10-24-2020, 11:29 AM | #1 |
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WEEK 4: Eviction 0-0 VS FGR 0-0 FGR WINS
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10-24-2020, 11:55 AM | #2 |
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Going ten
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10-24-2020, 12:46 PM | #3 |
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10-29-2020, 06:39 PM | #4 | ||
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But your so fuckin left you don’t need to advertise that your a biden supporter. You bringing death to all is a plot hole, your only victims are the same amateurs. You're like ghostface in the scream movies, you're never killing the main characters. You know what happens when you get bodied fucker? You stay at the first level. If you show up to battles, you still get the graveyard, worse than ur work schedule. Fuck your excuses, when I no show I’m leaving a son like when ur father stepped out. We can compare your verses to the year 2020, except they’ve been a larger let down. You must be spamming nudes, because of all the pussy that I see when you post. Want your 2nd amendment taken away? I’ll give u an example why you need it the most. @FGR |
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10-30-2020, 11:36 PM | #5 |
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Fgr will break every bone in your body. Twist ya spine till it bends
Leave you in a full white cast like the actors on FRIENDS Jab, jab, punch... Fuck spitting a rhyme My punches putting a stop to eviction like paying rent on time After the first hit.. You won't be able to handle another punches leaving you owen won like wins from bret harts brother I'm heavy with the hits.. while he's barely considered sick Not only is he soft as fuck but Eva bitch like that mendez chick The glock is loaded bitch... so Would you just die please Before I'm forced to pop E faster that clubs in the late 90s
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10-31-2020, 04:03 AM | #6 |
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Both verses were consistent but a lot of the concepts seemed a bit too basic ‘you’re more of a let down than 2020’ etc. Wording is there but just need a bit more creativity imo. Hard to call but I’ll go with lotb which was all white cast
Vote - FGR
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10-31-2020, 09:37 AM | #7 |
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FGR got this nicely
concepts just a bit more higher level Eviction concepts are there. Tighten up your wording and make it harsher V/FGR |
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evic dont ever waste time dissing a sig. that was a low brow move and rarely works. kudos on trying to work up ammo on him but when u gamble on a angle and it misses it can really bring the crickets out. his sig isnt political its a cage reference. keep at it tho I saw some potential in there vote fgr
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10-31-2020, 01:24 PM | #9 |
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Eviction
Ghostface was creative. Graveyard was nice to me too FGR Full white cast cool Owen won decent I’ve got FGR on consistency but this is def closer than people are saying . Eviction could be dope Vote FGR |
10-31-2020, 02:15 PM | #10 |
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v/ FGR. the full white cast bar was cool, others were light but still a decent verse. eviction had some good ideas, some bad ideas, execution was off.
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10-31-2020, 07:17 PM | #11 |
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You know what happens when you get bodied fucker? You stay at the first level. If you show up to battles, you still get the graveyard, worse than ur work schedule FGR Fgr will break every bone in your body. Twist ya spine till it bends Leave you in a full white cast like the actors on FRIENDS Lotb^ Fgr didn't have any more, but he had lotb and a few that didn't hit were better attempts Voting FGR |
11-01-2020, 12:52 PM | #12 |
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Eviction has a concept of it, but needs some stronger concepts, more personal shit and just better wording because honestly Ghostface and graveyard were pretty okay. Read some of the veteran battles and take some notes fam.
Fgr had some decent stuff as well Friends was okay and end eviction was okay but I feel like you went Uber basic and didn’t do much with concepts because you felt like you had it in the bag. Good bars V/FGR |
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