05-24-2013, 06:20 PM | #1 |
Sergeant Slaughter
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SiK Vs. Xnub - SIK WINS
10 lines due Monday at midnight eastern.
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05-24-2013, 06:38 PM | #2 |
SZNUBBED
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Check. I'm dropping early probably.
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05-27-2013, 10:10 PM | #3 |
Sergeant Slaughter
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05-27-2013, 11:57 PM | #4 |
Sergeant Slaughter
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Last edited by SiK; 05-28-2013 at 12:05 AM. |
05-28-2013, 03:59 PM | #5 |
SZNUBBED
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im posting todday
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05-28-2013, 05:00 PM | #6 |
SZNUBBED
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I'm hard headed wearing steel toes pussy, solid from top to bottom.
If ur talent was a pair of nikes player? I guarantee ill-nika wouldn't cop em' This raver bitch is gas'd up, how the fuck u gon' sleep on x? ..ur garbage, don't get it twisted... like one of ur "neat" concepts... Sik used to be a threat, the beast who conquered noobies at their best... ...but he couldn't hide the fact he had a pair a boobies on his chest. Basically, I'm saying this homo's soft.... Forever in the closet like a old pair of socks... ...AND Sik loooooves the petting zoo... only if they let him sit and stroke the cocks... So watch geek as I drop knee and bust ya head like rocky... and sorry to press the topic, but u seem more than a little cocky... Last edited by Xnub; 05-28-2013 at 08:30 PM. |
05-28-2013, 07:12 PM | #7 |
Sergeant Slaughter
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You shoulda just no showed me faggit….
Thinking you can fuck with SiK, I’d like to see this fag try Thought you were a Knucklehead for battling, but even more for wanting tutoring from THAT guy I serve bitches proper, while this fag always tuckin dick X would rather wait to serve up gay dudes, and I can tell by the menu b fuckin with I ride rough on a beat, but in this case ima end you with text You a Ruff Ryder too, it starts as verses that Drag On with no Stylez and then there was X Lets take a Detour right quick, this verse you cant top it bitch If we go by HIS rules we can add this battle to your wins and being dope to your accomplishments This battle was an easy W, really this fucks soft I honestly wasn’t expecting a challenge just a chance to shake the rust off http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6737 http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6655 Last edited by SiK; 05-28-2013 at 11:18 PM. Reason: edited for links |
05-28-2013, 11:13 PM | #8 |
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Xnub
Dont get it twisted was your best attempt. You just kind of made angry statements, nothing really hit too hard. hit the tutoring section and work on bar constructing v Thinking you can fuck with SiK, I’d like to see this fag try Thought you were a Knucklehead for battling, but even more for wanting tutoring from THAT guy I ride rough on a beat, but in this case ima end you with text You a Ruff Ryder too, it starts as verses that Drag On with no Stylez and then there was X Knucklehead line was kinda played but i gave it to you for still connecting. and then there was X was dope tho. Sik got it pretty easy even with rust v/Sik |
05-29-2013, 09:10 PM | #9 |
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dope verse.... u got that.
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05-29-2013, 10:43 PM | #10 |
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Xnub, not many punches amigo, the set up punch technique is something u may wanna look into... Remember funny and wit gets u wins
Sik, the serve line was ok the way u worded, the ruff Ryder's is a played concept I saw back in those days, those were ur best attempts, last line was swagish but not tough enough Still easy enough V Sik
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05-31-2013, 06:00 AM | #11 |
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Sik got this pretty comfortably with the menu, detour and x line, not a bad verse he did what he had to do to take the win here. Xnub's neat line was close to something but it was still ehh at best and the rest of his lines were just statementish with no wits or creativity...work on that.
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06-03-2013, 06:52 AM | #12 |
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X your concepts were really uncreative, not very intellectual and cheesy. Nothing against you player but I really didn't like the verse. If you would like a more specific breakdown pm me and I would be more then happy to do a bar for bar breakdown for you. |
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