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05-02-2022, 08:23 PM | #1 |
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This thread is for username and only username, so if you're not username stay the fuck out
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Link to my newest battle cause video embed doesn’t seem to work on phones https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UE044GrYSXo Last edited by Answer; 05-03-2022 at 07:01 AM. |
05-03-2022, 01:06 AM | #2 |
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Bro, where's my tag team tournament accomplishment? I don't write on this site for nothing.
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05-03-2022, 12:42 PM | #3 |
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i turned it off after the 8th gunbar so like, 2 minutes in, but yo, you've got good energy and decent presence despite the lisp. boisterous and shit.
try taking a walk though brother every now and then. respect. |
05-03-2022, 04:16 PM | #4 |
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Gonna watch when I get home, gracias
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05-03-2022, 06:11 PM | #5 |
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technically I'm a username, wucha need chief
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05-03-2022, 09:02 PM | #6 | |
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05-04-2022, 03:00 AM | #7 |
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Man, that TSA bar is so damn good.
Are you looking for feedback here? You know that I think your material is elite, - you're one of the best to ever do it in text. But I do have some notes on delivery.
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05-04-2022, 05:20 AM | #8 |
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If you got anything specific def let me know. I definitely feel like I need to change my approach and do some things different next battle but haven’t really figured out what exactly apart from slowing it down. The lisp shit is something I have to work around, so I’ve considered going more comedic but I do feel like being able to use aggression and bark on people is an asset. I’ve considered aggressively joking and/or just REEALLY slowing down my rounds and letting punches marinate. There’s a dude named madface who kinda raps like that and pulls it off fairly well. but it runs the risk of people not reacting followed by long awkward pauses
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05-04-2022, 06:46 AM | #9 | |
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In terms of the aggression/bark, I think that’s probably more of a subjective thing and bottom line you should just do what feels right for you with that, but for me personally I preferred how you rapped the tag tourney verses in that mag - a bit of a bark in parts, depending on the material, but not so constant. It probably works best with attack/gun bars, less so when you’re just clowning on your opponent. I don’t really notice the lisp in either form of delivery tbh. It’s there, but it’s not like… distracting or anything. Already looking forward to seeing the next one.
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05-04-2022, 08:14 AM | #10 | |
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At this point just give your bars to someone who can deliver them. They're good but like come on. |
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05-04-2022, 08:14 AM | #11 | |
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The sort of comical/gross/pauseworthy stuff hasn't really gone over quite as well in live battles in my experience. And I cant really test out material here til there's an active battle scene again I appreciate all your feedback though. I'm def gonna try to slow it down and do deliberate pauses for the next one and see how it works out |
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05-04-2022, 09:57 AM | #12 | |
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05-04-2022, 10:00 AM | #13 |
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LMAO @ Barnes and noble. Dope.
Have you used that school bus line yet? That’s one of very few bars I can remember I genuinely LOL’d reading. Obv don’t use that aggressive delivery for either of those though. You can reword and use any of my bars if you want to and if ghostwriting’s not a thing that’s frowned upon in that scene.
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05-04-2022, 10:18 AM | #14 | |
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and there are still people that don't really know I'm deaf, so I'm still letting them catch on. Once it's clear, I'll prob use the school bus line |
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05-04-2022, 10:39 AM | #15 |
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05-05-2022, 06:04 PM | #16 |
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i dont even undersatnd either side. sound like hav bb stroke while being shy and confident same time.
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