GWL PLAYOFFS ROUND 1- #3 ADVERSE (8-4) VS #10 BROKEN HAL0 (3-5) ADVERSE WINS/OPEN FOR FEED

[Razah]

halo's verse was alright. Kind of gave me battle rap vibes, just from the wording and the way it was structured. It was okay though, I wasn't really blown away or had a certain segment stand out to me. The flow was pretty cool, it made for a quick smooth read. Certain parts the scheme switched up and added hesitation, but for the most part, it was cool.

Adverse' verse was better in my opinion. His use of imagery really helped get drawn into the verse.

Originally Posted by Adverse

Ghastly visions of past Decembers playing out on the roads below me

Had been in preparation so that my heart and I could go to war together

As I run two fingers across each scar with remembrance of who left it

Tongue burnt from the sun from all the times I opened my mouth to curse your names

I liked those lines. The last few bars put the concept together. Not only did I enjoy your verse more, and it was better written, I felt it actually drew inspiration from the topic at hand. Good stuff.

PS: This is the second verse I read that involves coffee.. and, I gave up coffee 2 weeks ago. Life is funny like that, huh.

vAdverse