Contender Match: Plot (6-3) vs Tic Tac (6-6)-TAC WINS

Sharp · 03-03-2014, 08:45 PM

NBL Season 7
Week 14

Due FRIDAY, March 7th

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
You MUST vote on 4 battles & post your links in the Voting Thread
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Plot @Tic Tac

Tic · 03-03-2014, 11:42 PM

Check. How many lines you wanna go?

Plot · 03-04-2014, 12:12 AM

Hey man, 10s fine

Tic · 03-07-2014, 10:09 AM

Plot AKA Dystopian *Nik called him out after he PM'd Nik complaining about a vote, below is a PM he sent me

Quote:

Originally Posted by Plot

Its fine.

But I honestly cant believe you voted like that,
Wording? How is it not worded properly?
And my last bar? unfucKWITable, kwiting at the centre of his namesake?
Did I need to spell these out for you?

...I mean what the fuck is a flat bush?
How is that Plot thinkens line good?

Its all fine tho

Beating me is Far-Fetched, but Dog is so stupid he’ll have nothing to say
I mean, he’s Dropped the Ball before…but this time, he started running away
You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah
Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma
I Drop Names on the regular, you bitch about votes in PMS now I’m tryin’a stop ya
When you Drop Names the result’s more embarrassing than Travolta live at the Oscars
Your rhymes are never Sick, you should really Doctor ya style
Son go’n need First Aid so bad you’d think Strikta Fathered your child
You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week
Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league

Quote:

Originally Posted by Plot

Working the cards. Got a few cool tricks, mostly using the bottom card.

Tic · 03-08-2014, 08:17 AM

Take the ext. Don't no show me please @Plot

Plot · 03-08-2014, 12:53 PM

Plot styles menacing, lines are all life sentences, your vilest enemy,
Sorry man, but IRL I've been to busy and didn't get to write anything.
If I just keystyle the voters will just be bored, so fuck the free thoughts,
So Tic-Tac should def. win coz at least he did that on his keyboard.
Damn dude, hate you heaps and just wish I had a rhyme I could drop,
But I don't so, just give this one to tick-talk like the chimes of a clock.
His verse was dope, like he really timed with his shot and its hurting me,
Took the shit serious, browsed through history and dug up some dirt on me.
Snapping all vertebrae, bound to lose but Ive been busy, its not coz Im lazy
So there is no way I'm winning this in hectic, that shit would be crazy.

Answer · 03-08-2014, 02:03 PM

You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah
Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma

You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week
Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league

vs

nothing

Tic needs to work on his wording more than anything imo. There were a couple of lines that could've been effective if they had ended with more of a sting. Plot's verse was essentially 10 lines of saying "Vote for Tic Tac" half of which was filler - and sure, there were some parts that were slightly funny but nothing that's worth quoting. I won't even bother pointing out anything plot should work on because it wasn't a legitimate attempt, I'm sure he can do much better than that

MVGT - Tic Tac

Greed · 03-08-2014, 05:26 PM

Plot I sat there and read your whole verse like you were going somewhere with it smh.

V tic

Bender · 03-08-2014, 09:41 PM

Plot just keyed something but instead of punches he said to vote for Tic.

Tic you are getting better but def need to word your punches to be more effective

easy.choice here.

vote-tic tac

03-09-2014, 09:35 AM

Yea, this was a complete waste of my time to be honest. Its clear and obvious who the winner was.

V/Tac

Tic · 03-09-2014, 12:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed

Plot I sat there and read your whole verse like you were going somewhere with it smh.

V tic

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bender

Plot just keyed something but instead of punches he said to vote for Tic.

Tic you are getting better but def need to word your punches to be more effective

easy.choice here.

vote-tic tac

Quote:

Originally Posted by Trademark

Yea, this was a complete waste of my time to be honest. Its clear and obvious who the winner was.

V/Tac

Could you guys perhaps leave some feed?

03-09-2014, 12:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tic Tac

Could you guys perhaps leave some feed?

Yes, bruh. Message me your verse. On the crackberry ATM and can't really copy and paste on this wack phone and my iPhone's charging.

ill nik-A · 03-09-2014, 01:29 PM

Plot, a verse usually tends to be a set up line followed by a punch, I didn't see many punches, ur verse was just telling but not enough dissing ur opponent, the point is being creative while belittling ur opponent and u failed to do that, tic tac was more aggressive and has a better grasp of constructing punch lines, that bottom card was dope man

Vote tic tac

Plot · 03-09-2014, 02:23 PM

Um that was a 'Im not showing' verse, I don't know why this is even being voted,
...Tic kinda begged me to drop coz he had a nice drop, I felt bad that I didn't have
time to write this week so I started writing a like: Sorry dude to busy and I was pretty
drunk and thought I would put my ideas I did have that didn't totally click into a rhyme.
this should not be being voted on at all, I thought the message was pretty clear that
I didn't bring anything this week and Tic wins.

ill nik-A · 03-09-2014, 02:27 PM

Sorry I read tic tac asking for feed and thought it was u, now u get my breakdown

Sorry whoadie

Plot · 03-09-2014, 03:34 PM

So maybe I shouldn't have made my apology a verse. Sorry people for being a tad creative.

ill nik-A · 03-09-2014, 03:39 PM

I would've keyed something call me crazy

Bender · 03-09-2014, 04:37 PM

Beating me is Far-Fetched, but Dog is so stupid he’ll have nothing to say
I mean, he’s Dropped the Ball before…but this time, he started running away
This is ok you are calling him a dog pretty much not doing alot forme here but it is good wordplay just a bad concept
You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah
Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma
I dont really know what you are referencing here but seems ok if i knew what the punch was about
I Drop Names on the regular, you bitch about votes in PMS now I’m tryin’a stop ya
When you Drop Names the result’s more embarrassing than Travolta live at the Oscars
I didnt watch the oscars im not a fag sono idea what u are refering to
Your rhymes are never Sick, you should really Doctor ya style
Son go’n need First Aid so bad you’d think Strikta Fathered your child
Makes no sense
You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week
Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league
Legit punch but a weak played out concept

sorry I was on my phone earlier hope this helps

Drift · 03-09-2014, 04:56 PM

Tic, lotta potential. I can see where you wanted to go with some lines, some were decent. Still not a bad verse. Plot, the keyboard line was funny. Could tell not a lot of effort was here though. Mvgt Tictac

KwaL!ty · 03-09-2014, 05:59 PM

You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah
Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma
You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week
Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league

vs

nothing

Plot came with mainly statements instead of punches where Tic came fairly witty & made this a pretty one sided battle

MVGT- Tic

03-08-2014, 02:03 PM	#7
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,675 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 12534702	You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league vs nothing Tic needs to work on his wording more than anything imo. There were a couple of lines that could've been effective if they had ended with more of a sting. Plot's verse was essentially 10 lines of saying "Vote for Tic Tac" half of which was filler - and sure, there were some parts that were slightly funny but nothing that's worth quoting. I won't even bother pointing out anything plot should work on because it wasn't a legitimate attempt, I'm sure he can do much better than that MVGT - Tic Tac Last edited by Answer; 03-08-2014 at 02:40 PM.

03-09-2014, 01:29 PM	#13
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Plot, a verse usually tends to be a set up line followed by a punch, I didn't see many punches, ur verse was just telling but not enough dissing ur opponent, the point is being creative while belittling ur opponent and u failed to do that, tic tac was more aggressive and has a better grasp of constructing punch lines, that bottom card was dope man Vote tic tac __________________ Grumpy old man.

03-09-2014, 02:27 PM	#15
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Sorry I read tic tac asking for feed and thought it was u, now u get my breakdown Sorry whoadie __________________ Grumpy old man.

03-09-2014, 03:39 PM	#17
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	I would've keyed something call me crazy __________________ Grumpy old man.

03-09-2014, 04:56 PM	#19
Drift Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 25 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	Tic, lotta potential. I can see where you wanted to go with some lines, some were decent. Still not a bad verse. Plot, the keyboard line was funny. Could tell not a lot of effort was here though. Mvgt Tictac __________________ :D

03-03-2014, 11:42 PM	#2
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137906	Check. How many lines you wanna go?

03-04-2014, 12:12 AM	#3
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Hey man, 10s fine

03-08-2014, 08:17 AM	#5
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137906	Take the ext. Don't no show me please @Plot

03-08-2014, 12:53 PM	#6
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Plot styles menacing, lines are all life sentences, your vilest enemy, Sorry man, but IRL I've been to busy and didn't get to write anything. If I just keystyle the voters will just be bored, so fuck the free thoughts, So Tic-Tac should def. win coz at least he did that on his keyboard. Damn dude, hate you heaps and just wish I had a rhyme I could drop, But I don't so, just give this one to tick-talk like the chimes of a clock. His verse was dope, like he really timed with his shot and its hurting me, Took the shit serious, browsed through history and dug up some dirt on me. Snapping all vertebrae, bound to lose but Ive been busy, its not coz Im lazy So there is no way I'm winning this in hectic, that shit would be crazy.

03-08-2014, 05:26 PM	#8
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	Plot I sat there and read your whole verse like you were going somewhere with it smh. V tic

03-08-2014, 09:41 PM	#9
Bender Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 264 Battle Record: 11-5 Rep Power: 146916	Plot just keyed something but instead of punches he said to vote for Tic. Tic you are getting better but def need to word your punches to be more effective easy.choice here. vote-tic tac

03-09-2014, 09:35 AM	#10
Sicc Guest Posts: n/a	Yea, this was a complete waste of my time to be honest. Its clear and obvious who the winner was. V/Tac

03-09-2014, 02:23 PM	#14
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Um that was a 'Im not showing' verse, I don't know why this is even being voted, ...Tic kinda begged me to drop coz he had a nice drop, I felt bad that I didn't have time to write this week so I started writing a like: Sorry dude to busy and I was pretty drunk and thought I would put my ideas I did have that didn't totally click into a rhyme. this should not be being voted on at all, I thought the message was pretty clear that I didn't bring anything this week and Tic wins.

03-09-2014, 03:34 PM	#16
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	So maybe I shouldn't have made my apology a verse. Sorry people for being a tad creative.

03-09-2014, 04:37 PM	#18
Bender Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 264 Battle Record: 11-5 Rep Power: 146916	Beating me is Far-Fetched, but Dog is so stupid he’ll have nothing to say I mean, he’s Dropped the Ball before…but this time, he started running away This is ok you are calling him a dog pretty much not doing alot forme here but it is good wordplay just a bad concept You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma I dont really know what you are referencing here but seems ok if i knew what the punch was about I Drop Names on the regular, you bitch about votes in PMS now I’m tryin’a stop ya When you Drop Names the result’s more embarrassing than Travolta live at the Oscars I didnt watch the oscars im not a fag sono idea what u are refering to Your rhymes are never Sick, you should really Doctor ya style Son go’n need First Aid so bad you’d think Strikta Fathered your child Makes no sense You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league Legit punch but a weak played out concept sorry I was on my phone earlier hope this helps

03-09-2014, 05:59 PM	#20
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league vs nothing Plot came with mainly statements instead of punches where Tic came fairly witty & made this a pretty one sided battle MVGT- Tic