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Old 08-26-2018, 02:22 AM   #1
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Aye Friday snuck up on me cool to drop tomorrow night?
Look punk...

Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week
Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch
This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin
Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers
I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit
Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves
I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads
Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles
He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him
Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion

Zip Him Up!!
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Old 08-27-2018, 03:35 PM   #2
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Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines?

Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one
—-concept so old but the flip was cool
This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat
—-fire
Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body
—-nah don’t really make sense to me
Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it
—-these kinda lines are hard to do effectively . This was tight tho
U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him
—-eh. Not fresh enough
Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no
—-I seen most these concepts but ur execution on this was tight
Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night
—-this wack bro
Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava
—-don’t mke sense
Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC
—-huh?
Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown
—-ok
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Look punk...

Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week
—-nah . Not really
Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch
—-nah
This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin
—-I watched every episode of dbz gt and super and I still don’t get this
Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers
—-aight
I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit
—-ok
Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves
—-dope
I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads
—-ok
Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles
—-eh
He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him
—-dope
Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion
—-ok

Zip Him Up!!
Murda never warmed up. One line I really liked the rest was abt or below. Knuck had some concepts that seemed well tread but his execution was fresh enough . He also had lotb


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Old 08-29-2018, 06:15 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Knucklehead View Post
Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines?

Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one

Alright, nothing severe here.

This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat

Cool, i liked this one

Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body

Eh didn't like how you worded this one. Like what you tried for tho

Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it

Nice & harsh


U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him

Didn't like ur set up, the punch was cool tho

Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no

Lol, cool

Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night

Eh

Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava

eh

Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC

Dont like this one my lil american friend.

Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown
Cool, better than that plug line

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Look punk...

Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week

Light, nice flow tho

Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch

IDK i don't like how the punch was worded. I like what you were trying for. but it just doesn't click well with me

This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin

Nah this was an old dbz concept

Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers

This was cool, liked this one

I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit

Dope, liked how you flipped that whole situation

Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves

Nice

I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads

Felt like the punch needed cleaner wording. Its a choppy execution. Cool idea tho

Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles

This was ok, ur doing to many knuckle name plays & focusing a bit much on his wife. Coming off as redundant.

He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him

nah
Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion

Doesn't really rhyme well & it didn't hit hard at all

Zip Him Up!!

v/ @Knucklehead I felt he had the better content. He had different angles wasn't focused on the attack. You both deserve the praise for the work you put in to get here. I just think Knuckle head was crisper, cleaner & hit harder.
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Old 08-29-2018, 09:24 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by Knucklehead View Post
Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines?

Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one
This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat
Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it
U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him
Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no
Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night
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Originally Posted by murda sho View Post
Look punk...

Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch
Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers
Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves
Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles
He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him

Zip Him Up!!
I thought knuck went in. Felt his concepts were stronger and hit harder. Sho wasn't bad. Good read. Just though his bars were all light throughout.

V/Knucklehead
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