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11-01-2014, 08:44 AM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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Kin vs BROKE LESNAR [BROKE LESNAR Wins]
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11-02-2014, 05:50 PM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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FGR, fronts presidential like Franklin Roosevelt
But his Stats show he PARKS in da Back, now he knows how Rosa Felt |
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11-04-2014, 09:15 AM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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11-05-2014, 08:44 AM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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Listen Lesnar, you Slippery Snake Slithering' Scum Slime/
you winning, when Hell Freezes or Hush Readin' that One Line! |
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11-05-2014, 11:27 PM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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after a cpl of listens ur "In Or Out" verse is mad dry
only way Kin could drop a nice Learic, is by having a falling out with that guy |
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11-06-2014, 02:04 PM
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lol @ kins lisp reference. I did feel it was a little misdirected, but it was funny. I also feel the wording was a bit weird on the second line, like you could have changed readin to reads or something just to make it flow better and make more sense grammatically speaking.
Broke, I had to do some research but found the song u based ur punch off of. I think u kept it simple, but its gonna work in your favor here. You had a personal aspect, and it was current as well. Simple but effective. If this was based on comedy alone, kin would definitely get this, but his punch coulda been directed at anyone other then the fact lesnar fit in with the lisp angle of the set up. I've gotta give this to broke for having a more effective punch. v/Broke |
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11-06-2014, 02:22 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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Kin: Hush lisp lines when not battling Hush are both played and pointless.
BROKE LESNAR: This was way below your abilities but still better than Kin's. The reference sucked, and it's not really wordplay if the name is supposed to resemble the word you're referring to. Vote: BROKE LESNAR
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11-06-2014, 03:06 PM
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(ง'̀-'́)ง
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11-06-2014, 03:15 PM
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Yeah broke wins
lisp lines are done on hush |
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11-06-2014, 05:14 PM
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I got broke here
kins diss hit hush harder than it hit broke brokes was at least a personal
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