11-22-2020, 09:01 PM | #1 |
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WEEK 8: Adverse 4-3 VS Wanderer 4-3 WANDERER WINS
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11-22-2020, 09:13 PM | #2 |
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Mannnn let’s go! You want to do 16?
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11-23-2020, 01:32 AM | #3 |
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16 done.. can drop whenever u like
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11-23-2020, 09:10 AM | #4 |
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Hmm ur last 4...
2 NS wins & 2 losses.. bald fatty not hyped or energised On such an uninspiring run it resembles that 1 time u tried to exercise & Zuch lost but voters were scared. I’m calling that unfair.. Ur shocking top head robbery was the one genetics pulled off on ya hair & ur respected? LOL I can’t bear the liars If I ever take pointers from u it’ll be with a pair of pliers Gun bar plots in ur verses but no evidence of ur plans Still no finished article.. & newspaper’s the only time residue’s on ya hands BUT I’ll prove I let the bird fly if u don’t think I’m honest Hand extended waiting for the finger motion to rock u, pinky promise As for Ad getting pussy.. I’ve seen ur pics so it’s doubtful bro For u pillow talk is pleading while I hold one over ya mouth & nose Inspiring the youngins.. I’m a force that’s filled with adrenaline If Ad’s influencing these kids it’s just corporate subliminal messaging Take advice.. ur trash so don’t doubt ur peers Start reflecting.. cos finding ur punch is like losing something in a house of mirrors 16 bitch |
11-23-2020, 02:22 PM | #5 |
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Wand feeble so I draw eagles n shotties he gettin merked now indefinitely
Bring turkey day to the UK show ur fam the spread then put the bird on his centerpiece It’s been a tough couple battles, this time dude’s getting trashed by me And way Zuch made you his bitch bet you’ll do reviews for the mag this week My bars are masterpieces, should be framed and fetch an amazin price Closest you are to art is cuz you look like one them stick figures came to life Ironic he got that bird physique and is an actual featherweight, right?? You’re literally Dave Lite, got a quarter of his skill n ur half his dang size For this queer got ratchets, or maybe I’ll make you fear the hatchet And watch the ‘axe take Wanda part’ like it’s tryna appear on black-ish Supposed to believe you a convicted killer sprayin k’s...bro ain’t no way Only time ‘Wand gettin charged’ is when he feelin frisky tryna get into some anal play Know you get a lot of Harry Potter references...the 9 give him more of that Once I put that cap on his head it’ll tell me he’s bitch how’s that for a Sorting Hat?! Summer classic was tragic, squeezed past me in last NBL...this time I’m aimin for the fences Third time’s the charm, cus the trey’ll leave you hangin like a pendent |
11-24-2020, 06:59 AM | #6 |
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Wand
2 NS wins & 2 losses.. bald fatty not hyped or energised On such an uninspiring run it resembles that 1 time u tried to exercise & ur respected? LOL I can’t bear the liars If I ever take pointers from u it’ll be with a pair of pliers Gun bar plots in ur verses but no evidence of ur plans Still no finished article.. & newspaper’s the only time residue’s on ya hands Take advice.. ur trash so don’t doubt ur peers Start reflecting.. cos finding ur punch is like losing something in a house of mirrors About average verse for you, those^were cool Shocking top head robbery was an idea reach imo. Same with pinky promise Adverse For this queer got ratchets, or maybe I’ll make you fear the hatchet And watch the ‘axe take Wanda part’ like it’s tryna appear on black-ish That^was dope, but man. Most of your verse missed. Not too many good usable ideas Sorting hat was a good try, but it's been done better Voting Wanderer |
11-25-2020, 06:58 PM | #7 |
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run/exercise was simple, okayish
top head was a lil reach.. but i liked the originality and it was funny pliers was light residue aight pinky promise.. it was original lol saw where pillow talk was gonna lead to, nah i liked the ad line closer was a banger vs centerpiece was wordy but cool reviews was ok art was a lil light dang size lol nah wasnt feelin never watched blackish anal play is questionable sorting hat was fiiiire charm is old wand dropped damn good last week.. took a lil gas off this week but last two lines hit.. there were two concepts that were reaches, coulda been fire too with some adjustments.. this was Ad’s battle to take - the middle part of his verse I just wasnt feelin.. sorting hat prob lotb for me but just wasnt enough.. v wand
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11-26-2020, 02:32 PM | #9 |
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Genetics line
Pinky promise Pillow talk Closer You are really putting shit together lately. As you’re getting better Opener was LOTB Sorting hat was cool Liked the closer Quality battle here, ad had LOTB but it goes to wanderer for consistency Nice fellas Vote wanderer |
11-26-2020, 03:23 PM | #10 |
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This battle was fire tbh
Wanderer had a really good verse. Quite a few concepts I could see myself fucking with Uninspired run, pointer pliers, pillow talk, pinky promise, ad/corporate .... These were all top level concepts with some good wording. Adverse... Nice contrast in style. Intro, zuchs bitch, blackish ... All hitters. Personally lost me with the harry potter references. Not ur fault i just never watched them. So the verse tapered. This goes to wand. Solid job fellas
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11-26-2020, 03:26 PM | #11 |
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WANDERER
2 NS wins & 2 losses.. bald fatty not hyped or energised On such an uninspiring run it resembles that 1 time u tried to exercise Ok & Zuch lost but voters were scared. I’m calling that unfair.. Ur shocking top head robbery was the one genetics pulled off on ya hair Never heard the phrase top head robbery so that makes this a stretch & ur respected? LOL I can’t bear the liars If I ever take pointers from u it’ll be with a pair of pliers Bit basic Gun bar plots in ur verses but no evidence of ur plans Still no finished article.. & newspaper’s the only time residue’s on ya hands I'm lookin for the wp but i cant find it. If there's none this is meh BUT I’ll prove I let the bird fly if u don’t think I’m honest Hand extended waiting for the finger motion to rock u, pinky promise Wasn't feelin this, pinky promise seemed out of place. As for Ad getting pussy.. I’ve seen ur pics so it’s doubtful bro For u pillow talk is pleading while I hold one over ya mouth & nose Cool Inspiring the youngins.. I’m a force that’s filled with adrenaline If Ad’s influencing these kids it’s just corporate subliminal messaging Ok Take advice.. ur trash so don’t doubt ur peers Start reflecting.. cos finding ur punch is like losing something in a house of mirrors Decent closer I liked pillow talk. After the opener I didn't like the next three, but you finished better. 6/10 VS ADVERSE Wand feeble so I draw eagles n shotties he gettin merked now indefinitely Bring turkey day to the UK show ur fam the spread then put the bird on his centerpiece Way too wordy and the rhyme wasn't solid. Punch was decent though It’s been a tough couple battles, this time dude’s getting trashed by me And way Zuch made you his bitch bet you’ll do reviews for the mag this week Ok My bars are masterpieces, should be framed and fetch an amazin price Closest you are to art is cuz you look like one them stick figures came to life Lol Ironic he got that bird physique and is an actual featherweight, right?? You’re literally Dave Lite, got a quarter of his skill n ur half his dang size Another bad rhyme. Kinda funny For this queer got ratchets, or maybe I’ll make you fear the hatchet And watch the ‘axe take Wanda part’ like it’s tryna appear on black-ish Cool wp Supposed to believe you a convicted killer sprayin k’s...bro ain’t no way Only time ‘Wand gettin charged’ is when he feelin frisky tryna get into some anal play I was wit it until the punchline. Thought the charged part would've been more relevant Know you get a lot of Harry Potter references...the 9 give him more of that Once I put that cap on his head it’ll tell me he’s bitch how’s that for a Sorting Hat?! Need some punctuation or rewording or something. I like the concept more than the way you worded the punch Summer classic was tragic, squeezed past me in last NBL...this time I’m aimin for the fences Third time’s the charm, cus the trey’ll leave you hangin like a pendent Wasn't feeling Stick figures made me laugh and axe was cool wp. 6/10 As for Ad getting pussy.. I’ve seen ur pics so it’s doubtful bro For u pillow talk is pleading while I hold one over ya mouth & nose Take advice.. ur trash so don’t doubt ur peers Start reflecting.. cos finding ur punch is like losing something in a house of mirrors VS My bars are masterpieces, should be framed and fetch an amazin price Closest you are to art is cuz you look like one them stick figures came to life For this queer got ratchets, or maybe I’ll make you fear the hatchet And watch the ‘axe take Wanda part’ like it’s tryna appear on black-ish After first read, neither verse was clearly better than the other and I have the quotables tied. I got exercise > sorting hat > centerpiece=charged for the honorable mentions. SO Vote: Adverse |
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Close: uninspiring run, head robbery, subliminal messaging Solid verse, there were a couple misses but I enjoyed the verse overall. A couple bars hit light to me but I liked most of your concepts. Quote:
Close: centerpiece, Wanda, getting charged Also came with a good verse this week, with some nice bars mixed in with misses. there wasn't anything that was really bad per se, but also nothing blew me away. Vote: Wanderer I have this even on quotes so tie breaker for me is who had the more creative punches. Between "take pointers"/"house of mirrors" and "sorting hat" Wand's stood out to me a little more. Very close battle, one of the best ones this week so props to both of you. |
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11-28-2020, 07:20 PM | #13 |
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2 NS wins & 2 losses.. bald fatty not hyped or energised
On such an uninspiring run it resembles that 1 time u tried to exercise & ur respected? LOL I can’t bear the liars If I ever take pointers from u it’ll be with a pair of pliers Inspiring the youngins.. I’m a force that’s filled with adrenaline If Ad’s influencing these kids it’s just corporate subliminal messaging Take advice.. ur trash so don’t doubt ur peers Start reflecting.. cos finding ur punch is like losing something in a house of mirrors Vs It’s been a tough couple battles, this time dude’s getting trashed by me And way Zuch made you his bitch bet you’ll do reviews for the mag this week My bars are masterpieces, should be framed and fetch an amazin price Closest you are to art is cuz you look like one them stick figures came to life For this queer got ratchets, or maybe I’ll make you fear the hatchet And watch the ‘axe take Wanda part’ like it’s tryna appear on black-ish Know you get a lot of Harry Potter references...the 9 give him more of that Once I put that cap on his head it’ll tell me he’s bitch how’s that for a Sorting Hat?! I got this battle pretty even tbh, I'll have to edge towards v/adverse
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11-30-2020, 01:34 PM | #14 |
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11-30-2020, 05:47 PM | #15 |
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