07-18-2013, 08:29 PM | #2 |
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to many bumps in the road, toes stubbed in the wholes
aint seen a win -win situation in years, nor a comforting zone trumpets are blown, of which the prisoner doesnt condone cause he just split a niggas wig when all he wants is the phone something explodes, blows up in his brain the moment he snaps went on a murder spree and bodies cascaded, theres no going back every opponant he's had gets sent straight to hell when hes focussed hes a fucking hothead, that why his 10x10 fucking cell is the coldest felonies open, still facing trial and court dates are to come at this point hell never be free, and die of old age in his bunk
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07-18-2013, 08:36 PM | #3 |
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The all knowing source gives us water and terra for use
Tesla swag stopped. Monopolistic lightning era of Zeus Black alchemy morphs criminals to chimera abuse Bus hits. IPhone starin', this era's aloof It's backwards: lipstick brushin, mascara in tubes Camoflauge Northface, search the Sahara for Moose The flipside of extroverted techies, sterile recluse. Dead silence. NASA shotgunning feral abuse As technology levels up, explodin barrel of two Humanity evolves yeah, but there's peril in youth Mushroom clouds Nagasaki blind sclera profuse. |
07-18-2013, 08:39 PM | #4 |
...DA GAWD...
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V/ NYC
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07-18-2013, 08:40 PM | #5 |
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this was dope tho |
07-18-2013, 08:40 PM | #6 |
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Very good indeed from both of you! Wow! Genocide you are seriously impressing me! I love your storytelling. It is very top notch. spitz is also very impressive, i love the shortness but such imagery, the lower half your verse totally dominated! NASA and nagasaki, wow, mindblown. So close!
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07-18-2013, 08:42 PM | #7 |
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Yes, NYC absolutely went on another mode towards the last part.
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07-18-2013, 08:44 PM | #8 |
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V/Geno
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07-18-2013, 08:48 PM | #9 |
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07-18-2013, 08:49 PM | #10 |
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idk tbh. but i read em for what its worth
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07-18-2013, 08:50 PM | #11 |
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Fuckin dope battle. Both these verses are dope in every facet
Very tough battle. One ruggid swag type story. The other was about the populace and our new age of vanity, with depth to it. Both had damn near perfect flows. This is the champ match, cause you should both advance although I haven't read my opponents. V NYC simply because to have this much depth, meat if you will, with all these thoughts and concepts in a short period of time to write for is very difficult. Close as fuck though. Two masterpieces in all honesty
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07-18-2013, 08:53 PM | #12 |
...DA GAWD...
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NYC wins
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07-18-2013, 08:55 PM | #13 |
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great verse nyc.
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07-18-2013, 08:58 PM | #14 |
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Wow
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