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Old 11-07-2014, 02:17 PM   #1
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    November 12th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
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  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

First to 5, win by at least two votes
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Old 11-07-2014, 04:58 PM   #2
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Womb Raider is in for 14
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Old 11-10-2014, 09:26 AM   #3
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Tony checked in before the deadline, I was asleep
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Old 11-11-2014, 10:04 PM   #4
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Old 11-12-2014, 02:32 PM   #5
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Womb Raider

Idk what you’re trying to Prove, it’s fact ya career’s starting to fall
Success speaks for itself…& ya verse is the inspiration for Hush’s ‘lemme holla at yall’
Ya lines are Run Down. Beat me? Hope you’re relyin on the throttle
Cuz the odds aren’t just Stacked against you, they have Neighbor buyin by the bottle
Plus he never gets pussy, no girl invites this bitch inside
…….Soon as she’s in the mood he’ll Jukebox like it’s 1965
Wanna box? I got punches that’ll leave ya limbs swollen & seized
Cuz I’ll Throw Hands til you change color and drop dead like Foliage leaves
If you show w/ Everything You Have you’ll win. Do you believe that, really tho?
Because dog I’ll just make some shit up & come out on top like a Seadad video
He’s used to Embarrassment since in bed he only lasts a minute
But this battle will make such an Acetone you’d think I worked in the Plastic business


Tony Nohandstho

this cat's pussy...when he faces Tone, he'll see I drop those bombs
I'll leave womb so bloody & ripped... call it the return of the octomom
Tony gets mad ass, prolly hit ten or twelve bad bitches in a day
but stitched into a black hat is the only way this Raider's seein L.A.
tries to dip when i'm comin, cuz dude's shook so let this be known
he steady stay looking for the dash... like hush making his latest video
but Tone throws jabs so solid that he never fears the competition
leave womb's chin so swole, he could battle for the site's conspiracy theorist position
Tone will beat ur clothes off, leave u weak, bloody & naked, ho
I 'cast raider' as a guy with no dick, then become that, and make it so
u can't throw hands w/no hands, ur a testament to shattered will
I put an end to womb's hopes like I'm the fucking morning after pill
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Old 11-12-2014, 03:46 PM   #6
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Idk what you’re trying to Prove, it’s fact ya career’s starting to fall
Success speaks for itself…& ya verse is the inspiration for Hush’s ‘lemme holla at yall’
Plus he never gets pussy, no girl invites this bitch inside
…….Soon as she’s in the mood he’ll Jukebox like it’s 1965
Wanna box? I got punches that’ll leave ya limbs swollen & seized
Cuz I’ll Throw Hands til you change color and drop dead like Foliage leaves
He’s used to Embarrassment since in bed he only lasts a minute
But this battle will make such an Acetone you’d think I worked in the Plastic business


fkn died at the bold

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Tone will beat ur clothes off, leave u weak, bloody & naked, ho
I 'cast raider' as a guy with no dick, then become that, and make it so
u can't throw hands w/no hands, ur a testament to shattered will
I put an end to womb's hopes like I'm the fucking morning after pill

tony had a couple of hits that could have been much better if they had rhymed well for example let this be known..making his latest video...I liked that concept but the rhyme fucked it for me tbh.

opener was decent. quoteables were the last 4 lines imho

I think I got womb raider here

he dropped nice

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success, jukebox, foliage leaves and acetone was fire.

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morning after pill - and even that is a played concept but you tied it as a name play.

corny how both dudes had a hush video reference tbh.

i got womb taking this tho. more effective punches and worded cleanly imo.

v. womb
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Old 11-13-2014, 08:14 PM   #8
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Womb Raider

Idk what you’re trying to Prove, it’s fact ya career’s starting to fall
Success speaks for itself…& ya verse is the inspiration for Hush’s ‘lemme holla at yall’---------COOL

Ya lines are Run Down. Beat me? Hope you’re relyin on the throttle
Cuz the odds aren’t just Stacked against you, they have Neighbor buyin by the bottle
-----------------I DONT GET IT BUT WORDED WELL

Plus he never gets pussy, no girl invites this bitch inside
…….Soon as she’s in the mood he’ll Jukebox like it’s 1965
-------------------LMAOO AMAZING LINE

Wanna box? I got punches that’ll leave ya limbs swollen & seized
Cuz I’ll Throw Hands til you change color and drop dead like Foliage leaves
----------------DOPE

If you show w/ Everything You Have you’ll win. Do you believe that, really tho?
Because dog I’ll just make some shit up & come out on top like a Seadad video
-------------EH

He’s used to Embarrassment since in bed he only lasts a minute
But this battle will make such an Acetone you’d think I worked in the Plastic business
--------------DOPE NAMEPLAY


Tony Nohandstho

this cat's pussy...when he faces Tone, he'll see I drop those bombs
I'll leave womb so bloody & ripped... call it the return of the octomom
-----------DOPE

Tony gets mad ass, prolly hit ten or twelve bad bitches in a day
but stitched into a black hat is the only way this Raider's seein L.A.
--------------EH, KINDA AWKWARD

tries to dip when i'm comin, cuz dude's shook so let this be known
he steady stay looking for the dash... like hush making his latest video
--------------------OK

but Tone throws jabs so solid that he never fears the competition
leave womb's chin so swole, he could battle for the site's conspiracy theorist position
----------------I DONT GET IT

Tone will beat ur clothes off, leave u weak, bloody & naked, ho
I 'cast raider' as a guy with no dick, then become that, and make it so
------------HAHAHA OKAY

u can't throw hands w/no hands, ur a testament to shattered will
I put an end to womb's hopes like I'm the fucking morning after pill
-----------------DECENT


VERY DOPE BATTLE. BOTH CAME CORRECT BUT WOMB EDGED FOR ME WITH BETTER WORDING, FLOW AND LOTB WITH JUKEBOX. GREAT READ FELLAS

VOTE WOMB
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Old 11-17-2014, 02:49 AM   #9
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Opener vs octomom..pills..lookn to dash


Tone kind of took this handedly. Wasnt really feeling wombs wording. Maybe just not my style. Foliage leaves was corny to me. Dash bar was lotb.


Sooo

V tone. Aka mrda sho
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Old 11-17-2014, 11:52 AM   #10
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Womb Raider

Idk what you’re trying to Prove, it’s fact ya career’s starting to fall
Success speaks for itself…& ya verse is the inspiration for Hush’s ‘lemme holla at yall’ 7/10

Ya lines are Run Down. Beat me? Hope you’re relyin on the throttle
Cuz the odds aren’t just Stacked against you, they have Neighbor buyin by the bottle 10/10

Plus he never gets pussy, no girl invites this bitch inside
…….Soon as she’s in the mood he’ll Jukebox like it’s 1965 10/10

Wanna box? I got punches that’ll leave ya limbs swollen & seized
Cuz I’ll Throw Hands til you change color and drop dead like Foliage leaves 7/10

If you show w/ Everything You Have you’ll win. Do you believe that, really tho?
Because dog I’ll just make some shit up & come out on top like a Seadad video 5/10

He’s used to Embarrassment since in bed he only lasts a minute
But this battle will make such an Acetone you’d think I worked in the Plastic business 10/10




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Tony Nohandstho

this cat's pussy...when he faces Tone, he'll see I drop those bombs
I'll leave womb so bloody & ripped... call it the return of the octomom 7/10

Tony gets mad ass, prolly hit ten or twelve bad bitches in a day
but stitched into a black hat is the only way this Raider's seein L.A. 10/10

tries to dip when i'm comin, cuz dude's shook so let this be known
he steady stay looking for the dash... like hush making his latest video 10/10

but Tone throws jabs so solid that he never fears the competition
leave womb's chin so swole, he could battle for the site's conspiracy theorist position 7/10

Tone will beat ur clothes off, leave u weak, bloody & naked, ho
I 'cast raider' as a guy with no dick, then become that, and make it so 5/10

u can't throw hands w/no hands, ur a testament to shattered will
I put an end to womb's hopes like I'm the fucking morning after pill 7/10




46
49/46 Womb. He just had that one extra 10 that helped get him over. The Jukebox line was lotb. Without that he would have opened it for Tony to win. Tony came strong too. His Raiders cap concept was dope. Just as dope as the Jukebox bar.

v-Womb Raider
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Idk what you’re trying to Prove, it’s fact ya career’s starting to fall
Success speaks for itself…& ya verse is the inspiration for Hush’s ‘lemme holla at yall’
Ya lines are Run Down. Beat me? Hope you’re relyin on the throttle
Cuz the odds aren’t just Stacked against you, they have Neighbor buyin by the bottle

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tries to dip when i'm comin, cuz dude's shook so let this be known
he steady stay looking for the dash... like hush making his latest video
Tone will beat ur clothes off, leave u weak, bloody & naked, ho
I 'cast raider' as a guy with no dick, then become that, and make it so


first dude has slicker hits. more umph. better punches better concepts. fresher ideas

he edges it in all ways
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