11-26-2015, 09:42 PM | #1 |
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Mag: Predicting
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As for this mag, all you receive is a prediction. ~Round Dos: Predictions~ GodComplex vs. MMLP Just about, as long as you have participated you have voted and contributed, this is true. While Buddha has produced the better work of art, MMLP has been able to produce 2/6 top verses of the season, meaning he is not just dust in the wind. God has been able to blow competition out of the water no matter who he faces, however MMLP has yet to show that head hunter balance GodComplex: 77% Mr. J vs. Asylum I have not read Asylum's verse, but judging purely off of character and track record my bet is it is polished. Mr. J has posted some bad verses in the past. This is known. I don't know if he has kept a gloss on his nails (another reference for polished) we doubt he can solve the equation of writing raw Asylum:54% Nigma vs. VividlyVague We have only read part of Vivids, and to be blunt, there is nothing needed en leu of editing. There is nothing needed in lieu of correcting. Meanwhile Nig has posted a booklet of reads that have scaled the best of this season. Though, I must add, for ever three great he has posted a bad, most likely no showed. I don't see a battle that is not close. Vivid: 50/50 Razah vs. Timeless Hmmmm, this is intriguing. If time can put forth a work of corrections and schemes he could swing an upset. However, if he can't swing and pass the fences he is vulnerable to being out wrote/written. Razah has been absent and is guranteed to drop below his best. Timeless: 61% Adonis vs. Vulgar I won. Just kidding, I don't have the time to explain V's verse but tis pure logic Bonus Battle: Mr. J vs. YDK You are each the read why I don't offer these battles in the post season, you have both made a mockery of ourselves. ~Outro~ You will receive a vote accompanied by a feed from round: one V/Will count and you will know via Ra gabble wabble mother bitch |
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11-26-2015, 11:51 PM | #3 |
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precipitous lines, I spit venomous. I'm
at my limit making a living, cuz I'm living to die. We're all whittling, I'm loitering and littering mind. My currencies are but the belittlements I scribble and scribe. So I'm rich with a fix for the sick and divine. I chuck bricks fulla scripts ta hit your glass crib fulla lies. I stayed stuck in the middle and can't get rid of the ties to low socioeconomic tenements where I'm spending my time. I breathe a little bit, then spit out the fire, the devil's a liar. He told me if I put my mind to it, then I'd live it, "But Sire! I can't do this shit! All I can do is conspire against the honest, then bomb them to fortify MY empire!"
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11-26-2015, 11:52 PM | #4 |
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dope "mag" tho. G/L to all participating...
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Get your bio-chemical weapon loaded or else be a defense rogue, who'll certainly be captured and get his senses probed. Cretin take a mental note, while I brand your soul. Salvation wise, I'm the man to know so expand your code before your preprogrammed and sold. I see that you think we American are foes, you silly anti-capitalist propaganda clone, globalism made the internet possible; the cybernetic light that trumps death's obstacles. The best logical conclusion to our differences, is to produce a solution to the sicknesses that makes you and I believe the illusion of significance. Simply put, human empiricism is not validated by choosing our egotism over the future of our organism. Knowing nothing at all is the Buddha mind's origin, the infinite gyroscope. The view of life is to desire a role, but I've forsaken it that's why I smile so cold. Vile in tone because I see my child defile his form. My style supports gigabytes of wisdom; I will live to die religious, no one can take my beliefs from me. If they do, that's like allowing them to re-numb me into an asleep zombie. I'm a viral proxy, that contaminates the inanimate via copies. My entire hobby is cultivating the eye of Ghandi, so I'll be kind and gauntly looking. But, I'm far from it, so instead I make ghastly music, described by do-gooders as the rap of mutants. That's because I'm trapped in ruin and all I know is how to do bad by looting, developing a cash empire through a gambling hubris, a habit that wounds me. Being little and materially lacking consumed me, so I became obsessed with the prospects of how to possess like a sorcerous. But, the prerequisite to manage the stress of success was popping percocets, until my adrenals burned to death. And my will became extinct like the tyrannosaurus rex. Now, I'm in bed, wondering where my life went. I then, think to myself how to be psychic and con others with the mind's depth. I walk and leave unseeable divine steps, revive the lives of those you thought you loss, then once again immortalize their flaws by a sacrifice to Gods, the higher awe. It's fly or fall when your in the sky with God, don't make me define your flaws by resorting to my science course. Apoptosis of the cancerous cause, don't mind me. answer your thoughts, dismantle your blocks by thinking out of the box. My similes are a plot that will have your battle strategy seemingly out of luck.
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77% is an insult! Im outraged, you've ruined my morning tea at work, thanks Adon!!!
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I've been busy with work/writing bars/horror reviews/gym/date nights/christmas shopping etc
nothing too exciting but life gets in the way sometimes been toying with extending that verse i started about wishing upon a star mid-season might show you guys what ive got so far
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We haven't had a beer in weeks tbh!
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I wished upon a star today ignoring the fact it's distance was so far away it had already passed. What I saw would have happened centuries ago so all that I'd actually wished on was a memory of old. It's evident there's no point in making a wish - especially as I don't know if it's stasis exists! In the time it's taken, and distance, for the light to traverse the star may have diminished without us realising on Earth. While we observe the stars we perceive in the skies all kinds of divergence could have materialised. Keeping in mind that were looking back on the past and what we're seeing is lightyears after the fact! The chances of having any luck with a wish vanish dramatically if that same star no longer exists. The juxtaposition showed me that perception is skewed, - it's only by looking within you'll find a semblance of truth. Never be fooled into believing everything that you see question the truth though it's in our instinct to believe. That wish may have been made on a whim - a singular dream not changing a thing. But it gave me a glimmering moment I chose to be able to cling to, and hold on in hope. I know its remote, but by and in large, it showed me the notion of light through the dark. Good times through the hardships, though let it be said, even the brightest of stars meet an eventual end. It presented a sense of duality I hadn’t considered - the premise of death in contrast to that of the living. Both have to exist to bring order and balance to the polaritical laws of attraction. Every cause has a standard effect that will follow it - each plausible action, a consequence that’s synonymous. Many philosophers have debated in voice if its inherent in consciousness, from Plato to Freud. Love and hate are conjoined by common acknowledgement - the dual face of a coin with composite opposites.
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Hey, guess who has no clue what he did last night blacked out drunk?
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I'm not finished with the verse yet, just figured I'd show you all what I'm been writing as it's been a while
a vid with MMLP will possibly happen tomorrow for the Klitschko fight?
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as martyr to an abstract cause i wasn't understood by those
who live under secular law. assigned to an abstract beat i couldn't hold on to a particular thought. vernacular parched, i grasp in the dark. i punch my own ticket towards defeat ta see how it feels. there's that con-cept. it's a slippery eel, it looks for a meal.. i was never electric. just eclectic. i can't-even sort collections. my mind is a vestige. &if it attempts to fully formulate -i put up fencing. |
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Dope everyone showed. Will be voting throughout the weekend.
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As will I. Walmart and the mall was ridiculous today.
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I wished upon a star today ignoring the fact
it's distance was so far away it had already passed. What I saw would have happened centuries ago so all that I'd actually wished on was a memory of old. It's evident there's no point in making a wish - especially as I don't know if it's stasis exists! In the time it's taken, and distance, for the light to traverse the star may have diminished without us realising on Earth. While we observe the stars we perceive in the skies all kinds of divergence could have materialised. Keeping in mind that were looking back on the past and what we're seeing is lightyears after the fact! The chances of having any luck with a wish vanish dramatically if that same star no longer exists. The juxtaposition showed me that perception is skewed, - it's only by looking within you'll find a semblance of truth. Never be fooled into believing everything that you see question the truth though it's in our instinct to believe. That wish may have been made on a whim - a singular dream not changing a thing. But it gave me a glimmering moment I chose to be able to cling to, and hold on in hope. I know its remote, but by and in large, it showed me the notion of light through the dark. Good times through the hardships, though let it be said, even the brightest of stars meet an eventual end. It presented a sense of duality I hadn’t considered - the premise of death in contrast to that of the living. Both have to exist to bring order and balance to the polaritical laws of attraction. Every cause has a standard effect that will follow it - each plausible action, a consequence that’s synonymous. Many philosophers have debated in voice if its inherent in consciousness, from Plato to Freud. Love and hate are conjoined by common acknowledgement - the dual face of a coin with composite opposites. @sraL...chea, dope.. should collabb sometime. @Vividlyvague...shit raw my friend. |
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