AOWL Week 10: fenix osiris (1-0) VS. Cereal_Killa (2-1)

[Split]

16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.)

Verses are due SATURDAY 4/23 at 11:59 PST.
Extensions are due SUNDAY 4/24 at 11:59 PST.
(There is a 6 hour grace period following the end of the extension deadline. If you fail to post anything by the end of the grace period time, you will be given the no show loss.)

You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links in the Voting Thread. For every absent vote, you will be deducted ONE vote next week.

Voting ends TUESDAY 4/26 at 11:59 PST. (Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.)

You MUST check in.

If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league.

NOTE
Swaying, excessive freeposting, voter fraud etc. are grounds for vote deductions at discretion of the moderators.
Editing your verse after the grace period, after your opponent posts, or after the first vote (especially this)- as well as biting- are grounds for disqualification at discretion of the moderators.

TOPIC:


"...it is like writing history with lightning and my only regret is that it is all so terribly true."
Woodrow Wilson


Good luck to both participants.

[Cereal_Killa]

G'L pilgrim..


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[Cereal_Killa]

"...it is like writing history with lightning and my only regret is that it is all so terribly true."
Woodrow Wilson

The Parrilla Of Barbarella

The value of shock can be weighed by its truth
As halo's still rot in the fingers of proof
..A slight sting.. ..A bruised pride..
Lightning doesn’t strike twice
It’s infinite through time

..
Pain now berths from a period of peace, pride and prosperity
Bane she perched, a bride bound to her balcony of brevity
Free it seemed of debris before but sure to breach, are her flaws
Art or War, an oil painting still bleeding her torment in awe
From a princess of purlieu to a prop on a pedestal
She drops from Belle to Barbie and then calls it a miracle
Her mind has altered from internal growth to outer beauty
Doubting her own beliefs, consumed and seized by this mounting duty
An unsoundly munich pact of death’s music moving BACK
Back in her mind playing her demise on the Palillo she claps
Hysteria patterns a patchwork quilt that she builds from guilt
Distilled on a pillar of puerility, B’s will now wilt’s
A waltz of pent up pestilence from pressure, too tense to vent
With force she’s ordered in a cage for women of insolence
Like hell and high lightning, her standoff nature turns violent
As scientist devise a vital device for the deviant
An electrical toy of conviction to gratify her needs
A stimulant stem of wires incased, to vibrate and please
Though her diseased mind at this time cannot fathom connection
The guards hold her down, massaging her clitoris.. To perfection
..

[King Ra.]

@fenix osiris

[fenix osiris]

yea i signed out of this. said i was focused on other shit. sorry. don't know why split put me in. i told him on aim, and said so in the sign in/out thread.