06-01-2015, 06:22 PM | #1 |
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Finals: Junto vs Tic - JUNTO WINS
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06-03-2015, 01:50 AM | #3 |
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Both of us real busy the past couple days... rather make it good than punctual We'll be postin up by Thursday 11:59 PM Pacific Last edited by Junto; 06-04-2015 at 02:43 AM. |
06-05-2015, 01:24 PM | #4 |
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He'll cross dress in the mirror, this fag accepts the penis
He thinks if he carries a Perseus God...& prob takes more head than he did Girls avoid him at all costs, they leave this lamest guy vanquished It's sad. The last bitch to Scoop J was doin his name in sign language Text is Art & ya concepts are Drawn Out, it's hot joints you lack So voters don't need me to put it in Perspective when Everything Points to wack I abuse kids. I beat you once now ya girl is next; I'm hittin it raw sargeant 'N The way I Duggar Pussy Out could have their brother acquitted of all charges I'm Giving you death, trusttt you won't get outta this massacre When these shots Light You Up quicker than Akon giving solar power to Africa I'm a respectable guy but yo this fuckin dude is a poser So when I put the toast to this veteran, trusttt I'm not salutin a soldier @Junto Last edited by Tic; 06-08-2015 at 04:37 PM. |
06-05-2015, 07:57 PM | #5 |
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this The Long Night for u, cuz in our Game of Thrones I'm meant for the crown But u wont be killin no White Walkers... after this u'll just push a gray steel one for gettin around Place been plagued wit dickriders lately, but hey, I'm sure your mind's at ease Unfuck & Amen last round tho? ain't hard to tell it was Tic that brought the Lime disease You get hype G, I'll come to your crib... and I bet that you won't like me Take u out on the back deck... & stain it a nice mahogany - somethin special for the wifey You got potential - I seen & said it - but you're too green to be respected & the way I smoke u b4 ur flowering stage... Hush'll prolly offer his lotto winnings for my secret method Yo you a pimp? That's legend nowhere, Gettin ass an obstacle for you When girls see you from a distance... they try to double it as fast as possible my dude I'm plottin wit the 12 gauge boy. Honestly it ain't no toy... That high caliber 'slaps tic'... & send em flyin out the window - Now that's some comedy that I enjoy |
06-05-2015, 09:45 PM | #6 |
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NiggAs I got the stank face on right now
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Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 06-05-2015 at 09:47 PM. |
06-08-2015, 05:49 AM | #7 |
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Tic Tac:
Thought you had a strong start. The Perseus line was a dope concept. Scoop J was nice, prob my fav line honestly, just had a good structure and hit hard to me. The Duggar line was a solid concept, I thought you could have ended the concept in a better way, but still it hit for me. I didn't quote the Akon line, because Light You Up is a pretty overused concept, even if you do flip it with a current event. Basically felt the same way about your closer, the toast/gun flips have been done, and the veteran/soldier aspect wasn't complex enough to make me look past that. All in all, it was a solid verse, and the 1st 2 lines were dope. Scoop J was sick. The only real bad whiff imo was the Perspective line. Junto: The White Walker line was nice. Obviously Walker lines have been done a lot, but I haven't seen a lot of Game of Thrones lines, so I thought it was nice. The Tic/Lime disease line was pretty good too. Nice correlation, even if it's obvious, it's too perfect not to use. The distance line was pretty funny, good misdirection. The back deck line was kinda funny, but I just didn't think it connected very well. Flowering line was solid. I almost quoted the slaps tic line, thought it was a little too wordy and not executed as well as it could be. Still, fresh nameplay as far as what I've seen. This was a pretty nice battle. The way Tic started I thought for sure Junto wouldn't be able to beat it, but then he dropped his level after the 1st 2 bars. I think Junto was more consistently creative and humorous here.. and his misses weren't quite as bad, and were def more creative. Had Tic not used the Light You Up and Perspective lines, and had something a little more solid he could have grabbed my vote here. V/Junto Last edited by john hensley; 06-08-2015 at 05:51 AM. |
06-08-2015, 08:25 AM | #8 |
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Can you tell me the corrections to be made in your verse cause I think some weird characters showed up in place of your apostrophes. I'll take care of editing so it doesn't look shady or anything |
06-08-2015, 10:27 AM | #9 |
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WTF? Just voted and shit was deleted when I hit submit.
bLahhh... Just putting up the quotes and who I felt won. - Just tried to edit in my vote again, and it's not posting... JUNTO go it - EXPO'd the shit 2 times, and shit vanished. That's who I voted for... I'll PM expo if need be... Cause tried posting it twice and shit fucked up. Last edited by Glossy Finish Dick Lips; 06-08-2015 at 10:32 AM. |
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He’ll cross dress in the mirror, this fag accepts the penis
He thinks if he carries a Perseus God…& prob takes more head than he did I’m Giving you death, trusttt you won’t get outta this massacre When these shots Light You Up quicker than Akon giving solar power to Africa Vs this The Long Night for u, cuz in our Game of Thrones I'm meant for the crown But u wont be killin no White Walkers... after this u'll just push a gray steel one for gettin around Place been plagued wit dickriders lately, but hey, I'm sure your mind's at ease Unfuck & Amen last round tho? ain't hard to tell it was Tic that brought the Lime disease You got potential - I seen & said it - but you're too green to be respected & the way I smoke u b4 ur flowering stage... Hush'll prolly offer his lotto winnings for my secret method ^^^FIREEE V/junto, this was a good battle, but i think jun took it, that smoke shit was sick, almost quoted mahogany line it had swag, tics akon line was dopee, but i think jun was more consistent here, good battle. props to both |
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Yea..
Tic had, Duggar & Scoop J. Junto had, white walkers & Lime disease. Tic had 2 bars, which IMO were really weak; Perspective & the AKON reference, which I didn't like. Just fell flat. Junto had 1 bar, tht was weak; the discussion forum reference. Was to much of a karaoke type bar which seemed corny to me. With that being said, Junto was a little more consistent, which is why I voted for who I voted for. |
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Junto got this. Rep for voters and all battlers.
yo @Sharp I'm still gonna do a close up mag for this bro
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