05-18-2016, 12:27 AM | #1 |
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MFTastik vs. Joe Boston - MFTastik wins
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05-18-2016, 02:05 AM | #2 |
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05-18-2016, 08:27 AM | #3 |
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05-18-2016, 09:34 PM | #4 |
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12 @MFtastick
Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle |
05-19-2016, 02:06 AM | #5 |
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Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip
Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever |
05-19-2016, 08:39 AM | #6 |
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Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO powers is a wierd phrase for someone who won something. Don't like this, but wording was decent at least. I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in not doing drugs is better than being a heorin junkie or a crack head lol. Not fdeelin this tho Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for okay not great but jab here I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items this is ok... but, ur using less words but are having trouble making correlations with less words so u still have some work to do U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle eh? Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle not a fan vs Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet lol funny The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick i get it but its a little underwhelming If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy lol aight Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup lmao Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face nah Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever nah Joe is transitioning from longgg stretches of endless lines to short crisp wording. He's gonna have to practice tho to learn how to make the correlations and using his usually decent concepts while still holding on to the short crisp wording. Joe had a couple okay bars but really didn't do much here. MF had some nice shit with crisp wording and takes this one easy imo. v/MF
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05-19-2016, 04:02 PM | #7 |
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Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO This a force to me. I've never heard the expression "yo you got powered in your battle last week". Maybe if u used the word overpowered it'd make more sense. But this a force. The humor didn't work for me either I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in missed Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for Awful setup. Reads mad awkward. The nameflip was a good attempt but the punch wasn't done right I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items This nigga referenced a caldors lmaooo. I thought that was just a regional chain that went out of business in the 90s. Not sure if anyone not from the east coast will get this but its decent. Again tho the setups be terrible U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle decent concept but the wording is way to long for my taste Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle decent Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet Blah The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick nah If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy Lol simple but effective Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup Ok Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face I'm bias against this since I had a gun butt bar last week. This one wasn't bad but it just had no effect for me Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever Laaaaazy Mf had a cleaner more enjoyable verse. Joe just comes off as mad forced to me most of the time. From his choice of words to how he words his bars. Solid concepts that could hit hard but end up getting washed out under bad execution and strange setups. Mf got this. Vote- mftastik
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05-19-2016, 04:02 PM | #8 |
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Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO This a force to me. I've never heard the expression "yo you got powered in your battle last week". Maybe if u used the word overpowered it'd make more sense. But this a force. The humor didn't work for me either I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in missed Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for Awful setup. Reads mad awkward. The nameflip was a good attempt but the punch wasn't done right I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items This nigga referenced a caldors lmaooo. I thought that was just a regional chain that went out of business in the 90s. Not sure if anyone not from the east coast will get this but its decent. Again tho the setups be terrible U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle decent concept but the wording is way to long for my taste Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle decent Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet Blah The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick nah If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy Lol simple but effective Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup Ok Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face I'm bias against this since I had a gun butt bar last week. This one wasn't bad but it just had no effect for me Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever Laaaaazy Mf had a cleaner more enjoyable verse. Joe just comes off as mad forced to me most of the time. From his choice of words to how he words his bars. Solid concepts that could hit hard but end up getting washed out under bad execution and strange setups. Mf got this. Vote- mftastik
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05-19-2016, 04:23 PM | #9 |
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MFTASTIK took this one convincingly imo. Joe's wording was cluttered & clumsy, while MF's was clear & concise. MF didn't have any super crazy bars or cleverly creative concepts, but he most def got his point across much better than his opponent. Joe u still have to polish up that wording, because your stuff keeps reading like struggle bars.
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05-20-2016, 06:36 PM | #10 |
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v/ mft
Joe had a decent verse but those lines were mad stretched. On top of wording issues it took away from the impact of his punches. Meanwhile even tgo it wasn't the strongest verse mft had a bit more consistent. I liked the family guy bar and thr gun butt punch. Decent drop. |
05-21-2016, 08:26 PM | #11 |
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I got mf, on this one his verse was better than joes.
Joe verse was congested, sometimes to the point it made it hard to read. Mf read smoother and lil more effective. Vote mf |
05-23-2016, 08:22 AM | #12 |
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05-23-2016, 02:03 PM | #13 |
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Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO Wordings off....not that I think this is an overly good concept anyways I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in Light Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for I like school of ass whoopins. Again tho wording an execution joe. U got to take ur time w these dude. Atkeast until u can narrow a style that works. I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items Caldors is sum discount store maybe? This is ok....hit less cuz reference was too obscure to me...wording was better tho U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle Lay brawn on me is a cool concept. U made this unrealistic tho again by putting urself in the cave huddle. It's too animated. We need to believe wat ur sayin is a legitimate threat....nkt just some story u wrote. Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle U watch ur fucking mouth. (Played) Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet Lol magazine shit played but I fuck w this spin on it for real haha The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick Played. Good wording. If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy This shit floored me. Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup LMAO this is cool Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face Until sum1 do a better gun butt line then Kenny I ain givin these no love Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever Seen this before Joe was lazy am I feel like mf actually had a few more fresh bangers then usual honestly. Clear cut win for mf. V fantastic |
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Dope to see Joe clean up his wording and be more concise . Shows he wants to improve and he's taking the shit talk and insults well and still vying to get do per . Still a Lil way to go on executing his concepts in harsher ways but this was a pretty good verse witha couple of quotes . Mf is becoming a cult figure on here haha tbh his verse was all straight no real bad misses very consistent . He gets the win this wk |
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