06-25-2016, 02:15 PM | #1 |
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Cashius vs MFTastick - Cashius wins
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06-25-2016, 09:03 PM | #2 |
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12 good g?
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06-25-2016, 09:20 PM | #3 |
I'M A MONSTER!
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Naw, 16-20.
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06-25-2016, 10:17 PM | #4 |
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aight. 16
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06-30-2016, 01:25 AM | #5 |
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Yo im gonna be busy with work and stuff the next couple days so i have to post now incase i dont get the chance. FWM.
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06-30-2016, 01:25 AM | #6 |
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Whats poppin b. you my son. catch a 3 peice if you aint adressin me properly
Or its 2 gats. pull both triggers to catch another body thats Abes Odysee And ya girl a jumpoff. no lyin bruh, the bitch pussy wide as fuck. She say you bearly hit it. Cash a little short, I guess times are tough Bully on the block. That just mean im no one you want to be playing with. So square up. This cross'll flip him upside down. im a Satanist. I got a Killers Instinct, put him cold in the ground like he Glacius when i see your team huddle up. this Tom call the shots.. Thats the New England Patriots. You try and pass off this thug persona. well that stops here dog. the jukes up Hammer fist. I call em Bo and Luke. watch his whole frame freeze when i put these dukes up But whats poppin Cash. Got a hook harder than a brother tryna stop a cab And you know i got the strap. Flame rounds. you can get a ring of fire. Call him Johnny Cash Fuck cash. Full stop. Gun so big i fall back with the shot. thats a fade away SAY SOMETHING. the 9 put dog in a wheelchair. thats training day Whole squad cold hearted. We only shootin for anyone one you love. lets see whos harder. Found out where yo bitch eat lunch. Catch her with the tre. Im Peter Parker. |
07-01-2016, 01:24 AM | #7 | |
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That shit must've been the Hallmark of your career...cause you didn't even make the card I'm guessing his girl left...based on the fact she pounding his nigga Bitch treats him like Marty McFly...She wants this Mother Fucker out of the picture And you probably BEGGIN' her not to go...You don't even get it, brah You got your hands clasped screaming Namaste!...but she ain't India Ammo gripped, bananas bitch and that clip's dumping, you got me?! Call my shit the new Sports Illustrated issue...A magazine of nothing but BODIES So you drop one banger per week? Lol and you think that shit is gon' work? Well...congrats on having the same number of quotes in a season that I get in one verse Mags all loaded up, pussy...I've gotta buck the cal then... You wet when I dump them containers on your head...that's a Water Bucket Challenge Your girl LOVE black dick but you wife her? Dog, she taking balls on her knees She's like Cersi Lannister...she fucking a brother and you STILL call her your queen Mr. Fantastick? Only in comic books, son...But Cashius for sure is a threat I don't give a fuck if your arms long or you got that Thing...I'm putting the 4 to your chest |
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07-01-2016, 06:52 AM | #8 |
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WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LETS GET IT Whats poppin b. you my son. catch a 3 peice if you aint adressin me properly Or its 2 gats. pull both triggers to catch another body thats Abes Odysee And ya girl a jumpoff. no lyin bruh, the bitch pussy wide as fuck. She say you bearly hit it. Cash a little short, I guess times are tough Bully on the block. That just mean im no one you want to be playing with. So square up. This cross'll flip him upside down. im a Satanist. FIRST FOUR WERE WORDED REAL CLEAN, I FUCK WIT 'EM LAST TWO SHOULDA BEEN SWITCHED ROUND IMHO I got a Killers Instinct, put him cold in the ground like he Glacius when i see your team huddle up. this Tom call the shots.. Thats the New England Patriots. You try and pass off this thug persona. well that stops here dog. the jukes up Hammer fist. I call em Bo and Luke. watch his whole frame freeze when i put these dukes up PATS WAS COOL, NOT FEELING THE DUKES AS MUCH TBREAL But whats poppin Cash. Got a hook harder than a brother tryna stop a cab And you know i got the strap. Flame rounds. you can get a ring of fire. Call him Johnny Cash Fuck cash. Full stop. Gun so big i fall back with the shot. thats a fade away SAY SOMETHING. the 9 put dog in a wheelchair. thats training day Whole squad cold hearted. We only shootin for anyone one you love. lets see whos harder. Found out where yo bitch eat lunch. Catch her with the tre. Im Peter Parker. JOHNNY CASH WAS NICE, TRE SHIT FELT A LIL OLD TO ME BUT WHATEVER, SHIT BANG FOR THE MOST PART MF STAY KILLING SHIT! vs. 15 battles and you ain't even MENTIONED! I'm surprised you didn't take it hard That shit must've been the Hallmark of your career...cause you didn't even make the card I'm guessing his girl left...based on the fact she pounding his nigga Bitch treats him like Marty McFly...She wants this Mother Fucker out of the picture HALL MARK CRAZY DOPE, MARTY MCFLY MOTHERFUCKER A DOPE IDEA BUT COULDA BEEN HARSHER YO And you probably BEGGIN' her not to go...You don't even get it, brah You got your hands clasped screaming Namaste!...but she ain't India Ammo gripped, bananas bitch and that clip's dumping, you got me?! Call my shit the new Sports Illustrated issue...A magazine of nothing but BODIES SPORTS ILLUSTRATED WAS CRAY TOO! So you drop one banger per week? Lol and you think that shit is gon' work? Well...congrats on having the same number of quotes in a season that I get in one verse Mags all loaded up, pussy...I've gotta buck the cal then... You wet when I dump them containers on your head...that's a Water Bucket Challenge LOL @ QUOTES IN VERSE LINE. BUCKET CHALLENGE NICE IDEA TOO BUT NOT SURE ABOUT THE WORD 'CONTAINERS' TO DESCRIBE YOUR CAL HAHAHAHAAHAHA I'LL LET IT SLIDE THO BECAUSE I LIKE IT Your girl LOVE black dick but you wife her? Dog, she taking balls on her knees She's like Cersi Lannister...she fucking a brother and you STILL call her your queen Mr. Fantastick? Only in comic books, son...But Cashius for sure is a threat I don't give a fuck if your arms long or you got that Thing...I'm putting the 4 to your chest THAT CLOSING LINE DOPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EDIT: CASH HAD LOTB WITH THAT CLOSER, LOTTA HEAT FROM BOTH CAMPS BUT FOR MY MONEY TASTIK HAD SLIGHTLY MORE SHIT I LIKED AND HIS WORDING ALWAYS BUTTERS I GOT MF HERE YO!
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Overall CASHIUS got this one, MF's showing was hard, but he didn't have enough for White Ali.
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07-01-2016, 07:25 PM | #11 |
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Cash got it on consistency and was fluid
MF came good, I thought that abes odyssey line was creative and I could tell he did work in thus verse, my only complaint is the execution was repetitive. 'im this.. call it, thats a etc' just switch up how you deliver shit by rewording things and imo that would help you elevate in a way. some thing feel wordy at times but if its some metaphor you're squeezing in the line then ok, but take out unnecessary words. Cash had hallmark a good throwback personal then was solid thru out. bit deeper and harsher.. more thought out yet direct. vote cash |
07-02-2016, 09:57 AM | #12 |
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I thought this was close, felt both of them had the same amount of misses, for the most part. But I would have to give a slight edge to cash, mainly because of his closer and the marty mcfly bar. Mf Had a nice opener, and the jhonny cash bar, but the rest of the verse fell flat.
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07-02-2016, 10:46 PM | #13 |
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Whats poppin b. you my son. catch a 3 peice if you aint adressin me properly
Or its 2 gats. pull both triggers to catch another body thats Abes Odysee meh And ya girl a jumpoff. no lyin bruh, the bitch pussy wide as fuck. She say you bearly hit it. Cash a little short, I guess times are tough smooth but light Bully on the block. That just mean im no one you want to be playing with. So square up. This cross'll flip him upside down. im a Satanist. light I got a Killers Instinct, put him cold in the ground like he Glacius when i see your team huddle up. this Tom call the shots.. Thats the New England Patriots. dope You try and pass off this thug persona. well that stops here dog. the jukes up Hammer fist. I call em Bo and Luke. watch his whole frame freeze when i put these dukes up lol funny. I get it. But light to me But whats poppin Cash. Got a hook harder than a brother tryna stop a cab And you know i got the strap. Flame rounds. you can get a ring of fire. Call him Johnny Cash meh Fuck cash. Full stop. Gun so big i fall back with the shot. thats a fade away SAY SOMETHING. the 9 put dog in a wheelchair. thats training day lol. Ill give u this one for the humor factor Whole squad cold hearted. We only shootin for anyone one you love. lets see whos harder. Found out where yo bitch eat lunch. Catch her with the tre. Im Peter Parker. light 15 battles and you ain't even MENTIONED! I'm surprised you didn't take it hard That shit must've been the Hallmark of your career...cause you didn't even make the card old concept but the wording was on point I'm guessing his girl left...based on the fact she pounding his nigga Bitch treats him like Marty McFly...She wants this Mother Fucker out of the picture lol And you probably BEGGIN' her not to go...You don't even get it, brah You got your hands clasped screaming Namaste!...but she ain't India fire wordplay but the punch fell flat imo. This coulda been the early ko Ammo gripped, bananas bitch and that clip's dumping, you got me?! Call my shit the new Sports Illustrated issue...A magazine of nothing but BODIES ok So you drop one banger per week? Lol and you think that shit is gon' work? Well...congrats on having the same number of quotes in a season that I get in one verse fire personal. No clever puns or witticisms necessary. Mags all loaded up, pussy...I've gotta buck the cal then... You wet when I dump them containers on your head...that's a Water Bucket Challenge light Your girl LOVE black dick but you wife her? Dog, she taking balls on her knees She's like Cersi Lannister...she fucking a brother and you STILL call her your queen i feel like this is a game of thrones reference and I don't watch that bullshit Mr. Fantastick? Only in comic books, son...But Cashius for sure is a threat I don't give a fuck if your arms long or you got that Thing...I'm putting the 4 to your chest dope Big ups to mftastik making it to the semis. I never woulda called it but hes earned it. Unfortunately he just wasnt hitting as hard or as often as cash. Not bad at all, just very light in comparison. Cash did his thing, nothing to crazy. But mos definitely a solid verse and eno7gh to get the win. Good battle yall.
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