01-10-2023, 12:24 PM | #1 |
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XI WK V: Adverse (3-1) vs. Master Rock (3-1) (MASTER ROCK WINS)
Season 11 XI VERSES: Monday, January, 16th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion VOTES: Wednesday, January 18th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty MAXIMUM: 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON! Goodluck! @Adverse @Master Rock TOPIC:
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01-10-2023, 12:53 PM | #2 |
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Oh no!!! Not Adverse!!! Lol! I'm going to have to take extra care on this one.
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01-10-2023, 05:34 PM | #3 |
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Yay I get an opponent that will show up, what’s up Rock?
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01-17-2023, 02:36 AM | #5 |
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01-17-2023, 07:01 PM | #6 |
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Dragging my creaking limbs through the shadows of this frigid atmosphere...drenched in cold sweat I can feel the reaper in the mist as he draws near, leaving trails of scorched earth behind, the cold sears the ground, life declines, wilting away, brittling benign decay, scythe rips the turf away The air's bitterly cold, death reaches out its digits attempting to take ahold, inching towards me in a way where I can feel it's toll, splintering, the weight of air pushing me down delivering stabs, like a thousand needles, syringe jab, nip in the night, I'm quivering pleading for my soul, hoping that these aren't my last rites body shaking, my spirit aching, I'm gasping for breath in the dense fog, darkness laughs, ready to feast, what a disgusting hog, this fire pit blazing, the ambers spit, upon its ravenous appetite I witness its mouths drip for nothing sweet, just the maggots that are festering upon the flesh of rotted meat the butcher is ready for swine, no surrender, and no retreat everyone needs to nourish, I broke bread, but their fill is to eat gluttony, apparently, jealousy is the poor man's lunchmeat, In the woods, these men are armed and strapped to the teeth There's no rest inside this piece of me frantically throbbing, my blood rushing pounding, the heartbeats the death drums and hear the song in silent deep sweep as I hear them speak, as well as the echoing howls amongst the beast These once so-called friends are now the enemy, and solace's thief in the night to steal my light, flash before my eyes, I hear my mother's cries heeding the warning that those men aren't quite your size disregarding her message, because I believed my own ignorance lies, in bed with gullibility, pillow-fighting with my own sensibilities With every step I take, another flood of memories begin to break, while I gasp for breath Laughter, good times, right now this turn of events take, left cross my chest, I fall to my knees, face in the dirt turn to repent while I hear the forest exhale, breathe, its vents They inch closer, I could sense their scent in the dew, they draw closer while I'm running on instinct and I don't know what to do I hear the rustling leaves, twigs crack while they pursue, while shots rang out I stumbled into a bush within view, disguised inside, and glimpsed at their ravenous figures armed with their devilish stride, the moonlight cried But in corner of my eyes, while my tears welted inside, through the dense haze, in the distance a glint began to spark in a fiery blaze, heard it speaking to me in a low hum draped, seek me for escape take my hand before death forms its shape I grasp as a light radiated around my chase, astonished as it bore me so tight in its glistening wings golden fire stunning bright The seraphim beamed ready to deliver me from my threatening plight stunned the hunters' eyes gleam filled with their light, as they gazed upon its heavenly sight, Falling to their knees begging for forgiveness as a final plead The demons get expunged ending their dark deeds I watched as I basked in the seraph's light grace was upon me as walked into the torn pages of future's write
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