01-22-2018, 02:45 PM | #1 |
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Alvin Karpis vs. Profit - ALVIN KARPIS WINS
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01-23-2018, 07:18 PM | #2 |
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inn, going 10
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01-23-2018, 11:50 PM | #3 |
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What's good man, 10 is perfect
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01-25-2018, 10:03 PM | #4 |
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Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there....
Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh Last edited by Alvin Karpis; 01-25-2018 at 10:06 PM. |
01-25-2018, 10:09 PM | #5 |
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U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit
U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murda U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted |
01-26-2018, 08:05 AM | #6 |
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Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there....
Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there i think this is a reach.. profit being called pra just seems weird I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street i dunno man profit just doesn't seem like a name you can shorten.. fit does work better than pra tho so ill give a jab here Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace nice You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants not feeling this You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh waco signing coulda been dopeee but as is it was decent vs U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips funny. execution a bit off but this is decent How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right didn't like this But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK this is ok Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murda ok U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted didn't like this amish fireplace was lotb. Basically had 3 i liked from each but w/ the lotb i gotta go with alvin karpis. v/alvin
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01-26-2018, 04:17 PM | #7 |
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Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there....
Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there barely decent, just a simple nameplay I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street now this is nice Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace fire again You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants same as the opener here man You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh wording in the second line is off, had potential but this is decent I’m literally calling those simple wordplay nameplays decent at best because I refuse to be bias since I’m not too into wps, if it works then it works. And yours work but they are very simplistic. Fitbits and fireplace were both dope though Vs U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips shoulda say nigga lips instead of niggas, yes it makes all the difference bro. The concept is cool and had potential for dopeness but turned out just “ok” How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right kinda corny & basic here bro But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK alright cool Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murda alright not bad U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted LOVED the set up, wording in the second line a bit off but nonetheless this was a good line Pretty cool battle. Alvin had 2 hitters that were both LOTB but everything else was mostly filler. The only thing I didn’t like from profit was left & right. Everything else was pretty good and definitely had the most consistent verse here. Could go either way, really depends on voter preference imo. Going with profit. Vote Profit |
01-26-2018, 05:10 PM | #8 |
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I liked profits attempt at some personals
Opener almosttt made it, murda was cool wasnt feeling rest tbh.. AK had amish fireplace, fitbits - amish dope verse asa whole worded better, koresh concept was cool but needed tweaking. V/Karp
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U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips Tastefully done tbh How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right Nah But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK Looool Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murdafat wife Cool... U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted It's good, but i would have liked this a little cleaner V profit |
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01-28-2018, 05:58 AM | #10 |
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Wraths opener and closer were decent af. Liked them an was an okish bar with the gow line.
However i felt that AK wss just more consistent he had two fire lines that amish line being lotb and his weaker jabs just held more sting then wraths. Vote AK |
01-28-2018, 08:19 AM | #11 |
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Ok so clearly there is some biased voting going on here
Alvin got this I liked everything in his verse except the closer because it doesn’t work both ways Profits verse wasn’t bad. Opener and GOW line hit but he had more misses Honestly, it isn’t close though Everyone who voted profit needs work on voting, simply V/AK |
01-28-2018, 01:59 PM | #12 |
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I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat
Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace vs. U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted AK od'd on name play, which hurt him other than the one good line. The follow up amish fireplace was actually quite dope and simple. I thought profit was going to take it, but came off very lazy and played. I really had trouble even quoting that bucks line. Niggas lips was cool though. V/ AK
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01-28-2018, 04:33 PM | #13 |
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I got Karpis winning this based off of the fireplace line alone. But I did enjoy some of Profits punches. The Kidd line was cool. Didn't really enjoy the OD line though that was kind of a stretch for the punch.
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01-28-2018, 11:21 PM | #14 |
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Alvin Karpis Wins 6-2
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