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Old 04-21-2013, 11:37 PM   #1
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Feeling backed in? Light that back end and we get right back in
When pryde rappin its the same feeling you get when a dimes passin
Define action I've passed it, rhyme passionate
I had to spit cause my saliva is quite ac-idic
I been craftin it since bassinets, imagined it immaculate
I practiced it that's why every track you get ain't no half ass shit
I'm blastin it, slashin it crashin it and bashin it
I had to be the best because I couldn't define what average is
And as far as definitions I never found a good comparison for marriages
And there it is, conflicted heritage dealing with commited heretics
another bitch another pair of tits, so I could only be embarresed if
I didn't cherish it and ever since I've grabbed the bull by the horns, merill lynch

Every ho got a price boy ya mom would bang for a buck, i'm changing it up, see, cause I been saving it up
And dang you know what?
There ain't enough days in the month to say what I want
so I'm just, making this blunt like a haitian would want
This ain't a game or a stunt if I'm aiming the pump and it bang then you slumped
brazen young punk with some dank in the trunk and a thang by his nuts
I ain't making this up, this aint macys In the front
I pop off cause what I looks like waiting for you to jump



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Old 04-22-2013, 02:47 AM   #2
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Old 04-25-2013, 12:56 PM   #3
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@Pryde you should drop feed on other people's OMs if you expect to get feed man. Js.
Anyway this is a nice little flex here.
Define action I've passed it, rhyme passionate
I had to spit cause my saliva is quite ac-idic
I been craftin it since bassinets, imagined it immaculate
I practiced it that's why every track you get ain't no half ass shit
I'm blastin it, slashin it crashin it and bashin it
I had to be the best because I couldn't define what average is
^^Dope except for the blastin it line.
But definatly a good flex man. I haven't seen any other Oms from you but I'll peep any others that you drop just remember to feed others posts. Keep droppin.
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Old 04-29-2013, 09:07 PM   #4
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What's good pryde, ain't seen you around in a while

This was kind of simple imo. Had some cool lines and also had some really cliche shit in there to, like nothing that really caught me by surprise. A lot of predictable stuff. I know you ain't posted in a while so its probably just a little dust you need to shake off, but still glad you dropped. Keep being active man, we gonna get om poppin again

This phrase was dope as hell to me..
I been craftin it since bassinets,

That shit was really slick when I came accross it. Stay up
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