04-11-2016, 03:10 PM | #1 |
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SMaSH 0-0 vs riffic 0-0 - RIFFIC WINS
NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @SMaSH @riffic |
04-11-2016, 06:50 PM | #2 |
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04-12-2016, 03:37 PM | #3 |
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sounds gut
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04-14-2016, 01:44 PM | #4 |
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...SMaSH? He’ll be headin’ to the ground like an ostrich sleepin’
Once he caught this beatin’ that made Auschwitz look like hospice treatment I’m bob and weavin’, you NetCees better stop your beefin’ ‘Fore I leave your Best Actress de-Brie and make it Oscars season With a glock I’m squeezin’; so many gun lines you’ll need a week to compile it Tools blast that’ll do Smash worse than Jason Street in the pilot ‘Cause this is Being John Malkovich - got a clip full of baldheads Think he Hard To Kill ‘til you see the Exit Wounds like a Steven Seagal spread Think I can’t eat off these gun bars? Shoulda chose better food This dude named himself the main thing women won’t let him do So fuck it, I got nothing left to say to you All your lines flat & a flatline will be the best shit that came from you |
04-17-2016, 12:39 AM | #5 |
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The scheme on those first few bars was pretty dope.
The Jason Street line was cool, Steven Seagal was alright, named himself the one thing women won't let him do was flames. Good verse my dude. |
04-17-2016, 02:53 PM | #6 |
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I thought it was a pretty good verse. U had a good flow and rhyme scheme which made the verse seem slot cleaner. Couple of ur lines were good but you'll get better if u stick around.
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