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Old 07-12-2015, 10:48 AM   #181
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yeah my bad man
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my wife was all drunk last night and I had to deal w/that and on top of it I didn't get any crazy drunk sex
that caused me to awake in a bad mood
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Old 07-12-2015, 10:54 AM   #182
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Lol be happy bro at least u got a wife lol ribbit camt even pull no bitches lol
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Old 07-12-2015, 12:06 PM   #183
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ribbit, no hate but you have like a third grade reading level
please don't vote on any of my battles anymore
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when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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Old 07-12-2015, 12:13 PM   #184
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Old 07-12-2015, 12:41 PM   #185
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Old 07-12-2015, 01:14 PM   #186
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Lmao ribbits is cool peeps yo
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Old 07-12-2015, 01:27 PM   #187
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Old 07-12-2015, 06:53 PM   #188
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I think we should have a max line limit for this league. Poetry is about maximizing the content conveyed by your words. I think I line limit would encourage more editing and more creativity to express ideas in a constrained space.

Thought about this after looking at Hush vs. Destroyer. Both dropped good pieces in a short format. This might also be something that can distinguish the poetry league from the topical league where max lines is sort of the goal.
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Old 07-13-2015, 06:57 AM   #189
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Lol not to be bitch er nothing but doesn't voting end on Sunday whybare these battles still open ???
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Old 07-13-2015, 07:37 AM   #190
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@Objective @Witty @Hush @Destroyer

Hey fellas can we get some votes, i lnow husj already
Voted on one.
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Lol not to be bitch er nothing but doesn't voting end on Sunday whybare these battles still open ???
Correct but some battles need more votes.

I thinl your battle is tied. Would you like a tie?


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Just saw frazez vote. @Vulgar should close battle later today, hopefully peeps get there votes in
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Old 07-13-2015, 10:59 AM   #193
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my bad on the lack of voting gentlemen
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Old 07-13-2015, 11:06 AM   #194
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Lol not to be bitch er nothing but doesn't voting end on Sunday whybare these battles still open ???
This is an internet league, buddy. C'mon now.

@fraze, this is a valid point. I don't see why a line limit would encourage or discourage conciseness though. For me, personally, a line limit is daunting because it interferes with my stream of thoughts. If there is no wall in the distance, I won't be worried about going beyond limitations/parameters. I'd rather poetry have ultimate freedom of expression/length/etc.
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Old 07-13-2015, 11:37 AM   #196
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This is an internet league, buddy. C'mon now.

@fraze, this is a valid point. I don't see why a line limit would encourage or discourage conciseness though. For me, personally, a line limit is daunting because it interferes with my stream of thoughts. If there is no wall in the distance, I won't be worried about going beyond limitations/parameters. I'd rather poetry have ultimate freedom of expression/length/etc.
I feel you, but on the other hand, that shit can work against you.

For example, if someone posted a short verse, say, 8 bars, and that shit was done perfectly; it's a super solid well written verse, flawless.

Then, the other person post like 64 lines, unless that person is ass cheeks, you're bound to come up with enough material to kind of make it seem like that verse was better than the 8 bar verse.

Nahmean!?
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I feel you, but on the other hand, that shit can work against you.

For example, if someone posted a short verse, say, 8 bars, and that shit was done perfectly; it's a super solid well written verse, flawless.

Then, the other person post like 64 lines, unless that person is ass cheeks, you're bound to come up with enough material to kind of make it seem like that verse was better than the 8 bar verse.

Nahmean!?

I feel you on this but tbh it go either way i mean you posted a short verse againts a long verse. Some peeps voted for you some didnt. All im saying theres really no reall way to know shich works better unless we try it.

plus i think we are holding off on the line limit because eventually in the coming weeks we will try to introduce different poetry styles ie HAIKUS, SONNETS and so on. Most of if not all of those styles have a strict format that needs to be follwed to even be considered a haiku or sonnet.

Think of these no limit weeks as a chance to go off. No restrictions.
Plus ive run poetry leagues with line limits and the arguement is always
Opposite of what we are discussing here.

So.....
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Yeah, its one of those; Damned if you do, damned if you don't situations.
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Word i dont see why we cant try it though.

Your input is noted and thank you for showing interest in the league.

Please fellas feel free to voice your opinion on anything about this league.
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@sraL I keyed that up in a few mins when I knew objective wasn't showing, thnx for the belief and the kick up the ass tho. I needed it.
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