05-09-2016, 11:41 PM | #1 |
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Lotto Smirk 6-9 vs Joe Boston 1-4 - JOE WINS
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05-10-2016, 12:20 AM | #2 |
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Check how many @Lotto Smirk?
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05-10-2016, 04:07 PM | #3 |
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10 or 12 let you know if I can do more
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05-11-2016, 01:14 PM | #4 |
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Boom 12 @Lotto Smirk
U never in ur life groped boobies ur girl got me on speedial wanting to do me Leave that pussy in a Apocalypse creampie with the effects of a new xmen movie Uzi on me at all times u never held a gun so y the fuck u brag n boast Cuz Once the heat burn ya it'll leave u darker then a Barc n Toil pic roast I dont think you wanna approach me in person hardguy routine aint working Once i shoot If i give em eighty pop up from his grave signing "Im like a Virgin" Trigger finger aint working plus he got the aim of a scrub When i the grip rubber duck, he gonna scream when the barrel sing like Ernie in the tub Soft like a lioncub why he even mean mug n grab his crotch Keep playing Little Big Shot ill kill this kid with talent n make Steve Harvey Watch U cant hit ur chicks spot that inchworm aint got a dying chance I'll fuck her my favorite style hand on the ground pelvic thrusting like the salt n pepa dance |
05-12-2016, 12:28 PM | #5 |
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Will try get it up tonight but may need ext
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05-12-2016, 01:38 PM | #6 |
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05-14-2016, 04:50 AM | #7 |
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I'm chilling pulling thrilling chicks u getting none, FACT
only time u ever been associated w/ a bitch is moaning like one in the chat Teach ya a lesson that'll have ya body on a stretcher one shot'll have ya brain in parts allover the board that's a neurosurgeon lecture got a Long range or short aim the scope'll leave him toast While if joe switching sights it's between RB n NC cus he getting bullied off both Sharps mag got me hyped up man it was mean Made me wanna go 16... just to see this fag banned from the league Beating joes nothing to brag we know this faggot can't write so this'll be Amir knockout when I drop u w/ one punch like the Kahn fight Will edit in 2 more if I get time Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 05-14-2016 at 06:21 AM. |
05-14-2016, 12:17 PM | #8 |
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@Lotto Smirk I gotta open this cause this is late assuming it's cool with @Joe Boston
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05-15-2016, 11:52 AM | #10 |
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U never in ur life groped boobies ur girl got me on speedial wanting to do me
Leave that pussy in a Apocalypse creampie with the effects of a new xmen movie Lol idk...is apocalypse a wordplay? Or just like a literal cream pie apocalypse. ...lol gross...this is a miss for me...maybe I'm missing something here Uzi on me at all times u never held a gun so y the fuck u brag n boast Cuz Once the heat burn ya it'll leave u darker then a Barc n Toil pic roast This is ok I dont think you wanna approach me in person hardguy routine aint working Once i shoot If i give em eighty pop up from his grave signing "Im like a Virgin" 80s pop is a dope concept....wording hurting u here tho...also a bit too animated....idve gon w something a bit darker....have them 80s pop on ya without the vh1 special Trigger finger aint working plus he got the aim of a scrub When i the grip rubber duck, he gonna scream when the barrel sing like Ernie in the tub Lol this is good Soft like a lioncub why he even mean mug n grab his crotch Keep playing Little Big Shot ill kill this kid with talent n make Steve Harvey Watch Again this is like ur 80s pop line....they're too goofy....the concept is there...but I feel like ur tie ins make the punch come off as unrealistic/cartoony.....for me u want these type of lines to come off as gritty as possible since it's not a comedy bar U cant hit ur chicks spot that inchworm aint got a dying chance I'll fuck her my favorite style hand on the ground pelvic thrusting like the salt n pepa dance Disgusting mental image here smh I'm chilling pulling thrilling chicks u getting none, FACT only time u ever been associated w/ a bitch is moaning like one in the chat Light Teach ya a lesson that'll have ya body on a stretcher one shot'll have ya brain in parts allover the board that's a neurosurgeon lecture Concept ok if not played...execution lacking got a Long range or short aim the scope'll leave him toast While if joe switching sights it's between RB n NC cus he getting bullied off both WOOO ok picking up steam Sharps mag got me hyped up man it was mean Made me wanna go 16... just to see this fag banned from the league Lol ok ok Beating joes nothing to brag we know this faggot can't write so this'll be Amir knockout when I drop u w/ one punch like the Kahn fight This is cool Will edit in 2 more if I get time Mann this may have fucked j Lemme look back over this god damnit lotto So switching sites vs elmo Liked elmo better an with a bar missing from lotto I'd have to say Joe landed more....tho w that last bar with an average connection lotto would've won this. Stop bein lazy bruh. V jb |
05-15-2016, 04:25 PM | #11 |
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ok ima go with jb simply because he put a little more into his verse. Seems his verse was a bit phoned in. I liked the khan bar and the league personal made me chuckle. But I felt like jb wanted it more.
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05-15-2016, 05:27 PM | #12 |
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JOE BOSTON w/ the slight edge, I wanted to go w/ Lotto tbh, but his verse read as lazy. Perhaps he took Joe very light or just doesn't care if he win or loses..Idk. Joe had some good concepts, maybe even some haymakers potential to them, but that wording needs a lot of work & polish. Still tho, the creativity's there & that's what won out over what Lotto presented.
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05-16-2016, 08:27 AM | #13 |
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U never in ur life groped boobies ur girl got me on speedial wanting to do me
Leave that pussy in a Apocalypse creampie with the effects of a new xmen movie Lol. Lil wierd the but I see I shoulda been focused on effects. Wording was weird here, took away from impact Uzi on me at all times u never held a gun so y the fuck u brag n boast Cuz Once the heat burn ya it'll leave u darker then a Barc n Toil pic roast alright I dont think you wanna approach me in person hardguy routine aint working Once i shoot If i give em eighty pop up from his grave signing "Im like a Virgin" ok Trigger finger aint working plus he got the aim of a scrub When i the grip rubber duck, he gonna scream when the barrel sing like Ernie in the tub Lol ok Soft like a lioncub why he even mean mug n grab his crotch Keep playing Little Big Shot ill kill this kid with talent n make Steve Harvey Watch the way you tied on Steve Harvey here kinda makes it go from a Diss to a Steve Harvey reference lol. Cool flip with lil big shot tho U cant hit ur chicks spot that inchworm aint got a dying chance I'll fuck her my favorite style hand on the ground pelvic thrusting like the salt n pepa dance I'm just so tired of 'blank like blank' lines. Funny though I'm chilling pulling thrilling chicks u getting none, FACT only time u ever been associated w/ a bitch is moaning like one in the chat ok Teach ya a lesson that'll have ya body on a stretcher one shot'll have ya brain in parts allover the board that's a neurosurgeon lecture solid got a Long range or short aim the scope'll leave him toast While if joe switching sights it's between RB n NC cus he getting bullied off both nice personal lol Sharps mag got me hyped up man it was mean Made me wanna go 16... just to see this fag banned from the league funny, kinda light tho Beating joes nothing to brag we know this faggot can't write so this'll be Amir knockout when I drop u w/ one punch like the Kahn fight cool I genuinely think Lotto could've won with another bar that hit but as it stands I think Joe has the edge. Nothing major from either that swung the battle on someone's direction but Joe just has one extra concept on his side V/joe |
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lotto came too soft this weak to get the win. he has the switching sights line but that's a beyond played flip so it's hard to give it any love. JB it looks like has tried to switch his wording up which is good. the concepts are there but he needs to deliver them harsher. in this battle i liked the rubber duck concept and the 80s pop. i think JB edged it here with more creativity.
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Lmao not sure if that helps u sharp but that's the explanation I was given for the bar in question LMFAO[/QUOTE] Roffl |
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