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I went to quote what I liked, and left the whole thing quoted. I greatly enjoyed how the whole thing was composed of indivdual, coherent sentences. Not to shit on anyone using phrases separated by commas, or like people utilizing creative license for sentences in their pieces. But this is refreshing to see the opposite hand.
Especially in the beginning-- great job of chopping up the structure to avoid falling into a lull. Interesting message and on the first read through, found it engaging/ captivating. keep writing
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Dope drop, Eng. Superb actually. The writing was extremely fluid and littered with incredible schemes, vocabulary, imagery and insight. Thanks for sharing. Peace.
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fuck u asshole roast this fucking ARROGENT Eng lol browing his FAVORITE ALIAS DROP THAT I INSTA FED SUCKED lol fffffs hahahahah he aint something but hes a smnall adult lars and fucking emcee no CLASS CHILDREN TRLLING oh yeah. up and next. |
05-06-2023, 10:18 AM | #24 |
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behave, man.
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No nyc. Thrat time has passed 2016 mllp had the chance w the whole site but no one close my life out befor finally 1.5 yr mhiatus. Allllrigbt this arrogant upstate topical. Fuck I haven’t done an it since exampleeeee fucking trolling for topicaliss disabling Lars in real battles when Uni and I waaaaaay better at baiting Lars aaaand writing then u llol a fucking decade ny u trollll saying fk ur suedos. On bbs best shit ( even in veritas sopeness unconv unlike ur shitty bored upstate steroid. Blue aaaand barc bragging better bags on take home one night sleuths aaanaad bag than u evvvvwr could as u shi fuck u trolling. Worrrrse than me n childlike Lars alias games f u to have another line of K u idiot mixed w something dark on the rox Toooo name brand for dead man’s frugal generic booze assss he buys in bulk cuz he had so much to catch up on meeee alll over nyc. Real Fukin articles for dead.-real readers while u hop on ask for forgotten b-t pw sending ur next trolll longbar to sinacog just to eveeeen compete eight emcee egos on fking discussion aj me since Fukin march dropping hog keys I can’t touch as u trolll evvvry 2013 nihilis t who outvote ur inflated fuck ego ( dull ez more entertaining and he dosing have to fling topicalize me directly. Yeah psycho babble wasn’t juaaaar for me u frog ant pric read my one 2016 rant of paranoid got inspppiriired like no 201e guy everrr could mimick dead for u me n Lars while we get called trolsss wvvaaqftive pic roasts 2023 while u sit n. U n w. Never feeding u again Seth roast eng n om head Bette than u everrr got Lars on ur best day clock ba and rb and Learn from lammmme suicikdl Egyptian me n editors. Fu gain on closer nyc ignooooring the biggest bait drop article discussing nvm fk ignore it til ‘27. Idiot
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Lol
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not a lot bro. you good? i feel like me, you and @Pakistani Hand Cannon were supposed to collab but it got lost to the ether. as a nod to the halycon era when people actually used to write, eh. |
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also, this verse is fucking excellent and among the best things i've ever written or performed
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Followed by your Lover (at least in writtens) NYC the goat Troll with Uni NOT Lars lol. (topical of course with HUSH tutoring me, aero, and psycho ANthony for a decde) Right ENG, we needed just this last little sself-fucking feed that pharaohs has been trol,ling on since we SUCKED YOUR FUCKING punctuation lol and whoevere else fake-fed-motherfucking-alias satire of BBS psychologist ghostwriting for Veritas and Dull (who lets face it dull's fucking comitted suicide at this pt UNLESS dead man shared burbon to catch up on my mastery of this site). I cannot resist ENg and u deserve it. ; . , tutuorials on OM Chat from the editor persona that you love secretly. |
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Yup now that my money is ascending I’m gonna start visiting some of the people actually worth visiting on here. There are only a handful, 5-7 or so. Weekend in London with eng and paki would be cool. I’d visit deadman in Chicago but I think he’s too shy.
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Idiots this guy toast me here perfect in one sentence. Not a dirty troll vote motivate right. Sway ad hom Uni? Not 7-8 years if fun trolling goats right lars? Not anyone not mmlp lame jester lol not jeso. Satan psych drugs u k is yah Eng everything revised here for number one goat eng spoke that word lolll Yep this masochist put to sleeeeep in one sent which is all emcees alias Pussy ever craved or whine roasted begged for. Fuckin yes eng love it bye Thanks Kung lol nice site here bud old leg. |
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As you can see this was supposed to be my walk-away moment
TORCHED ONE SENTENCE JEZUZ ENG YEAH MEAND FAIRIE EMCEE LOVE IT BUT i'm sure the editor will have some harrrsh words for your ....no no.... no im done lol right NYC get a life dude so like ONLY KEPt posting here cuz of all the fucking cleanup that prolly allen knight and few others diode i hope have been helping me out with -idiot fucking UK egos who think they're better tahn every writer with their standard multi narriatve.....SD:JKLfasjkda ;jkldgs ;jklsee succinct? -sinacog's biting ass fucking biter NOW I BIT ALL MY LIFE HERE BUT I FUCKING QUOTE/ SAY AUTHOR/ SAY WHO ON TRACK INTRO OR OUTRO U KNOW WHAT .............see AK I'm explaining again for fknn reading comprehensions (Not eng and nyc course these guys fukin Oxford Syracuse geniuses right nyc u arroge..............asdfjlasd;fklasd already said -lastly trying to complement fragile DY (jk hes cool) and RYno (cool now to as we so like) NYC some day and i donno when prolly when dull or dead give you one line of bad fucking feed or a lol right dull? Dpressed fucking fairy here im talkin shit on u all over so proper tag dallas @dull boy SPORTS IS RIGHT right NYC some day you'll absorb a few contratian takes on abortion/trans/ whatever contrarian shit I'm taking yahoo jounralist ans commenets to skewl on like this site.asd fasd;klfjklasd ;jklafgsjkl already said wrap it up for eng eng afjsdfjkl ONE SENTENCE IM SO GONE ONE SENTENCE LARS NOT A PIC FUCK ALIASFEST NOT A FUCKING BADD VOTE HUMORVIORSE LOLLL |
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Now of course HOL better let me write to the "Enjoy The Silence" Depeche Mode Remix, as we have provided for Ryno's and yes Dull's writing needs on their walls (Dull I'm JK alot bud;;; sure ur mental healht's fine and you are so close to BB and and ENG..well and NYC and dead...and me and zygote and lars and witty u know what Dull u are so on the top 50 LOL) Now notice, @sral the (ironic) SUBTELY for eng's needs, of not Spam Linking the Youtube Beat underneath as I have all Spring, right. A proper quote, text, no link, and btw gentlemen EVERY other version of that gay 80s song can go to hell except for the Remix cited above. Quote:
Wow so sick of that fucking beat ryno/dull fuck it u can delte teh wall link too I raped that shit on 2-3 writtens already BEAT-switch RN HOL and I'm gonna need a 15-30 leeway /extention on the soft flaccid deadline u fucking demandingg..... EDITING boring nonrhymey shit* ================================================== ======================== Last edited by emcee squared; 05-09-2023 at 10:43 PM. |
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Just a quick shoutout to a Tampa rapper/group, Jayco Bandz...tryin' to get a lil' airplay ("Chasin Dreams")...and they said:
"I'm tryin'ta chase my dreams & just | Do Better." {x2 Option for Spree's Bridge} "feelin' clever", they said, and they didn't even see @Objective say it here. I've gone deep into race (not even me). Hunters on the chase, at least I believed. Or wanted. When the blueberry "Muffin" was Taunted; rather: Bitten. And Hallucinogenic Phonetics were tempting due to them being strictly forbidden. Quick trip to the kitchen; p'rhaps a snack... Refill on coffee because Egyptians were Tired from Spam Damn as we go in, everythings an intro as EnGkNowS sick flows. Borderline "Dynamic"; or was that just the ego. talking. spamming. a moment of glory for someone who waited 8+ years for justice but trust(this) only the editor enjoys egoless as I, broke character. Cried perhaps? Never; cep't for the ______ {spree saw it; geno did 2 ONE TIME (dull)} *not part of verse Eng don't say; yes, the and Vapid is the word tyvm I'll repeat it often as I wish for Vapeo's Vape Pen yea now; as two trusted "genyii"-- ah yes. I Catoregize. Guessing alii' stylez & A.I. recursive Learned it. Burned it. Earned it; argubly.....(right?) yes and as the Director placed a proper MEME saw what he had Wrought oh how he must've felt same way i feel now or did, an hr ago Now Sandra... of course away; idle. vacation from the firm. Our "speaker" providing the technical difference 'tween Slander & Libel as he of course SUPPORTS (maybe) the screenplay of those 10 just Working Above and again the "fem"... yes bowls of cereal and satanic collaborations in the forest (my best work Lars/Blue but Too Deep) Cracked me as only a subtle ..... ... . ... etc the jesters yes he did fill(in)for Sandra a "dry" nod -- perhaps the driest - aswe prefer Oxford over our own upstate Technical Scholarships...[/QUOTE] |
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Sucked Thx
I k r man TYYY u know I've been spamming so bisy
I didnt think you had it in you to mimic Eng so well and btw i know it's my laame summation bs shit but you really came thru here bud on that PM and (yeah woulda been for PA but it's just that full inbox u know with stuf fi dont really wanna delte etc.) yeah for all the AI and tech and billions of threads here u'd think they'd fix a bigger .... ajfsefasd;fjlasdfjkla;fjkl no prob no probl the emcee alias is where i wanted this beautiful EngMimic PM ghostjob CLOSEOUT god lars it's been so fun trolling text with you AND INSULTING OUR EXISTENCES LOL but yeah real feed on NO FUCK U THAT OLDE ENGLISH LINK THAHT VULGAR MAYBE LIKED FUCKIN SUCKS I CANT GET TRHU TH FIRST 4 LINES <3 always dude |
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