10-16-2015, 07:42 PM | #261 |
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I'll try man. Just sucks to put so much time into a piece. Read it a few times to yourself and your friends/family, enjoy the piece then have people point out negatives in it. You'd think after ten years I'd be over that criticism lol.
I sent it at like five in the morning Pacific time lol.
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10-16-2015, 07:58 PM | #262 | |
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10-16-2015, 08:02 PM | #263 |
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Anyone who has any sort of competitive bone in their body will be pissed at each and every loss, I still am to this day, not at my opponent or the voters, pissed at myself for not doing enough for the win...I am super hard on myself lol
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10-16-2015, 08:04 PM | #264 |
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For sure. For sure. I also think people read our verses differently than we do, which is obvious. I think a Video Topical Tourney/Week would be dope. That way we can post the piece for people to read it but also hear us read it the way it was intended to be read.
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10-16-2015, 08:04 PM | #265 |
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Ditto.
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10-16-2015, 08:07 PM | #266 |
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Just target your weaknesses and work on it until they become your strengths.
I used to struggle with rhyme schemes, so I worked and worked at it until insanely complex schemes became the thing I was known for.
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10-16-2015, 08:14 PM | #267 |
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I'm posting topics tonight bro @rest of league. Get some votes for the champ match please and others. These are crucial battles, 2 out of three anyways. @Godcomplex @Witty @asylum @Flo Real @Anjahl @sacrifice @Certain @Rakontur @Frank @Vividlyvague @timeless @MMLP @2tripple0 @Richard Corey @Ullr @YDK @NYCSPITZ @taggingoffmemoryhatemelater Let's finish the week strong and hard like muh caulk
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10-16-2015, 08:22 PM | #268 |
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getting mine in soon.
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10-16-2015, 09:51 PM | #269 |
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white iverson.....
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10-16-2015, 09:52 PM | #270 |
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10-17-2015, 07:49 AM | #271 |
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10-17-2015, 07:53 AM | #272 |
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lol I don't think anyone gives two shits about me in this league........im not trying to cry for votes er anything but to lose week in and week out has become a bit crummy for a lack of a better word
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10-17-2015, 09:33 AM | #273 |
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Stay dude, you just need to start taking peoples advice and feedback in to account and work on your weaker points, work at it and you'll get there.
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10-17-2015, 09:34 AM | #274 |
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alright ill stay one more week er wateva but I just feel totally garnished at this point with ideas and shit........like theres a style I use in my raps/topicals.....and I don't feel it needs to be tampered with.....but if that's the general concent of the lyricists on this site I don't know id rather not participate.......I hope that doesn't sound frenetic er wateva
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10-17-2015, 09:49 AM | #275 |
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Just out of interest, have you been getting more votes/wins over in the league at RB?
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10-17-2015, 10:03 AM | #276 |
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its only been two weeks at the league in rb.......and I won the first battle with a ns opponent and this week witty is winning 1-0...... but no I get the same kind of feedback I get on this site.........just strange because I know what I like about my writing and others just feel it isn't dope enough for one reason or another.....but eghad I just want to write the way I like writing I don't feel like changing for anyone.....but aye like witty said Ill take others opinions into consideration but at this point I feel my rhyming is at a level that I don't see myself surpassing until the day I die at this point anyways......but aye I guess you gotta take your victories where you can
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10-17-2015, 10:19 AM | #277 |
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I dont think you should change
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