Creepshow vs wait. - OPEN FOR VOTES - CREEPSHOW WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Alias Tourney

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Saturday,
  November 1st 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Thursday, October 30th 2014
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

First to 7, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

[Sharp]

wait is in for 12

[Sharp]

creepshow is in for 12

[Sharp]

Creepshow sent 12

[Sharp]

Wait. Has asked for ext

[Sharp]

wait.



ur to slow to box w/ me, punches hurt wen they land
faggit u could never hit W-2 times w/ out gettin worked w/ the hands
i break the head boards w/ ur moms, pussy gets beat yo
the way i made her body bend in Odd contortions shes sucha Freak-Show
i'll disassemble ur limbs in this homi n leave ur spine split
gouge out CSI & dump the rest of his body in acid so forensics cant find it
u in the survivor torney? LOL plz, ur wack as shit slut
cause C-lo in the ranks & it'll be a roll of the dice if he ever gets picked up
i got bitches screaming my name in 3sums..cause i beat long
shit u wouldnt hear 3 bitches yell Creep doin a cover of a fuckin TLC song
ground & pound ur skull to ash, destroyin ur weak mouth
the damage i did to Creeper swing'll have doctors in the ER freaked out


Creepshow

chicks is eager to fuck wit da gawd n beg to screw
if a bitch tells u she cant Wait, its only cuz she's brushing off her date with u
admit it man ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
ur family's estate has a Barrenness even COBRA wouldn't consider an asset
im at a trap stackin hunnids while he underachieve
cuz the only money on Wait table, is from the lousy tips his customers leave
n u got dreadful taste in women so we're not misled
nigga the last time u followed ur heart, it brought u to Silver's hotness thread
real gangsters dont mess with ur hack town n state
the hood recognize this g about as much as fresh in the background debate
u scrawny faggot, ur a bag of bones to disembowel
Wait problems so bad, Seadad n Destroyer's dogs r scrapping over him now

[Packed Graves]

Freak show, CSI, TLC, your bars came off a little choppy or rushed. Feel you could have had some haymakers with the nameplays just don't think you capitalized. Not a bad verse but decent showing.

Vs

Can't wait was nice, cobra, Silver thread, recognize a G, not a bad verse good mix of nameplays & current events. The recognize a G line was probably LOTB. Not much to critique really except wording could use a little help.


CreepShow

[El Muffin]

wait

lol csi n tlc were dope af

freak show was ok




^that bar was kinda worded strange..specifically the tail end of the punch iono

didnt like W2..or closer

clo was ok



creepsho

opener
cobra
wait table
didnt like dg line

but fresh line was lotb

i got creepsho with better hits tbh



v creep

so obv who u both are lol

[~RustyGunZ~]

Originally Posted by Sharp

wait.



ur to slow to box w/ me, punches hurt wen they land
faggit u could never hit W-2 times w/ out gettin worked w/ the hands
i got bitches screaming my name in 3sums..cause i beat long
shit u wouldnt hear 3 bitches yell Creep doin a cover of a fuckin TLC song

I did the c-lo and CSI in the past, these weren't solid flips. whole verse had sloppy wording. seemed rushed.

Creepshow

chicks is eager to fuck wit da gawd n beg to screw
if a bitch tells u she cant Wait, its only cuz she's brushing off her date with u
admit it man ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
ur family's estate has a Barrenness even COBRA wouldn't consider an asset
im at a trap stackin hunnids while he underachieve
cuz the only money on Wait table, is from the lousy tips his customers leave
n u got dreadful taste in women so we're not misled
nigga the last time u followed ur heart, it brought u to Silver's hotness thread
real gangsters dont mess with ur hack town n state
the hood recognize this g about as much as fresh in the background debate

solid verse

v/Creepshow

[Destroyer]

got creepshow here, he just had more hits
though I did like the tlc punch from the first dude, that shit hit
the barrenness punch was fire as fuck also
but creep takes it on consistency

v/creepshow

[Red Soldier]

Freakshow, CSI,

Vs

Date w/ you, cobra, wait table, hotness thread

V/Creep... Consistency

ur to slow to box w/ me, punches hurt wen they land
faggit u could never hit W-2 times w/ out gettin worked w/ the hands

good...

i'll disassemble ur limbs in this homi n leave ur spine split
gouge out CSI & dump the rest of his body in acid so forensics cant find it

nice...

i got bitches screaming my name in 3sums..cause i beat long
shit u wouldnt hear 3 bitches yell Creep doin a cover of a fuckin TLC song

dope...

You OD'd on the name plays, tbh. Got a little redundant but overall not a bad drop. I enjoyed the read.

vs

admit it man ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
ur family's estate has a Barrenness even COBRA wouldn't consider an asset

dope...

im at a trap stackin hunnids while he underachieve
cuz the only money on Wait table, is from the lousy tips his customers leave

dope...

n u got dreadful taste in women so we're not misled
nigga the last time u followed ur heart, it brought u to Silver's hotness thread

lmao...

real gangsters dont mess with ur hack town n state
the hood recognize this g about as much as fresh in the background debate

good.

You dropped some solid bars. I have to say you took this by a pretty comfortable margin. Even your misses landed nicely, tbh. Cool battle, fellas. Keep writing.

v/Creep - consistent with some solid bars.