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Old 10-28-2015, 03:35 PM   #241
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Big deal he went some lines over. It's no different than stretching deadline dates so people can post their verses. Just have him delete a few lines, or just run with the battle.
There is that rule for a reason if it isn't going to be enforced why even have the rule? Also, if you knew Frank you would know that if you or I did the same thing or posted after the time, an extension essentially, he would call you on it. treat others as you will like to be treated because others will remember it. In fact, before the match he basically told me will not allow any extension for me. So, I will also not allow him to go over the line and word limit. And deleting and modifying your verse is not allowed at this point.

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Old 10-28-2015, 03:47 PM   #242
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Old 10-28-2015, 04:37 PM   #243
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There is that rule for a reason if it isn't going to be enforced why even have the rule? Also, if you knew Frank you would know that if you or I did the same thing or posted after the time, an extension essentially, he would call you on it. treat others as you will like to be treated because others will remember it. In fact, before the match he basically told me will not allow any extension for me. So, I will also not allow him to go over the line and word limit. And deleting and modifying your verse is not allowed at this point.
I gotcha, I understand where your coming from then. But in most cases I'd just let it slide. It'd be the same for due dates tbh which would fuck a lot of people if their wasn't such a leniency on it. Maybe it's just me but it's whatever, extra lines or due dates don't mean anything if you bring the better verse.
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Old 10-28-2015, 07:34 PM   #244
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I gotcha, I understand where your coming from then. But in most cases I'd just let it slide. It'd be the same for due dates tbh which would fuck a lot of people if their wasn't such a leniency on it. Maybe it's just me but it's whatever, extra lines or due dates don't mean anything if you bring the better verse.
just wait till you get to know frank lol

a couple weeks ago he went over the line limit and nothing happened. the following week his opponent went over the line limit and he tried to have him dq'd.

i actually thought he was gonna kill himself after the last L he took tho, guess we should all just be happy hes still around. if you take him with a grain of salt hes pretty entertaining
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Old 10-28-2015, 08:13 PM   #245
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Old 10-28-2015, 08:22 PM   #246
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I counted 710 lines which is 60 over 650 maximum line limit

Buddha rightfully had the choice to request DQ and thus is granted the victory
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Old 10-28-2015, 08:29 PM   #247
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just wait till you get to know frank lol

a couple weeks ago he went over the line limit and nothing happened. the following week his opponent went over the line limit and he tried to have him dq'd.

i actually thought he was gonna kill himself after the last L he took tho, guess we should all just be happy hes still around. if you take him with a grain of salt hes pretty entertaining
With the amount of salt you need to deal with Frank you're gonna end up with cardiac arrest.

To be fair I was only fucking with him on the line limit since he sharked me.
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Old 10-29-2015, 06:53 AM   #250
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Jesus fucking Christ, can't you guys just write a verse, within the line limits, and post it on time?

This shouldn't really be difficult.

You've done it for years.

I'm a grown man, married, with a full time job.

I help mod to help you guys out and give you a place to write competitively. I'm not a babysitter here to resolve your petty differences and attempts to get sneak wins over one another. That's childish shit. We shouldn't have to be making judgements like that week in and week out. You make this a bigger deal than it ever needs be.

Chill the fuck out with that shit.
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Old 10-29-2015, 11:01 AM   #251
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Emily groaned, as her Mother shook the thermometer, the silver mercury, jellington froze1
She inspects the cold thermometer with perplex, in woe - When it explodes, metallic splatter freckles her nose2
The Upstairs Bedroom Flickers from the sidewalk looking up... light bulb embers aglow3
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Feminine mope that fluctuates between whimpering and viciously screaming from the deepest depths of her throat6
Shrieking in a octave, swelling the node. Its voice isn't human - Demented in tone, the sound registers unknown in my temples lobe7
Bassy without treble: It spoke in espanol, ancient: ancestral menacing, troll-like tremblingly low.8
Demonic. The mother vomited on the Priests Shoes - Putridly, she bellowed on his soles.9
Decrepitly gross. All the while, Emily still is in the fight of her life for the possession of her soul.10
The Priest had seen enough, He cleaned off his heavenly robe as Emily rose from the bed with suspense in her toes.11
She dropped back to the bed and contorted her anorexic figure into a pretzeling pose.12
Her Mother, A devoted Catholic woman slapped Emily ferociously in attempt for her to get a hold13
Of herself. But she was back handed back with a supreme power that sent her reeling backwards, almost out of the window that never was closed14
Emily’s eyes are Blacker than the Cat that steps on the coal, in the living room by the fireplace: its eyes orientally doe.15
The Cat Jumps up on the bed purring, & Emily begins petting it slow16
The Priest considers unlocking the metal bolts, but he's hesitant though, understandably so: she isn't Well17
"Emily'' Mother says with a wretched tone: "Let it go!" - Emily is simply petting the cat without any bad intentions18
"Let it go!" The Priest looks at the mother absurdly - As if she is the one who needs an Exorcism19
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Emily groans, wrestling her own demons in the depth of her bones,
she ferally foams at the mouth yellowish throw-22
up - like basement mold residue, it simmers like boiling hot water when the kettle gets froze.23
"Never fret" The Priest gets on the phone - A maniac in shackles in the background: Emily Rose24
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"Hello"25
It is Saint Francis, The priest had to call his good friend, Especial - The Pope26
Emily Rose speaks disrespectfully: urinating, excrementing her clothes27
Emily Rose heckles the Pope - sticking her tongue out violently venomously so28
Green skin speckled like a leper, it spoke29
"Mother, Who Are All These people?" She says in English no longer in Espanol.30
Mother runs over as Emily begins talking pig Latin in a deadly medley provoked31
The Pope throws Holy Water at It, splashing the blessing32
Emily’s soaked, Its mannerisms become gentle, her shoulders no longer depressing and sloped33
Emily drones out looking around for her sanity, as a satanic force re-enters its host34
Tearing out her hair, dreadfully, Emily Yells wilder than A kennel that’s closed35
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Emily Rose had been diagnosed with Schizophrenia, they were told she was mentally slow:39
Her temper would grow until she became torrentially uncontrollable and detrimental to folks40
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The Pope notices the mother looking Rejected; Instrumental to the whole thing - it hides the medicine in its coat.43
Revenge in its motives, it revels in Emily’s groans - it endlessly loathes44

Parental control
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Better the devil you know, than the devil you don't 46
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I made it 4 lines in before thinking "Wait why doesn't this count as a line?" :D
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I made it 4 lines in before thinking "Wait why doesn't this count as a line?" :D
My thoughts exactly, lol.

No hard feelings Frank, rules are rules.
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My thoughts exactly, lol.

No hard feelings Frank, rules are rules.
Looks to be that's the one and only line he missed counting. So that would make 47, still one line short of the limit.

Battle should be opened and you should get over it bruh
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Pretty sure we're on week 14 so two more weeks then playoffs
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Pretty sure this is week 15 so next week would be the final week


And no timeless. A rule is to keep your verse under 650 words which he did not.

48 lines or 650

So you can't post 651 with out permission from competitor but you can go over 48 as long as it's less then 651. This has been known for years, how about not pushing the name of the rule. I'm done
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Looks to be that's the one and only line he missed counting. So that would make 47, still one line short of the limit.

Battle should be opened and you should get over it bruh
There's actually loads of examples he did it. He counts two lines as one line because it didn't have the scheme or something. Anyways, I don't really care. I was only winding him up since he tried to get me DQed for being like 4 lines over the other day.
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