge this one to Muff

09-26-2014, 07:29 AM	#12
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Kin had a cool old school reference as a concept. Muff had an awesome np and reference that's more down my alley. Not that the Rappers Delight reference wasn't. Both had great flow. v-Muff

09-26-2014, 07:37 AM	#13
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Thank u broke an.J...They actually get the sugerhill gang flip along wit.the set up.. Good.shit.muff...urs be too much for them to get too haha

09-26-2014, 10:49 AM	#14
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	I thought this was close really. The sugar hill gang old school concept I felt was nice but muffs pumpkin head was a bit harder & more creative IMO V/muff

09-26-2014, 11:09 AM	#15
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	ROFL @ sugar hill gang shit haha but word muff got this easy.. v/muff

09-29-2014, 01:01 PM	#16
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137906	Muff got this. Kin didn't have enough to explain where his concept was going, otherwise this could have been closer.

09-29-2014, 01:28 PM	#18
Tomb Your Place Of Residents Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 0	Kin gettin better coo old school feel 2 the punch Muff just hit harder coo shit V/muff

09-30-2014, 05:48 PM	#19
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	Up 4 ppl who havent yet voted Getdemlinks __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

09-30-2014, 11:33 PM	#20
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	Kin: This was terrible. Try being mean or creative. Good starting points. Muff Diggity: This was slightly less terrible. You had a good name play and squandered it. Vote: Muff Diggity