08-14-2015, 10:19 PM | #1 |
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08-25-2015, 01:29 AM | #2 |
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Blades'll slice up ur abdomens, it's nothin to carve homos..
We thrash heavy metal... with an axe shreddin midriff that's not a guitar solo. Al's food. get flayed and diced, cooked w/ a plate of rice. Remove his head and guts when Infil lay into Karp with a serrated knife. Sho bitched a/b that loss in playoffs after he seen votes plummet All that 'spark tha heat' talk yet you couldn't Arsenic - while he gave u a lethal dose of it. That L hurt you sooo bad, yet Sho’s a legend? Get murked w/ ether Ya Vet status has no Rhyme or Reason…which explains your loss to a verse w/ neither Karp tries to forget his L’s w/ out hubby, but I’m sure to remind dude… The past always Rears its Ugly Head, no matter how hard you try to put that Murda behind you Keep talkin ‘n I’ll extend the Tech, you're a fuckin bitch Sho, face it Strap on me. You'll hear a POP! Then Put my Arm Back into place like it was Dislocated! Karp champed in the past, but that hiatus hurt. Ya not gettin better, bro stop The parts just don't fit together like they used to...ya style mimics Caitlin Jenner post op Murda act gangsta online but I promise he's meek when around glocks Dog. When I put a gun to ya head, you'll resemble Wall Street when the DOW dropped
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08-25-2015, 09:34 PM | #3 |
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Yo Sho let’s talk to em…..
Make it known and break yall bones cuz Name’s droppin em We'll put yall limbs in more white casts then Craig Robinson Yall clowns is actin if you really think ya talents rappin I’m bound to snap when I throw Doh in the air like Calefaction I don’t care if ya last battle was ya best shit, this rounds ya death wish Talkin all that Jazz will get you tossed out faster than him on Fresh prince You think we stress this? we’re legends and never will fold Stop comparing boys II men cuz this The End of the Road Our teams strong, fuck these peons just be gone Yall some small fries YDK wouldn’t put cheese on We run businesses and get $, we ride for real yo Infiltraitor's idea of a silent partner is making Tic bite the pillow Tic a known mark with no heart, and more than futile Shit Infiltraitor couldn’t Celtic pride with Orcs approval They say yall are next up but I’ve already seen these guys fall Earn stripes? Nah yall hit the Waldo and now it'll be a struggle to find yall |
08-26-2015, 06:56 PM | #4 |
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Blades'll slice up ur abdomens, it's nothin to carve homos..
We thrash heavy metal... with an axe shreddin midriff that's not a guitar solo. This is ok Al's food. get flayed and diced, cooked w/ a plate of rice. Remove his head and guts when Infil lay into Karp with a serrated knife. I'm not connecting the infil lay part....is it a word play....inf fillet? Idk this was choppy....also karp flips like a fish r played Sho bitched a/b that loss in playoffs after he seen votes plummet All that 'spark tha heat' talk yet you couldn't Arsenic - while he gave u a lethal dose of it. Arse a nik?? Like maybe u shortened arsenal ? If that's wat it is....no one would ever say that? That L hurt you sooo bad, yet Sho’s a legend? Get murked w/ ether Ya Vet status has no Rhyme or Reason…which explains your loss to a verse w/ neither LOL this was funny cuz of that one bar nik had Karp tries to forget his L’s w/ out hubby, but I’m sure to remind dude… The past always Rears its Ugly Head, no matter how hard you try to put that Murda behind you Eh Keep talkin ‘n I’ll extend the Tech, you're a fuckin bitch Sho, face it Strap on me. You'll hear a POP! Then Put my Arm Back into place like it was Dislocated! Fire Karp champed in the past, but that hiatus hurt. Ya not gettin better, bro stop The parts just don't fit together like they used to...ya style mimics Caitlin Jenner post op Lol this is ok Murda act gangsta online but I promise he's meek when around glocks Dog. When I put a gun to ya head, you'll resemble Wall Street when the DOW dropped Nah Yo Sho let’s talk to em….. Lol ghey Make it known and break yall bones cuz Name’s droppin em We'll put yall limbs in more white casts then Craig Robinson Cast flips played as fuck Yall clowns is actin if you really think ya talents rappin I’m bound to snap when I throw Doh in the air like Calefaction Calefaction ain't been on the board in over 4 years.....an essentially this punch is....I'll throw Doh in the air like pizza makers. This shit so wack an played I just can't even begin. I don’t care if ya last battle was ya best shit, this rounds ya death wish Talkin all that Jazz will get you tossed out faster than him on Fresh prince Played as fuck. Lol. Wtf ya doin? Am I in a time machine? You think we stress this? we’re legends and never will fold Stop comparing boys II men cuz this The End of the Road Fresh as fuck. LOL SIZE THIS SHIT FUCKIN PLAYED. lmao. Wilin. Our teams strong, fuck these peons just be gone Yall some small fries YDK wouldn’t put cheese on This is the best punch yet...an it was only ok... We run businesses and get $, we ride for real yo Infiltraitor's idea of a silent partner is making Tic bite the pillow Eh Tic a known mark with no heart, and more than futile Shit Infiltraitor couldn’t Celtic pride with Orcs approval Finally. This was good. They say yall are next up but I’ve already seen these guys fall Earn stripes? Nah yall hit the Waldo and now it'll be a struggle to find yall Liked this too. Nice. First half of doh boys verse was choppy wordplays that didn't land to me ....2nd half had a couple....maybe 3 hitters....name pending first half was the most played shit I read on this site maybe ever. No hate. I'm dead serious. 2nd half again picked up steam at the end....but I think doh boys had one more quote an even those shitty wordplays were better then boys 2 men and pizza doe.bars. V doh boys |
08-28-2015, 07:03 AM | #5 |
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heavy metal, knife, ugly head
vs jazz, waldo this was pretty even.. same amount of lines i wasnt feeling in pop n jenner, pillow and end of the rd.. same amount of personals i didnt get.. so it came down to basically one more line i liked vote doh boys |
08-28-2015, 02:27 PM | #6 |
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was clear to me Alvin wrote that whole verse and it showed. just rusty as fuck imo
dislocated and rhyme n reason won this match vote: first team |
08-28-2015, 08:36 PM | #7 |
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That throw doh in the air calefaxtion bar killed me
Nobody got it but I did Karp wording was crisp and his shit was on point but simple at times and too straight forward The rust showed here Doh boys overworded a lot but had the better concepts and more creative ideas I got doh by a slim margin
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08-30-2015, 08:37 AM | #8 |
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Serrated knife, POP
Vs Celtic pride V/Tic n Inf. Not sure what happened to the other but there virtually no effort put into the verse.
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08-30-2015, 11:04 PM | #9 |
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Sho bitched a/b that loss in playoffs after he seen votes plummet
All that 'spark tha heat' talk yet you couldn't Arsenic - while he gave u a lethal dose of it. That L hurt you sooo bad, yet Sho’s a legend? Get murked w/ ether Ya Vet status has no Rhyme or Reason…which explains your loss to a verse w/ neither Karp tries to forget his L’s w/ out hubby, but I’m sure to remind dude… The past always Rears its Ugly Head, no matter how hard you try to put that Murda behind you Keep talkin ‘n I’ll extend the Tech, you're a fuckin bitch Sho, face it Strap on me. You'll hear a POP! Then Put my Arm Back into place like it was Dislocated! Vs You think we stress this? we’re legends and never will fold Stop comparing boys II men cuz this The End of the Road We run businesses and get $, we ride for real yo Infiltraitor's idea of a silent partner is making Tic bite the pillow V/doh boys, name didnt drop like there norm & i feel alvin wrote this whole verse but hes obv rusty tbh but i like the boys 2 men line idc i thought it was dope. but doh was just more consistent & dislocated bar was fire...props to both. |
08-31-2015, 03:22 AM | #10 |
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We thrash heavy metal... with an axe shreddin midriff that's not a guitar solo. Okay Al's food. get flayed and diced, cooked w/ a plate of rice. Remove his head and guts when Infil lay into Karp with a serrated knife. Cool Sho bitched a/b that loss in playoffs after he seen votes plummet All that 'spark tha heat' talk yet you couldn't Arsenic - while he gave u a lethal dose of it. Okay That L hurt you sooo bad, yet Sho’s a legend? Get murked w/ ether Ya Vet status has no Rhyme or Reason…which explains your loss to a verse w/ neither Lol Karp tries to forget his L’s w/ out hubby, but I’m sure to remind dude… The past always Rears its Ugly Head, no matter how hard you try to put that Murda behind you Cool Keep talkin ‘n I’ll extend the Tech, you're a fuckin bitch Sho, face it Strap on me. You'll hear a POP! Then Put my Arm Back into place like it was Dislocated! Cool Karp champed in the past, but that hiatus hurt. Ya not gettin better, bro stop The parts just don't fit together like they used to...ya style mimics Caitlin Jenner post op Okay Murda act gangsta online but I promise he's meek when around glocks Dog. When I put a gun to ya head, you'll resemble Wall Street when the DOW dropped Okay Make it known and break yall bones cuz Name’s droppin em We'll put yall limbs in more white casts then Craig Robinson Okay Yall clowns is actin if you really think ya talents rappin I’m bound to snap when I throw Doh in the air like Calefaction Eh I don’t care if ya last battle was ya best shit, this rounds ya death wish Talkin all that Jazz will get you tossed out faster than him on Fresh prince Lol cool You think we stress this? we’re legends and never will fold Stop comparing boys II men cuz this The End of the Road Solid Our teams strong, fuck these peons just be gone Yall some small fries YDK wouldn’t put cheese on Cool We run businesses and get $, we ride for real yo Infiltraitor's idea of a silent partner is making Tic bite the pillow Lol okay Tic a known mark with no heart, and more than futile Shit Infiltraitor couldn’t Celtic pride with Orcs approval Lool They say yall are next up but I’ve already seen these guys fall Earn stripes? Nah yall hit the Waldo and now it'll be a struggle to find yall Solid V second team |
08-31-2015, 07:00 AM | #11 |
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pretty much my thoughts too
that dislocate shit was madd nice LOL @ no rhyme or reason the boys II men just reads like it should be YEARS OLD but I've not seen it so I have to give that it's props small fries YDK ish was cool too I got first team winning too though phoning this vote in so sorry it's short just tryna help you guys out vote wise
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