No Country for Rode Men vs Loose Booty - LOOSE WINS

Sharp · 10-27-2014, 05:32 PM

Netcees Alias Tourney

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Saturday,
November 1st 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Thursday, October 30th 2014
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

First to 7, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

Sharp · 10-27-2014, 07:49 PM

Loose Booty is in for 14

Sharp · 10-27-2014, 07:55 PM

No Country is in for 16

Sharp · 11-01-2014, 05:16 PM

Loose Booty needs an extension

Sharp · 11-03-2014, 01:01 AM

no country grants ext

Sharp · 11-03-2014, 10:37 PM

Loose Booty

yo..so you like cinema eh?

im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick
i tell nutin but truth. im tact n im pious
not actin all biased..but u cant be a movie Buff if ur 5'2 w/ atrophied biceps
I disperse the fear..its clear ur the worst in here
U think your verses are Current? nah...they Not as Strong as they First Appear
your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys
If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort
n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right
you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights
kush nigga. pass it mon. certfied trapathon
last time you waked n baked..your mom had you making cakes at the crack of dawn
your verse is a bland ballad of ass. plus noones likin the meter
We'll Give u a Pat on the Back wen u Decide to Leave the Plain Behind like a skydiving procedure

No Country for Rode Men

a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough
every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month
i'm like the killer in a slasher way i have the knife etch ya
after i put the blade thru ur face there'll be No Trace of it left.. Mike Wrecka
u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency
u'll always be broke. u becomin rich aint even on the docket
we'll never see Loose change His Tune unless his rent's jinglin in his pocket
natural Hush with the ladies. any 2 is down for some action
he rolls up & says 'Let me holla at yall' then proceeds to sound like a faggot
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse
i'm top tier as can be. this battle's like Dizaster vs. Canibus
there's No Debate regardin ur tier too. Hush & Bags both have u unanimous

Packed Graves · 11-03-2014, 10:51 PM

Opener was fire, current was decent flip, pop flys, x wing hahahaha, I liked this verse wording was clean & creative aspects. One of the better verses in the tournament so far. The misses weren't bad came off as light jabs he punches where nice though with 2 haymakers.

Vs

Muffs post, booty call, loose change, footloose, you had some nice bars as well definitely a good verse here. Just some of your misses were bad & kind of hindered your verse.

Better consistency & overall verse = first guy

Destroyer · 11-04-2014, 10:27 PM

I got loose booty pause
nah but he had a more consistent verse and went more at his opponent
I felt that other dude had too many references to site members I mean he dropped hush's name twice and shit

v/lb

BROKE LESNAR · 11-05-2014, 08:05 AM

im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick - lotb
your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys
If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort - lotb
n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right
you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights
your verse is a bland ballad of ass. plus noones likin the meter
We'll Give u a Pat on the Back wen u Decide to Leave the Plain Behind like a skydiving procedure

vs.

a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough
every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month
u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency - lotb
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse

*erased Loose Change bar, I wanted to keep that so it makes it 5-5.

Really dope battle. Best battle I've read so far. Loose had a cpl bars that suffered from having more emphasis on his second line than his first. The setups just came across as filler to get him through the bar until his punchline and that hurt. With Country I would say that his bars were complete from setup to closer and worded extremely well for maximum effect. My only gripe is that he didn't have enough lotb-esque haymakers. Loose had creativity in his favor while country had the better structured verse but if I go by lotb's I would give it to Loose.

v-Loose

Allen Knight · 11-06-2014, 04:19 PM

popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick
your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys
If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort

Vs

u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse

V/LB, this was a close one tbh tied in quotes but, lb ones i quoted hit really hard.
gold dust was dope, ncfrm had some cool shit to, but i felt LB had more haymakers
honestly could go either way cuz this is close as fuck. but vote LB

Unfukwitable · 11-06-2014, 05:09 PM

im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick
i tell nutin but truth. im tact n im pious
not actin all biased..but u cant be a movie Buff if ur 5'2 w/ atrophied biceps
n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right
you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights

vs.

a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough
every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month
u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse

Felt one had the stronger overall verse & I liked the wording better a couple nice concepts on both sides props... v/Bootyy

11-07-2014, 07:20 AM

im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick

this was straight...

your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys

lol this was nice...

If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort

this was cool...

vs

ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency

i fucks with this...

u'll always be broke. u becomin rich aint even on the docket
we'll never see Loose change His Tune unless his rent's jinglin in his pocket

lol this was ok...

This was a pretty decent battle. I got Loose with the victory, tho. HIs punches were a lot more creative and smooth. His misses weren't as bad either, they were still connecting. So I got it 3 and 2 in quotes, so with that being said...

Loose got it...

10-27-2014, 05:32 PM	#1
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	No Country for Rode Men vs Loose Booty - LOOSE WINS Netcees Alias Tourney Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Saturday, November 1st 2014 11:59 PM PST. Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Thursday, October 30th 2014 Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first First to 7, win by at least two votes Good luck!

11-03-2014, 10:51 PM	#7
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777844	Opener was fire, current was decent flip, pop flys, x wing hahahaha, I liked this verse wording was clean & creative aspects. One of the better verses in the tournament so far. The misses weren't bad came off as light jabs he punches where nice though with 2 haymakers. Vs Muffs post, booty call, loose change, footloose, you had some nice bars as well definitely a good verse here. Just some of your misses were bad & kind of hindered your verse. Better consistency & overall verse = first guy __________________ back

11-06-2014, 04:19 PM	#10
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,168 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys" but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort Vs u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse V/LB, this was a close one tbh tied in quotes but, lb ones i quoted hit really hard. gold dust was dope, ncfrm had some cool shit to, but i felt LB had more haymakers honestly could go either way cuz this is close as fuck. but vote LB __________________ C.O.B

11-06-2014, 05:09 PM	#11
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick i tell nutin but truth. im tact n im pious not actin all biased..but u cant be a movie Buff if ur 5'2 w/ atrophied biceps n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights vs. a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse Felt one had the stronger overall verse & I liked the wording better a couple nice concepts on both sides props... v/Bootyy __________________ WICKeD

10-27-2014, 07:49 PM	#2
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Loose Booty is in for 14

10-27-2014, 07:55 PM	#3
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	No Country is in for 16

11-01-2014, 05:16 PM	#4
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Loose Booty needs an extension

11-03-2014, 01:01 AM	#5
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	no country grants ext

11-03-2014, 10:37 PM	#6
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Loose Booty yo..so you like cinema eh? im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick i tell nutin but truth. im tact n im pious not actin all biased..but u cant be a movie Buff if ur 5'2 w/ atrophied biceps I disperse the fear..its clear ur the worst in here U think your verses are Current? nah...they Not as Strong as they First Appear your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys" but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights kush nigga. pass it mon. certfied trapathon last time you waked n baked..your mom had you making cakes at the crack of dawn your verse is a bland ballad of ass. plus noones likin the meter We'll Give u a Pat on the Back wen u Decide to Leave the Plain Behind like a skydiving procedure No Country for Rode Men a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month i'm like the killer in a slasher way i have the knife etch ya after i put the blade thru ur face there'll be No Trace of it left.. Mike Wrecka u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency u'll always be broke. u becomin rich aint even on the docket we'll never see Loose change His Tune unless his rent's jinglin in his pocket natural Hush with the ladies. any 2 is down for some action he rolls up & says 'Let me holla at yall' then proceeds to sound like a faggot his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse i'm top tier as can be. this battle's like Dizaster vs. Canibus there's No Debate regardin ur tier too. Hush & Bags both have u unanimous

11-05-2014, 08:05 AM	#9
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick - lotb your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys" but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort - lotb n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights your verse is a bland ballad of ass. plus noones likin the meter We'll Give u a Pat on the Back wen u Decide to Leave the Plain Behind like a skydiving procedure vs. a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency - lotb his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse *erased Loose Change bar, I wanted to keep that so it makes it 5-5. Really dope battle. Best battle I've read so far. Loose had a cpl bars that suffered from having more emphasis on his second line than his first. The setups just came across as filler to get him through the bar until his punchline and that hurt. With Country I would say that his bars were complete from setup to closer and worded extremely well for maximum effect. My only gripe is that he didn't have enough lotb-esque haymakers. Loose had creativity in his favor while country had the better structured verse but if I go by lotb's I would give it to Loose. v-Loose

11-07-2014, 07:20 AM	#12
Obnoxious Guest Posts: n/a	im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick this was straight... your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys" but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys lol this was nice... If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort this was cool... vs ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency i fucks with this... u'll always be broke. u becomin rich aint even on the docket we'll never see Loose change His Tune unless his rent's jinglin in his pocket lol this was ok... This was a pretty decent battle. I got Loose with the victory, tho. HIs punches were a lot more creative and smooth. His misses weren't as bad either, they were still connecting. So I got it 3 and 2 in quotes, so with that being said... Loose got it...