07-28-2018, 03:58 AM | #16 |
Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
Champed - BA Rookie Tourney
- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9
Rep Power: 24894578 |
I honestly just found 90 percent of everything going over my head. D at least had some creativity eg his closer, although his set up to punch connection isn't great. Going back to your closer the word play in the set up I'd have preferred in the punch. Although the John Lennon wordplay is probably not the best the concept to the bar in general is good. But way too wordy. Lennox had the closer but the rest was trash. I dunno.
Vote D on potential |
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