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Old 09-30-2021, 03:28 PM   #1
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Default Fracture I gave you some feedback on your Open Mic

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=149737

I appreciate all the thoughts you have to dedicate something to me, I'd normally say I am flattered. But in this case it fuckin sucked so I responded with how you should be able to write.

You can thank me later

I won't be held accountable for your actions after you read your eulogy. Maybe you can make YouTube video about it so no one can watch it
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Old 09-30-2021, 04:11 PM   #2
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I mean honestly man not a single punchline connected. LGI Trolling, just gassing you up.

Punches are structured way different now. Might have to switch some stuff up a little bro. Most of, if not all, honestly would have to double check, your punches are way too much of a statement punch. And unless it's a super Haymaker the voters don't go for it and it's too simple. Has to have complex schemes to complete with the best here.

Lars didn't do much better. And I am no top tier expert but I can tell you that verse would get zero votes in a battle here. I'd like to see if you can develop a new style, structure better, etc. Good luck
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Old 09-30-2021, 04:20 PM   #3
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I have no idea who you are man

Nor do I care for whether anything connected lmao, I've seen the lvls here and your gassing yourselfes, I am not looking for constructive feedback on something wrote up literally off the top of my head in 20 mins.

So unless you're referring to yourself and this a baron or Lars alias trying to be smart plz just stfu
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Old 09-30-2021, 04:22 PM   #4
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Nah, he’s def right.

I won that exchange too. 2-0
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Old 09-30-2021, 04:24 PM   #5
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Bobby D trash

this the guy claiming Prowlers?
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Old 09-30-2021, 04:24 PM   #6
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What you're agreeing that you suck?

2 and 0

Yes you keep typing out the shape of your body and head together it's great way to abbreiviate

Thumbs up for you baron
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lmao Bobby went off at the end.. on a complete nonsensical tangent

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this the guy claiming Prowlers?
I would trash your existence if I ever I saw such a deadbeat persona
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Old 09-30-2021, 04:26 PM   #9
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Lmao how many aliases do you have baron?
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absolutely god awful response by Bobby D

lol @ claiming he wrote in 20 mins
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Now we know how you won all your battles, by copying cane and creating aliases


Lmao you're the worst
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I mean honestly man not a single punchline connected. LGI Trolling, just gassing you up.

Punches are structured way different now. Might have to switch some stuff up a little bro. Most of, if not all, honestly would have to double check, your punches are way too much of a statement punch. And unless it's a super Haymaker the voters don't go for it and it's too simple. Has to have complex schemes to complete with the best here.

Lars didn't do much better. And I am no top tier expert but I can tell you that verse would get zero votes in a battle here. I'd like to see if you can develop a new style, structure better, etc. Good luck

Man I haven't read a text verse since 2007

But bobby definitely won
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Baron 6 alises over 6 years ?


You're literally the saddest of all men ive come across on a message board

I'm literally dying in laughter
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Old 09-30-2021, 04:31 PM   #14
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lmao they were just throwaways i had from the night before tbh

i won’t use them elsewhere so just dropped them for you anyway
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Man I haven't read a text verse since 2007

But bobby definitely won
Just baron talking to himself lgi I wouldn't even sweat it
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Lol just realized everyone in here is Lars
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Lmao Is this behaviour normal for him or have I finally made him crack!? Lmao
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Lmao Is this behaviour normal for him or have I finally made him crack!? Lmao
Hard to say. Every time I try to find out who someone is it ends up being Lars, though.
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LMAO

netcees is 3 active guys


The rest just baron aliases, he probably giving himself feedback on his own verses and replying to his own threads on a distant internet board far away
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I'm starting to think I'm larz to


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