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Old 04-08-2016, 11:18 AM   #2161
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Your flow is whack and ya lines are gay
You got no flow to ya and I ain't need to ricotet
Since I leave this for you
Like some meat on a bone
I'm tripping by the pond
Trying to write words to a song
Got nothing to prove
Best believe my pockets hot
Never knew I could just shoot
Like I was a lanturn inside a pumpkin
And I ain't no dungeon like I gave u a concussion
Nowhere to drop these bars in this cypher
Surround you like barbwire hidden like a sniper
No one feels this writer like u rockin some diapers
It paid my dues by switching on the windshield wipers
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Old 04-08-2016, 10:01 PM   #2162
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watch me drop lines an get in that ass possi----prostate exam
when they ask what set i claim, im like yea i gang bang bro,
claim black blue and pink, thats color it is when we done on ur wife
thats how we gang bang bro, if ur too busy trying to make a hit
im the one breaknig ur bed springs walking in your front door
like i own the bitch, walk to ur bedroom tell your wife get me beer out the fridge
in your shit acting li,ke im the king of this bitch, get ur priorities straight
cuz right now u got em twisted as the smoke coming out the bubble ur hittin
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Old 04-09-2016, 02:37 AM   #2163
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grains of sand turn the world into a dust storm
I drown the future in the spore of the unborn
contort each thought to fit my different perspective
fuck being the top of the hill as well as well respected
dwell on perfection while looking into broken glass
a distorted record with your words spoken back
broke the back of Atlas as he flung the world
wrote to each second as the pendulum hung & twirled
upchuck & hurl on the edge of reflection & eternity
laugh at hard work because the obsession is invert to me
otherworldly thoughts got me worry free in absurdity
watch as the black hole continues to give birth to me
I laugh again...because I know where that journey leads
take a sip of the poison & bathe in your uncertainty
it never occurred to me that idiots can read past the impurity
but they so shallow theyd drown in the puddles I piss
before they ever catch up they gonna see the subtleties flip
fuck with me kid, I stretch out & double each brick
get you high enough to the point I bury you underneath it...
shit...
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Old 04-11-2016, 12:49 PM   #2164
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I'm trying to sustain my life
It's like cops reading you ya rights
I'm dope and accessible
You got a hole so big in you I could see through the middle
But fuck it Notre Dame could have the biggest hunch
Still u just a crumb I'm sweeping under the rug
You aint got what it takes
Say your honest but we all know you a complete fake
I ain't got time life is too short
You got no rhymes and all your bars are forced
You likely to trip on ya words
I'm following my shepherd call me a herd
Except you just a nerd
I'll come in first shoot u with nerf
You be a ferry wearing tight shirts
I gotta admit I'm the guilty party
You just a cheesehead I'm the real Lombardy
Gonna end this
You got a toothache next time I recommend toothpaste like a dentist
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Old 04-11-2016, 11:33 PM   #2165
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you talking to the master, you apprentice
your attention will teach you a lesson
or get you hit in the head if your span is lessened
my track record is more than impressive
Ive neglected many who were respected
not to mention Ive played with everything written
bridgin the gap between death beds & bed ridden
watch me catch you & your dogs slippin
ruffruff arf arf grrrrr straight from DMX
on my BMX if you a hooker we will see em sexed
see em wrecked while getting some decent head
done at the precinct with some inconvenient stress
we rather see em dead rather then see em blessed
yea..
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Old 04-12-2016, 02:39 AM   #2166
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Superstitious, Hated Defined, Perfoming rituals in a Sacred Shrine,
Balancin above angel wings while Making Rhyme, Unleashing vicious replies when Against a Line,
that To individuals may appear Wierd and Divine, there is no telling how much can be done with a Grain of Time,
I train with a blindfold dodging Flying Daggers, An army of dragons awaits my ascension through the Plight of Towers,
Radiating auras that resemble a Line to Flowers, Terrorizing Serpents like a Pack of Badgers,
Cant reach this altitude and dimension with the Highest of Ladders,
My pets are a pride of Lion and Panters, Creating Stories that Frighten Campers,
These rappers are full of shit like some Loaded Pampers, Stucked on a trench where the Road is Damper,
An Infernal Assasin who Surrendered the Passion Sitting with a Scepter in a Mansion used to give Pretenders a Bashing,
Rhymes are a constant swinging Guillotine Sever and Slashing,
You can spend time in the club with Liars and Bouncers
Or come explore the Mind of a Monster who was Hired by Mobsters, to slay infidels and have them Fired in Dumpsters,
Carve a human into a doll using Lead Ratchets take take them to Lucifer's Bal and shoot it with Ten Rockets,
Walk over puddles of blood and call it a Red Carpet,
If its still in one piece then this Calls for an Excorcism,Which is Endless turture from a Godly Mechanism,
Thy rap is a Cure for Cancer, Piercing dudes faster than harpoons thrown by Troop of Lancers,
The feeblest Minds Trending will Snap After reading several minutes of the Never Ending Rap,
Let us Debate on the Melodies Create Unreplaceable Memories,
The Impetuous Perpetuos Templar thats Terrible with Tenebrous Tentacles Chaining the Temple of Cerebrus,
Satisfying in Ways that are Splenduos, Even from Place that is Treacherous,
A tormented beast Raging with Sentiments spewing Chemicals and Pestilence,
The Current victim of Immortal Medical Experiments Crowned by Many Regiments,
Came to a Premesis to Translate the Genesis through these Menacing Sentences,
Enraging the Nemesis bumping to the beat and Shaking their Pelvises,
Say your Final Grace in Fights I'm Ace Assaulting a Rival's Face with Tidal Waves,
Make it looks like a Mall that Smashed a Vase, Bring more gore than a Slasher Case,
Advance in Haste, Trapped in Chase The Raps you Paste are Like saliva that aint Got no Taste,
Danger lurks Crouching in the Prison from Ashes in the Ground i have Risen,
To Take you Ogrish Vision and Crush it with a Prism For not taking well to Constructive Criticism,
Distinguished Felons can get Squished like Lemons, For disturbing the peace in the Bliss of Heavens,
A demon thats Restless whose Simple Presence will Sizzle your Essence,
I am a former student Haunting the Teachers, Spurting Hundreds of Scriptures that Resemble Thousands of Cleavers,
Used for hunting Mythological Creatures with Abominable Features, Every sequel is Like Heart Pounding Seizures,
I Train with the Oldest of Wizzards, drive a Sword in your Gizzard Exposing Lizards to the Coldest Blizzards..
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Old 04-12-2016, 03:07 AM   #2167
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Ratchets & Clanks I like to play with Ratchets & Shanks, Hatchets & Skanks
Rabbits & Safes fall from the sky covered by Acme & Mase
Pack in a Case full of Acne Debase, Road Runner is Wile E After The Chase
Rappers is Fake when running through with their Habits on Wait
Ravage the Plate & Scavenge for Ace, Ace as in Bandage you Faggot you Fake
Dragon the Tape across your demolished view because your Vantage is Waist
look at my Castle & Gate cant you tell that the Vastness is Great?
got my Vases & Plates Vassses & Plates, Goddammit Im Grate
got Bastards in Crates send em Back to the State
with a Catfish in Place to push them to the Wackest Estate
Im Famished. I Ate, you at a Disadvantage with Hate
I speak Spanish to Apes and teach them to Brandish an AK
I mean Brandish a Ache...lol
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Old 04-12-2016, 12:07 PM   #2168
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Anti Arsenic Andromeda Android Alphabeticallly and Annalitically Assasinating An Arguably Artistic Artist with Actual Autisn,
Besieger Blatantlly Bashing Bitches with Biological Bombs at the Back of Beaches with Brutal Barbarism,
Colloquial Collonel Calmly Conquering Constructed Colonies and Conservation Centers in Centralized Constellations,
Devilish Defiant Doubtely Desecrating and Destroying your Defendant's Determination,
Elegant Enlightened Embryo Emphatically Employed as Enchanted Executor for Endless Exterminations,
Frantically Forseeing the Future's Federal Fumigations,
Giant Greated by the Greatest General in Generations,
Hacker Hacking in Hallucinations without Haste or Hesitation,
Interupt an Interpretation of Intercontinental Infernal Interrogation,
Jolly Joker Jokingly Jeopardizing Justice Jingling Jerseys and Justifying,
Kratos and Kraken,
Linguistic Leader Lyrically Lynching Lousy Liars Lacking,
Metaphorically Morphing and Merely Meditating on Martyrs and Manually Mocking,
Natural Nonsense of Naive Nation,
Obviosly Opting for Obliteration,
Purposelly Puncture with Plastic Prisms Paranormally Paralighning,
Quantum in Quadrants Quarterlly Quanyifying,
Radically Revitalizing,
Soaring Sails Solemly Sanitizing,
Thorough Trancing Tyrants in Treacherous Trails and Tenebrouslly Tantalizing,
Understandinglly Underated Universal,
Vindicating Vice Verse,
Wandering Winner,
Xavier giving Xanax to Xander and Xena,
Yelling Yes to Yeshiva,
Zealous Zera in Zion with Zerophiliac....
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Old 04-12-2016, 03:41 PM   #2169
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I mean Brandish a Ache..

try to sandwich the hate between the bandage in place
over the antic's, the case, the damn sentence you face
repentence is waste, this instance is fake, instant distaste
for the denseness of veagence I crave when I'm awake...
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I'm unstoppable when I drop a cool topical
On top of you like i'm crushin my obstacles
I view what seem's so impossible as plausible
Make a methodical approach, bottle the dope
and rope in the win, I'm the role model of flow
Your top teir hoax will be broken from my open
mindedness with the pen and remind you I'm your highness
so heinous with the blending of words while bending the verse
I'll minus your benign line's with my diamond words...
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Old 04-12-2016, 04:57 PM   #2171
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you could get buried beneath the mine & worked
never mind the verbs, Im blessed til my sinus hurts
pick up game worst than a fat bitch tryna flirt...
not a flow alive Ive submersed, blow minds & herbs
my flow Niagara while yours on the side of curbs
waiting, hating...my molecular structure is sickened
tucking the heat while Im with your mother in the kitchen
got her greased up just like whats under the chicken
its no wonder Im the sickest I suffer from salmonella
E coli, unwashed hands handling the potato peeler
I dont even know if that rhymed but Im bored on a Tuesday
Ill have your head sitting next to the ice cube tray
shout out to @2tripple0 for having my water boy...Bobby Bouche
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Old 04-12-2016, 04:58 PM   #2172
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Hunting for opponents while Exploring the Underworld,While u Covered in make up Glowing like Covergirl,
The Sargent Concurs making these Serpents Uncurl,
The Cosmos Obscured during the Miraculous event and no one Knows How it Occurred,
After the competition this was the verse judges Obviuosly Preffered,
These rhymes are 100% Satisfaction Guaranteed, sick enough to get the whole Faction Quarantined,
Drinking plasma in Mansion with Constantine,Beating emcees like Pounding Tamborine,
I am not real you see I'm am Just a Dream like monster emerging from a Profound Ravine,
A ghost wandering the Coast Unseen, Your punches are softer than Dough and Cream,
You got no flow Like a Closed Cantine,
To many who are lost something Incredebly Threatening,
Constellation of Stars even the Fairies Defending Him,
I appear on the gates riding a Blazing Seraphim, have you Shaking like Gelatin,
You dont have what it takes to stand Face to Face with a Nephilim,
A Feared Paladin fighting in Space like Anakin with the power to levitate a Ship that is Sinking,
Enter the mind and Erase every Lyrics they're Thinking,
The one that made Decapitating a Sport, Auctioned by demons in the Day of Birth,
You Can tell he is a killer from all the Blood Stains on the Shirt,
Throwing roses at the enemy Laid in Dirt, Battling Till the spirit of Hades Comes Forth,
I speak in a Classic Tone, the rhymes resemble bullets from a Sparkling Chrome,
Mangling the Domes of these Flaccid Clone,
You stand there with an Asthmtic Drool, Drowning in Acid Pools,
The Grousest Problematic Sign with Obedience,Or begin Undergoing a Traumatic Experience,
These hos are Deceiving Too busy to Notice the Reason, A World where the Treason Never Goes out of Season,
The one Leading the Lane, walk out of rooms filled with Victims Screaming in Pain,
To battle me you have to be Really Insane, everything said will be embedded Deep in your Vein,
Eventually Sealing your Brain They might never See you the Same,
Your style is just Weak and Profane caz Focusing mainly on just being Mundane...
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Old 04-12-2016, 05:08 PM   #2173
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I like to copy & paste, its almost like joggin in place
everyone duck down, at this price Id be robbin the game
lost in space while my touch light up the town..moonwalking away
poppin off strays, killin rabid dogs while knockin off lames
the most verbose pearl flow is in your presence you girl ho
you gerbil, Mr Slave got you worked up & wrapped in nerves ho
if you a hurdle you caterpillar straddlin the earth ho...
Im a murracle down in the south like IM OVER HURRRR ho
put your head in the toilet & swwwirl, Im outta this worrrld
I thought I done told you that Im too quick as a nuisance
boredom & music turns me into a beast with the inevitable rudeness
turn teachers to students, turn students the thickest of mucus
the quickness got them on a g unit mixtape screamin whooooooooooo kid
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Attention Stranger No One, This is the brother of Danger Dolan who is being Trained by no other than the Major Zohan, Goku is my father call me Raging Gohan,
The wicked minister who Drink from Life Elixers will leave your face Needing Massive Fixtures after submerging it on Heated Acid Mixtures,
The Best in the Clash standing Next to the Grass will have your neck Spattered fast then burnt in the Depths to Ash,
Your Text is Trash, You are on top but we are Wondenering how long your Expression will Last,
Unleash venomous Lectures Infecting the Class,
Leave ya physics severed then Disect you with Glass, Explode your imperfect mass just for Inspecting the Blast,
Dont be Scared Aight let me put this Really Clear, I'm Engineered to Fight When you See Me Prepare,
You Need to Beware I can Confiscate your life without Being There,
Make way for the Golden Raging Omen Blazing Opponents in Flaming Ovens,
Where did he come from? No one Knows Exactly, He carve rhymes from an Underground Faculty,
That Paint the skies burgundy paving Road to Anarchy, Cruise through the Ozone Gallantly,Cross my path and end up an Ominous Casualty,
Open the door to Reality You better than me is a statement that can be described as Preposterous Blasphemy,
Just to find out you were Clouded by Vanity, No one can save you from the Emerging Calamity,
You will never see someone Performing moves So Rapidly, Have your entirely Submerged in the Gravity,
I Sit in a Tall Building in the Dark Dreaming, The most twisted Art Wielding Monster Dragging you into the Fog Bleeding,
Slashing you repetedely till you Stop Screaming, Silence your mouth when Baal is Speaking,
I am that Devil on the Back Grinning, Compose to a rebels Heart Beating,
Give you a Mad Beating you Sad Weakling Couldn't win if you were All Cheating,
Morons Bound to the Scene Mourn and Plead during combat with Sodom Seed, Giants emerge to Burn all your Monarchies,
See me on the scene handling biz with a Modern Steez, I need a real battlist who is cursed you are Just a Tease,
Have your ashes disperesed and Crushed Beneath the Southern Seas,
My Soul is above on the Clouds Adrift, The Flows we Spit are cold indeed Causing the whole Globe to Shift,
Let me tell you Whats the Matter, The Godly Father sniping the competition with a Bob Lee Swagger,
The Bomb Blaster Sparker Show Stopper with a thats Flow Darker for Sure Smarter,
Giving a speech to all Young Brothers like the Coach Carther,
I didnt have a rich mother and Father like You, Found peace precticing the Art of the Few,
The Rap Spew from a path so obscure here to Slaughter your Crew,
Slugger its True brain will splatter When the Slugs come Through,
Laugh at the Dopeness being Slapped in your Face looking All out of Place Cracked like a Vase,
I be the commander flying in jets deep in dark space Deploying grenades when Assaulting a Base,
Got tyrants and slave Cleaning and Mapping the Base,
The subtle anti nice here to Break the Competition, Using multiple satelites positioned to triangulate on the Position,
Berate the Competition, beat you on the Wasted of Condition,
Smile at the heat that will Haunt You, While you eat Bizarre foods like you're Andrew,
Swallow back you Pathetic Disses, The shots you thought landed were just Epic Misses,
Not after high maintenance Sexy Bitches Directed by Witches, I will a virgin to this merry existence and give her Many Kisses,
Cook her Plenty Dishes Grant her all the Healthy Wishes,
Simply Spectacular with an Intrinsic Vernacular, Bring beef i Flip it with a Spatula, Sip on blood like a Living Dracula,
Then have a speech that is Popular Imprinted Deep in you Ocular,
I am a pychopatic Rapper addicted to Grotesque Necronomy, Spend time Reconstructing the Colony,
The bars scripted will be Quoted by Tholome, There might never be Another Me,
My mic is a scalpel Encusted Suddenly Borrowing into a Busted Anatomy,
A win against this is impossible you Wasting your time like Studying Astronomy,
Unbeaten by lies that Punish you Thoroughly, I can Teach you how to Thrive in a Demolished Economy...
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Knee deep in a bleeding sea of grief as I'm beating these emcees
Defeating them with steeze
They flee like a weak receding disease pleading to be free
I'm secreting this flow until they begin to believe
I'm in this for the win, not for the friends I'd receive
I squeeze this pen and blend in the recipe to succeed
Invest in me and you'll see i'm a blessing to the beat
I'm addressing my degree of elite by impressing who i meet
Ode to my crew, yeah the whole fleet is in view
Running the streets and constantly makin the news
But don't be mistaken this for some ruse
We'll stand our ground and put a stake in it too
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This is like Saw to me, want to play a game? take a shot or leave
any style is a like a pawn to me, I write so ill, so awesomely..
my right so skilled, there no wrong to me, but for the sake of mockery...
I go off, offn MCs, writers, rappers often...see the robbery?

My pen causin embarrassments
My keyboards lost in appearances
My ideas locked in the mysterious
I lay out the coffins for the inferior
they remotes lost in the interior...

but Im universal, touching on anything they brought
did everything they thought, simplicity is way off...
I could take time off & they couldnt catch up with my drops
with every line drawn on a blank piece, poppin off side arms
lazy boy signed off, greasy fingered bart simpson my god...

trickery is for kids & I have no sympathy to give
imagery equipped with flow the spigot could get
kicking it to pricks til they see what the differences is...
intimate shit, get the tip? you so limited bitch.
dividends split just as the thighs do when Im visitin cribs..

tossin drawers to hampers, you thought it was pampers
but Im too awesome & dapper, you get lost in the grammar
she fake it, I body the actor, act stressed prolly the standard
she dirty we give props to Diana & Im tossing cadavers...
you idolizing Pac & The Answer like you in high school
prolly listen to Young Joc & answer to the nickname typhoon
whoever you blow gets wet over your simplistic stability
simplistic ability Im adding & dividing till arithmetic is killin me
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Yo Mr. J, I seen your word to assemble...
So lemme bring a verse to make these virgins all tremble
I bring the hurt with utensils. perfect with pencils
Rhymes so sick they need a surgeon general warning
Better yet, a surgeon in general..
So aim your pitchforks and torches at the monster
Bunch of followers, bring those sheep all to my slaughter
You a robot, dawg, they should call you Goddard...
My bars are so heavy they still looking for a spotter
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You know me, holding the contraband with a conch in hand
I been beating up these pussies so much their shells are soft & damp
similar to the Loch Ness man, only a few lucky enough to spot this mass
she like stand up men then I shatner n took off like rocket man
their squad similar to the partridge fam, roadside attractions....damn
me? Im the type to billboards while my face stay with em while they racing by
thats why the hating right? just ask em what my dust is tasting like...
theyd say its fine because they couldnt keep up with the pace I ride...
the pace I write...is similar to what you put on toast & paste it right...
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My thoughts melt into a puddle Im muddled
I struggle to find the meaning behind the hustle
a big fuck you to those who are lookin for trouble
I love you & hate you, but Id hate to become you
quick to scuffle, shots blast & easily outrun you
what do the signs lead to when you bleed blue
I bleed red & make a deal just to see the equal
your thoughts leak through a bandana to greet you
I see you, with your judgmental ass on a steed who...
rides in the sweet blue sky...me I wear a cheap suit
cheap shoes, no ties needed, in the ground I leave you
the modern day evils, raise flags for the street use
align to these dudes who claim theyd never leave you
what a silly predicament that lacks sentiment...
you brother to many men but that also implements..
blood in, blood out, no need to be a mexican.
your next to kin could be in the hole you end up in
thats what you get for meddlin with that metal &...
riding them blocks, backseat pop down, hiding em glocks
when they ride through they always timing them shots
grinding in spots with undercovers who are silent or not
who cares...you tying them knots & buying them lots...
got your grandmother on the northside right in the shops
purchasing new furniture while you high off them rocks
whether you provided or not you still wind up in a box
ready to pop like Jack, slipping of shots of cognac...
BLAT...
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..I know a guy who's actually pretty good at remodeling furniture and material,
Hook you up with his number -he can help you be ethereal,
Put that bowl down -stop eating all that cereal -your spelling is hysterical
I don't believe in miracles.
I'm an orator
like Pericles,
If you got the power -expect from me the sword of Damocles,
these damn emcees,
need edit-ing. or manag ing,
you're panicking -my 'lil prince -you can't be king!
even though i stabbed your dad
-&shot the queen,
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