04-24-2023, 02:04 AM | #1 |
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Week 2: Blue Bayou (1-0) vs. DynamiCz (1-0) - BB WINS
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You know the drill. Due Dates: Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ @Blue Bayou @DynamiCz |
04-24-2023, 02:08 AM | #2 |
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04-24-2023, 07:54 PM | #3 |
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04-27-2023, 03:56 PM | #4 |
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04-28-2023, 09:34 PM | #5 |
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Slime u out when you agitate a Snake, We torture him to local news indicate a break
They find you in the Waters! Parasites Inside Bayou, it look like a Contaminated Lake// Hacked his location, I'm good with the trace! It's gruesome what we do in the place They couldn't identify him at first, Lack Of Oxygen confirmed he was Blue In The Face// 2018, we moved the weight in the mud! New era... they opened the gate to the flood Me an JB looked up to you! Then it was Jealous Sibling: We seen the Hate In Yo Blood// Hitman, Death calls soon I hear a text hit! Blade, I'm the one you fear next wit Sharp end went in his Stomach, then it Left Out the Back like a Rear Exit// Home Invasion, we had to do him dirty! What i Pull Up & Lift don't need a Gym buddy Hidden Cameras on u... We Watched Ya Movements On Screen, I did the Film Study// 2 Shooters, 1 Driver, it's a handful I can deal with! Bad thoughts with this steel fifth May 1991, My Family was really Outside Shooting Summertime, That's Will Smith// Never trust Blue, he why the loyalty stop! Bag on his head... cost a royalty drop Bullets rip his Outfit, to bad the Stitches he need ain't from a Embroidery Shop// Funeral, i hope the suit stretchable! Pics of ya Casket, we made the shoot flexible You finally get to Grow Underground with the Soil... he died a Root Vegetable//
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04-28-2023, 11:50 PM | #6 |
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Hell of an NFL Draft so far...
if i blow coverage, my receiver got behind me & did somethin to win if your wife blows coverage, i put a condom on so she’s not touching my skin what's that discharge leaking from her puss?! no way that sad slit is pleasant i'm more terrified of What's in the Box than Brad Pitt in Seven shoot his legs arms and shoulders til he's fearing it's his grave shit, the way these bullets Pepperdine they'll start cheering for the Waves you're facing certain death and it is hopeless Jetsons Maid...when the Sweeper Comes Out your Chest is getting Opened roll up with the Dummy & bust the clip Scope on your Little Ones. they're in the 'thick of it now' like Honey I Shrunk The Kids man this rapper's a dumb fuck i'll take Dine-Out with a Couple Clicks even faster than GrubHub one hook’ll put you out on the street cuz my hands are direct if Dyna put someone out on the street, it was his wife.. when he gambled the rent just copped a new Benz. thumb scan. freshened the plates Dyn knows about keyless entry too. he broke in a window & was arrested for rape
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04-29-2023, 04:29 AM | #7 | |
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Slime u out when you agitate a Snake, We torture him to local news indicate a break
They find you in the Waters! Parasites Inside Bayou, it look like a Contaminated Lake// Okay, not bad. Wording could've been a lil better. Hacked his location, I'm good with the trace! It's gruesome what we do in the place They couldn't identify him at first, Lack Of Oxygen confirmed he was Blue In The Face// I like this. 2018, we moved the weight in the mud! New era... they opened the gate to the flood Me an JB looked up to you! Then it was Jealous Sibling: We seen the Hate In Yo Blood// Cool JB flip... Hitman, Death calls soon I hear a text hit! Blade, I'm the one you fear next wit Sharp end went in his Stomach, then it Left Out the Back like a Rear Exit// Fire. Home Invasion, we had to do him dirty! What i Pull Up & Lift don't need a Gym buddy Hidden Cameras on u... We Watched Ya Movements On Screen, I did the Film Study// Lol feeling this... 2 Shooters, 1 Driver, it's a handful I can deal with! Bad thoughts with this steel fifth May 1991, My Family was really Outside Shooting Summertime, That's Will Smith// Okay creative. Never trust Blue, he why the loyalty stop! Bag on his head... cost a royalty drop Bullets rip his Outfit, to bad the Stitches he need ain't from a Embroidery Shop// Lol aight. Funeral, i hope the suit stretchable! Pics of ya Casket, we made the shoot flexible You finally get to Grow Underground with the Soil... he died a Root Vegetable// Dope punch here. Solid finish. Overall pretty good man. For the most it was solid. Keep dropping. Blue Hell of an NFL Draft so far... if i blow coverage, my receiver got behind me & did somethin to win if your wife blows coverage, i put a condom on so she’s not touching my skin ROFL, this was crazy. what's that discharge leaking from her puss?! no way that sad slit is pleasant i'm more terrified of What's in the Box than Brad Pitt in Seven Wooo... Fire reference perfect wording. Love this. shoot his legs arms and shoulders til he's fearing it's his grave shit, the way these bullets Pepperdine they'll start cheering for the Waves Cool name flip you're facing certain death and it is hopeless Jetsons Maid...when the Sweeper Comes Out your Chest is getting Opened Very clever, delivery could've been more polished. roll up with the Dummy & bust the clip Scope on your Little Ones. they're in the 'thick of it now' like Honey I Shrunk The Kids Lol aight. Sick. man this rapper's a dumb fuck i'll take Dine-Out with a Couple Clicks even faster than GrubHub Feeling it. one hook’ll put you out on the street cuz my hands are direct if Dyna put someone out on the street, it was his wife.. when he gambled the rent Lol just copped a new Benz. thumb scan. freshened the plates Dyn knows about keyless entry too. he broke in a window & was arrested for rape Good closer. Overall the same Blue I remember. Was nice to see you still at it and just as creative. Very solid verse although I see you def played around alittle. Vote - Blue Good battle fellas, feel like Blue was more consistent but both had solid verses. Great battle boys. __________________
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04-29-2023, 07:21 AM | #8 |
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it was an epic one for the archives that got me flush&excited on a long vote with a lot of technical detail.
Dy may have seen the final feed of his verse around 425 AM USA ET. I had BLUE with one of the greatest battle verses I've seen in a dozen years online. [admitted sportswriter bias, with of course some satire-play & critical nitpicks of his style/substance/execution]. VS. Dy's legendary attempt...he knows I like this heat but Blue did to him what he did to Rican last week...just brought v.o.t.w. that might not be touched for a couple months. But neither will Dy's. Felt that Dy's was more original, raw-er, more aggressive however, blue just kept hitting 9-9.8 areas on at least 3-4X punches and I couldn't not call the close one. This was all after the nice hype-intro I laid out, which set the stage well for the breakdown & for future voters enthusiasm. Next. There is no fucking next. TRY TO TOP THIS BATTLE BEFORE THE LEAGUE FIZZLES... ANY2GUYS? lol ~ |
04-29-2023, 07:31 AM | #9 |
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I liked the opener, lack of oxygen and embroidery stitches
Great flow throughout. Few ideas here were alil swag n flowy Opener, seven, jetsons maid, & grub hub Some good hits here. Blue edges it. V. Blue Bayou |
04-30-2023, 12:50 PM | #10 |
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04-30-2023, 01:42 PM | #11 |
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* lack of oxygen was cool (probably played on him but I liked the wording)
* Embroidery Shop was clean, could have used some clean up on the wording but I liked it * closer would have been so much better if you would have gone with the opener as the punch and worded a little differently vs * In the box was funny * Pepperdine was cool * Jettsons maid was also cool, opener could have used more thought to tie it together tho * Dine-out was a cool concept.. wording made the execution feel like it was missing something to put it over the edge cool battle, Dynas writing is really dope but it seems more aimed at audio style. I don't think it'll take him much to convert it over to text style though, he had some great concepts that I saw. Blue was also cool, I haven't read anything from him for a few years. I don't think a lot of his stuff was fire but the consistency was great. This was a good battle to read through so I appreciate ya'll putting in the time. v/blue |
04-30-2023, 01:45 PM | #12 |
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Slime u out when you agitate a Snake, We torture him to local news indicate a break
They find you in the Waters! Parasites Inside Bayou, it look like a Contaminated Lake// Hacked his location, I'm good with the trace! It's gruesome what we do in the place They couldn't identify him at first, Lack Of Oxygen confirmed he was Blue In The Face// Never trust Blue, he why the loyalty stop! Bag on his head... cost a royalty drop Bullets rip his Outfit, to bad the Stitches he need ain't from a Embroidery Shop// vs if i blow coverage, my receiver got behind me & did somethin to win if your wife blows coverage, i put a condom on so she’s not touching my skin what's that discharge leaking from her puss?! no way that sad slit is pleasant i'm more terrified of What's in the Box than Brad Pitt in Seven you're facing certain death and it is hopeless Jetsons Maid...when the Sweeper Comes Out your Chest is getting Opened roll up with the Dummy & bust the clip Scope on your Little Ones. they're in the 'thick of it now' like Honey I Shrunk The Kids man this rapper's a dumb fuck i'll take Dine-Out with a Couple Clicks even faster than GrubHub awesome battle guys.. digging Dynamicz flow its pretty constant throughout.. Contaminated Lakes was cool and blue in the face had swag. BOTW. good misses over all I just mentioned the highlights. Blue came a notch up here with lines like GrubHub and se7en which are the standouts for me. I had the seven line in my notes but never could execute it. ultimately Blue had the better misses got Blue |
04-30-2023, 07:26 PM | #13 |
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Blue Bayou Wins 5-0
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