07-12-2015, 10:48 AM | #181 |
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yeah my bad man
I wasn't really upset at you my wife was all drunk last night and I had to deal w/that and on top of it I didn't get any crazy drunk sex that caused me to awake in a bad mood no worries man keep doing you |
07-12-2015, 10:54 AM | #182 |
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Lol be happy bro at least u got a wife lol ribbit camt even pull no bitches lol
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07-12-2015, 12:06 PM | #183 |
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07-12-2015, 12:13 PM | #184 |
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Exsqueeze me?
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07-12-2015, 12:41 PM | #185 |
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Ribbit a real nigga
He know my poem had heart
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07-12-2015, 01:14 PM | #186 |
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Lmao ribbits is cool peeps yo
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07-12-2015, 01:27 PM | #187 |
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Fecism...oh I know I'm dope biscuits
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07-12-2015, 06:53 PM | #188 |
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I think we should have a max line limit for this league. Poetry is about maximizing the content conveyed by your words. I think I line limit would encourage more editing and more creativity to express ideas in a constrained space.
Thought about this after looking at Hush vs. Destroyer. Both dropped good pieces in a short format. This might also be something that can distinguish the poetry league from the topical league where max lines is sort of the goal.
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07-13-2015, 06:57 AM | #189 |
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Lol not to be bitch er nothing but doesn't voting end on Sunday whybare these battles still open ???
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07-13-2015, 07:37 AM | #190 |
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Sorry @Witty. :(
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I thinl your battle is tied. Would you like a tie? Edit: Just saw frazez vote. @Vulgar should close battle later today, hopefully peeps get there votes in |
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07-13-2015, 10:59 AM | #193 |
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my bad on the lack of voting gentlemen
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07-13-2015, 11:06 AM | #194 | |
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@fraze, this is a valid point. I don't see why a line limit would encourage or discourage conciseness though. For me, personally, a line limit is daunting because it interferes with my stream of thoughts. If there is no wall in the distance, I won't be worried about going beyond limitations/parameters. I'd rather poetry have ultimate freedom of expression/length/etc. |
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07-13-2015, 11:31 AM | #195 |
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For example, if someone posted a short verse, say, 8 bars, and that shit was done perfectly; it's a super solid well written verse, flawless. Then, the other person post like 64 lines, unless that person is ass cheeks, you're bound to come up with enough material to kind of make it seem like that verse was better than the 8 bar verse. Nahmean!? |
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I feel you on this but tbh it go either way i mean you posted a short verse againts a long verse. Some peeps voted for you some didnt. All im saying theres really no reall way to know shich works better unless we try it. plus i think we are holding off on the line limit because eventually in the coming weeks we will try to introduce different poetry styles ie HAIKUS, SONNETS and so on. Most of if not all of those styles have a strict format that needs to be follwed to even be considered a haiku or sonnet. Think of these no limit weeks as a chance to go off. No restrictions. Plus ive run poetry leagues with line limits and the arguement is always Opposite of what we are discussing here. So..... |
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07-13-2015, 12:13 PM | #198 |
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Yeah, its one of those; Damned if you do, damned if you don't situations.
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07-13-2015, 12:29 PM | #199 |
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Word i dont see why we cant try it though.
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07-13-2015, 03:20 PM | #200 |
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@sraL I keyed that up in a few mins when I knew objective wasn't showing, thnx for the belief and the kick up the ass tho. I needed it.
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