01-31-2013, 07:54 PM | #1 |
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Join Date: Aug 1997
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Round 2: Cimmerian vs NoetiC
NoetiC:
You're a newborn. Write you experience/feel in the first 6 months. An empty canvas.... a blank void of life that has yet to be damaged imagine if you will that life is standing still and looking back among the years is a picture you can feel everything that changed you, had an impact on your life the moments that curved the path you initially had liked well i see that path before me, the light is very dim as i havent met the errors that reside in human skin but this voice inside my head will probably take years to be able to speak in a language that isnt deaf to elder ears these legs i got, simply arnt that stable to stand up for what i believe in... even when i'm able my eyes are baby blue, but soon they will change in all my innocence, their the first to be stained i gaze into my hands and wonder if they can build a better a life than the life my parents had and thats really it, the feeling that i get when i'm raised by my sister as mom's is makin rent as the more i get to know this world i came upon i know the older that i get, the more lonely i become as this empty canvas paints a picture over years the shades lead to black, but not as it appears and empty canvas Cimmerian no-shows. |
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