Round 2 - Swerve vs. Wavy Crockett - {Wavy Crockett wins}

[Meth]

The Fall Brawl

Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max
If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop.
All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada)

Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one.

DUE DATE IS 10/28/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST

Need anything, let me know.

@Swerve @Wavy Crockett

[Swerve]

Check...I'll be back from vacation in time for this

[Wavy Crockett]

Hey girl

I'm thinking 16

[Wavy Crockett]

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I'll post a real one if u show

[Swerve]

I will be showing, post a real verse or take an extension.
@Wavy Crockett

[Swerve]

Crockett act’s tough, but when the steel is brandished near him,
Alcides player run for home quicker than Kansas City’s sacrifice fly for the win.
Step to swerve, I’ll crack your jaw with the tool in a bout,
You’ll see a Wav break that would make surfers drool at the mouth.
Take all the time you want bud, you aren’t coming near me,
Give you 11 hours, but its still a four gone conclusion like the Benghazi hearing.
Face it dude, you’re pussy whipped, now its past denial,
Way your girl got your stick on a chain could bring nunchucks back into style.
A sea of bullets will rain on your hood, take out your crew to start,
Then we’ll see a Wav pool in blood that would shut down an amusement park.

[Wavy Crockett]

AYO

Ur like 6'10 w/ absolutely nothin decent landin'
Every Punch is a Stretch, that explains why ur Angles always get the Reach Advantage.
He's leavin damaged cause the shots I'm carrying'll stop reality.
Smash & grab leave ya brain scattered throughout the street - that's a Mob Mentality
Ur girl <3's bukkake; that smelly bitch can't tell me shit
Just picture her takin' face shots from 3 feet away, no selfie stick.
Fuck whoever said u were staunch opposition, honestly ur awful w/ writtens.
Flip's not just looking drawn out; they're on their last legs & suffering from Saunders' condition
& I heard ur a flirty drunk, but a dirty fucker.
Cause whenever Swerve around the Box, he Tries to Avoid It then ends up Burning Rubbers.

[Meth]

Originally Posted by Swerve

Crockett act’s tough, but when the steel is brandished near him,
Alcides player run for home quicker than Kansas City’s sacrifice fly for the win.
--i was hoping i would allen knight soon so i could use an alcides play so fuck u. this was ok tho.
Step to swerve, I’ll crack your jaw with the tool in a bout,
You’ll see a Wav break that would make surfers drool at the mouth.
--ok as well.
Take all the time you want bud, you aren’t coming near me,
Give you 11 hours, but its still a four gone conclusion like the Benghazi hearing.
--nice
Face it dude, you’re pussy whipped, now its past denial,
Way your girl got your stick on a chain could bring nunchucks back into style.
--didnt love the angle, coulda done something more complex i think but its still solid
A sea of bullets will rain on your hood, take out your crew to start,
Then we’ll see a Wav pool in blood that would shut down an amusement park.
--ok

Originally Posted by Wavy Crockett

AYO

Ur like 6'10 w/ absolutely nothin decent landin'
Every Punch is a Stretch, that explains why ur Angles always get the Reach Advantage.
--haha i like this
He's leavin damaged cause the shots I'm carrying'll stop reality.
Smash & grab leave ya brain scattered throughout the street - that's a Mob Mentality
--like it
Ur girl <3's bukkake; that smelly bitch can't tell me shit
Just picture her takin' face shots from 3 feet away, no selfie stick.
--fire
Fuck whoever said u were staunch opposition, honestly ur awful w/ writtens.
Flip's not just looking drawn out; they're on their last legs & suffering from Saunders' condition
--god damn ive seen like 99999 flip flips in 48 hours lol. this is ok tho
& I heard ur a flirty drunk, but a dirty fucker.
Cause whenever Swerve around the Box, he Tries to Avoid It then ends up Burning Rubbers.
--ok. wording seemed weird. which is starnge for u since i think i know who u r

good battle

no misses

i think im just leaning wavy for lotb

sucks swerve has to lease with a verse like that in 2nd round

cool stuff

v/ crockett

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Swerve

Opener, Wav break, Benghazi, Wav pool.

Good verse, feel like the punches should have hit harder, but nothing was wack or weak.

Originally Posted by Wavy Crockett

Opener, selfie stick, Saunders, closer.

Nice drop, very effective due to polished wording, a minor problem would be the lack of personals.

Overall this was a pretty good to be such a short battle, but I'm giving it to WAVY CROCKETT, just felt he landed a bit heavier than Swerve.

[puravida]

Both started weak and then picked up as their verses progressed. I feel like one had fresher concepts that had some execution issues here and there, while the other had some very played concepts with solid delivery. This is close, and imo a toss up that could go either way. I'm gonna say one edged this with more creativity and a bit cleaner scheming,

vote / Wavy

[Useless]

Crockett act’s tough, but when the steel is brandished near him,
Alcides player run for home quicker than Kansas City’s sacrifice fly for the win.
--- I like the wp but the flip was a little long winded...cool bar tho....................
Step to swerve, I’ll crack your jaw with the tool in a bout,
You’ll see a Wav break that would make surfers drool at the mouth.
--- obv np but the flip is nice...cool bar...............
Take all the time you want bud, you aren’t coming near me,
Give you 11 hours, but its still a four gone conclusion like the Benghazi hearing.
--- I like this.................
Face it dude, you’re pussy whipped, now its past denial,
Way your girl got your stick on a chain could bring nunchucks back into style.
--- lol I like this................
A sea of bullets will rain on your hood, take out your crew to start,
Then we’ll see a Wav pool in blood that would shut down an amusement park.
--- obv np again but again I liked the flip...cool bar...............


Vs.


Ur like 6'10 w/ absolutely nothin decent landin'
Every Punch is a Stretch, that explains why ur Angles always get the Reach Advantage.
--- I've seen the reach/stretch angle a good bit but I liked the wording..................
He's leavin damaged cause the shots I'm carrying'll stop reality.
Smash & grab leave ya brain scattered throughout the street - that's a Mob Mentality
--- cool bar..................
Ur girl <3's bukkake; that smelly bitch can't tell me shit
Just picture her takin' face shots from 3 feet away, no selfie stick.
--- seen selfie stick a few times, I think cred did it first. Wording was good tho...............
Fuck whoever said u were staunch opposition, honestly ur awful w/ writtens.
Flip's not just looking drawn out; they're on their last legs & suffering from Saunders' condition
--- flip Saunders isn't on his last leg, he's dead lol. I liked this upon first read but when I actually thought about it that irked me for some reason....other than that this woulda been a cool flip on a concept I've seen done quite a few times in the past week or two. But I did it first in the bar fest, u just fuckin remember that...................
& I heard ur a flirty drunk, but a dirty fucker.
Cause whenever Swerve around the Box, he Tries to Avoid It then ends up Burning Rubbers.
--- swerve np's been done to death but the tie ins were good.......


Overall: I got swerve takin this. Neighbor just had too many concepts n flips I've seen done before. Swerves verse read smoother and just seemed cleaner overall to me.


V. Swerve