09-30-2021, 03:28 PM | #1 |
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Fracture I gave you some feedback on your Open Mic
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=149737
I appreciate all the thoughts you have to dedicate something to me, I'd normally say I am flattered. But in this case it fuckin sucked so I responded with how you should be able to write. You can thank me later I won't be held accountable for your actions after you read your eulogy. Maybe you can make YouTube video about it so no one can watch it |
09-30-2021, 04:11 PM | #2 |
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I mean honestly man not a single punchline connected. LGI Trolling, just gassing you up.
Punches are structured way different now. Might have to switch some stuff up a little bro. Most of, if not all, honestly would have to double check, your punches are way too much of a statement punch. And unless it's a super Haymaker the voters don't go for it and it's too simple. Has to have complex schemes to complete with the best here. Lars didn't do much better. And I am no top tier expert but I can tell you that verse would get zero votes in a battle here. I'd like to see if you can develop a new style, structure better, etc. Good luck |
09-30-2021, 04:20 PM | #3 |
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I have no idea who you are man
Nor do I care for whether anything connected lmao, I've seen the lvls here and your gassing yourselfes, I am not looking for constructive feedback on something wrote up literally off the top of my head in 20 mins. So unless you're referring to yourself and this a baron or Lars alias trying to be smart plz just stfu |
09-30-2021, 04:22 PM | #4 |
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Nah, he’s def right.
I won that exchange too. 2-0
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09-30-2021, 04:24 PM | #5 |
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Bobby D trash
this the guy claiming Prowlers? |
09-30-2021, 04:24 PM | #6 |
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What you're agreeing that you suck?
2 and 0 Yes you keep typing out the shape of your body and head together it's great way to abbreiviate Thumbs up for you baron |
09-30-2021, 04:25 PM | #7 |
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lmao Bobby went off at the end.. on a complete nonsensical tangent
hot garbage |
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09-30-2021, 04:26 PM | #9 |
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Lmao how many aliases do you have baron?
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09-30-2021, 04:26 PM | #10 |
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absolutely god awful response by Bobby D
lol @ claiming he wrote in 20 mins |
09-30-2021, 04:26 PM | #11 |
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Now we know how you won all your battles, by copying cane and creating aliases
Lmao you're the worst |
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Quote:
Man I haven't read a text verse since 2007 But bobby definitely won |
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09-30-2021, 04:27 PM | #13 |
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Baron 6 alises over 6 years ?
You're literally the saddest of all men ive come across on a message board I'm literally dying in laughter |
09-30-2021, 04:31 PM | #14 |
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lmao they were just throwaways i had from the night before tbh
i won’t use them elsewhere so just dropped them for you anyway
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09-30-2021, 04:49 PM | #16 |
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Lol just realized everyone in here is Lars
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09-30-2021, 04:51 PM | #18 |
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Hard to say. Every time I try to find out who someone is it ends up being Lars, though.
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09-30-2021, 04:54 PM | #19 |
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LMAO
netcees is 3 active guys The rest just baron aliases, he probably giving himself feedback on his own verses and replying to his own threads on a distant internet board far away |
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