11-16-2014, 11:53 PM | #1 |
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11-17-2014, 03:58 PM | #2 |
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11-19-2014, 06:37 PM | #3 | |
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pussy- you're Rusty so you won't cook me but if u Gnawed off...then you might win if you pull a Spooky swear imma smack the nerd off this geeky fool so bad that this fag will finally know what it's like to be cool no one's claimin u hot- please stop it hoe anyone sayin Eon'n poppin surely means at least that long ago accept it dude- ur done but'ts goin get worse u barely Hanging On, so when i step on u i pray u plunge head first fuck ur Plight- now ur life's really sad'n harsh cuz to win these braggin rights u'd need more than a Million Man March u'll read this verse n c ur finished as a member bet u smash ur phone n break thru ur screen like a p'rimeter defender w/ those lines u Generate u should move on cuz that type of Generation reminds me of one that's dead n gone life's hard, but it ain't idiom whn i knock off this bum if i say it's Real'n the Field..it'll b this nerd laying w/ limbs sawed off in one Last edited by Blanco Bishop; 11-21-2014 at 02:59 PM. |
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11-20-2014, 02:41 AM | #4 |
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Bish please! Your a clear textcee flipper and the usual clone
lines are so played to death. His audios vybe at funera homes A savy vet from the glory days of text, you just revive it as a bitter shmuck You were part of a golden reign last week, then Defiant pulled his zipper up sick from start to finish like Tom Hanks in Philadelphia, while dudes whack style is such a comedy of failures it could be on Orange is the new black Boyband lovin' Diva is taking selfys in homeless shelters, a joke & crime your such a dirtperson. Ya Holla Vids show off Homeland more than Showtime Just quit. Seriously. this garbage-effortless style must die slowly Blancos so half-assed his viral twerk uploads are shot right side only Real talk tho .25 cent a day for your ghetto cause is noble holmes Want a trailor of Hunger Games? Watch him trick or treat @ #mobile homes your verse has a clear path... that could ruin the NBA pace of play So If your Down in the dumps? I need a planeticket & place to stay SWAG? Rockin Baby gay graphic tees & skinny jeans is appaling apparell Your drive to success could restart a Total Recall like Colin Farrell Last edited by E Tha Real; 11-21-2014 at 04:05 PM. |
11-20-2014, 07:04 PM | #5 |
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11-21-2014, 12:33 AM | #6 |
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11-21-2014, 01:12 AM | #7 |
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Yeah. Ext sir. Thanks bro.
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11-21-2014, 03:00 PM | #8 |
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11-23-2014, 11:34 PM | #9 |
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e the real took this easily.
golden reign was decent, played to death was played af but all in all e was a lot more consistent so he gmv |
11-24-2014, 11:09 AM | #10 |
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pussy- you're Rusty so you won't cook me
but if u Gnawed off...then you might win if you pull a Spooky How would he win if he bit? This made no sense, tbr. swear imma smack the nerd off this geeky fool so bad that this fag will finally know what it's like to be cool What? no one's claimin u hot- please stop it hoe anyone sayin Eon'n poppin surely means at least that long ago Cool name play even tho I've seen these done a lot @Muff, haven't we? LOL. But you could have even worded/executed this a lot more creatively and harsher. accept it dude- ur done but'ts goin get worse u barely Hanging On, so when i step on u i pray u plunge head first Eh, I've seen this concept done a lot. This was barely a fresh enough twist to rock w/ it. fuck ur Plight- now ur life's really sad'n harsh cuz to win these braggin rights u'd need more than a Million Man March Think you could have gotten a lot more creative w/ this concept as well. Fell flat for me. u'll read this verse n c ur finished as a member bet u smash ur phone n break thru ur screen like a p'rimeter defender Bad simile. Ineffective as well as statement'ish. w/ those lines u Generate u should move on cuz that type of Generation reminds me of one that's dead n gone This was kind of like your 2nd bar. Stale. life's hard, but it ain't idiom whn i knock off this bum if i say it's Real'n the Field..it'll b this nerd laying w/ limbs sawed off in one This is probably your best bar, tbh. More of these would have been nice. And made more of an interesting and better read, bro. vs Bish please! Your a clear textcee flipper and the usual clone lines are so played to death. His audios vybe at funera homes Played concept but tied w/ a personal, I see and actually worked in your favor. So guess I can say this was effective. A savy vet from the glory days of text, you just revive it as a bitter shmuck You were part of a golden reign last week, then Defiant pulled his zipper up Lol, not sure why I found this funny but cool, I suppose. sick from start to finish like Tom Hanks in Philadelphia, while dudes whack style is such a comedy of failures it could be on Orange is the new black Nah... Boyband lovin' Diva is taking selfys in homeless shelters, a joke & crime your such a dirtperson. Ya Holla Vids show off Homeland more than Showtime I think you could have did more with this concept. Didn't like the execution. Seemed like a fake personal, IMO. Unless this dude posted some type of video in disc that I haven't seen or heard about since I'm unable to see what's posted in their because Certain is a faggot. Just quit. Seriously. this garbage-effortless style must die slowly Blancos so half-assed his viral twerk uploads are shot right side only A half assed concept, bro? in 2014? Co'monnnnnnnnn. I"m sure in your glory days wayy back when these were done to death, my G lol. Real talk tho .25 cent a day for your ghetto cause is noble holmes Want a trailor of Hunger Games? Watch him trick or treat @ #mobile homes Eh.. Think you could have did more with this. Was kind of corny for me. your verse has a clear path... that could ruin the NBA pace of play So If your Down in the dumps? I need a planeticket & place to stay This was alright, I guess. SWAG? Rockin Baby gay graphic tees & skinny jeans is appaling apparell Your drive to success could restart a Total Recall like Colin Farrell Not a fan of simile's unless they are dope ones, and this one was ehhh... Think you could have did more w/ it if you kept it as a metaphor, IMO. OVERALL: I really haven't checked BB out much, but from what I have seen from him previously, I thought he was better then this. I'm not sure if he underestimated his opponent or what but his verse was kind of stale for me. I think his Eo'n Line and Closer were his best attempts and even those could have been executed a lot better and harsher. E seems to still be shaking rust but had a little more effective punches, IMO. Opener landed nicely, since I just finished reading BB's verse and thought to myself, his style is more of on the old school basic style. Golden reign was ok'ish and that could have been touched up on, Dirtperson had potential but fell flat, down in the dumps was weird but ok at best. Rest was just clown attempts which some were ok and some were bad. I think if he shakes the rust off he'll do just fine but IMO edges this battle with just a tad bit better of a verse. v/E |
11-24-2014, 12:52 PM | #11 |
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Blanco, what happened bro? Your previous verses are wayyyyy better than this. Looks like you're takin tips from Muzzle. Only bar I thought had any potential here was the Million Man March...with that reworded it could've been dope.
E....Funeral homes and Mobile Home were kinda cool. Otherwise you had some cool concepts just worded awkwardly. Shake that rust off, homie! Vote / E |
11-24-2014, 07:13 PM | #12 |
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yea i think bb underwhelmed here
only had like 4 lines i liked i think e was aight. i like his setups. had like 6 lines i liked v/e
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11-24-2014, 07:13 PM | #13 |
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yea i think bb underwhelmed here
only had like 4 lines i liked i think e was aight. i like his setups. had like 6 lines i liked v/e
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11-26-2014, 04:33 AM | #14 |
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Vs. Zipper up, mobile homes Thought blanco could have done way more than what he had posted but I got E just taking this with better attempts best bar was the defiant line..
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11-28-2014, 06:24 PM | #15 |
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Blanco had the break through screen concept but didn't use it properly, had potential, rest just wasn't feeling, there's ideas/concepts, just poor execution
Felt E just had a better grasp of wording his punches and got this W V/E |
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