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11-16-2014, 11:54 PM | #1 |
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Tic Tac 1-0 vs SpookyDeep 1-0 {Tic Tac wins, SpookyDeep is DQ'd for biting}
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Tic Tac @SpookyDeep |
11-17-2014, 04:33 PM | #2 |
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11-20-2014, 09:51 AM | #3 |
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[QUOTE=Bags;300603]spook is a damn neer jesus tier boarder.[/QUOTE] |
11-20-2014, 03:13 PM | #4 |
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Lol @ your gun bars............
You’re never touchin a Weapon, just admit you’re a herb Last time you Sparked the Chrome was pulling into a spot & hittin the curb I tried to be Civil, but one shot & this guy will hit the floor So trust it’s not Politics when I hit Spook with more Rights than 1964 You say you’re Black, but to me it seems like something don’t go Because every post you make lets more & more Whiteout like Buffalo snow I’m comin Fresh Off pussy, he spends his days in the park just lookin at hoes Ya bitch wanted it, Deep…so I ended up so Foreign I still had one foot in the Boat Ya nothing but stupid bro, w/ those gun bars what the fuck are you provin tho? So if Spook is Thug to the Corey Gunz Blazin…it’s just < that faggot lightin up in the studio @SpookyDeep |
11-20-2014, 03:40 PM | #5 |
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I thro 1-2's in odd ways that's sure to have his lungs bleed
Your 1-2's couldn't even beat odd ways in the punch league Leave his forehead rearranged when the guns shooting and blazing And see the chin in difference places like big baby was movin locations Winning newb tournys is shallow, & you'll never be speaking in depth He'll never be at the high end, cause the big break lingers deep in his head I'll leave his corpse in the street, even my fillers show that im awesome at keys So when the punches land in the wrong time...don't think immigrants caught by border police I'll LOCK Tic up, throw him in a lake... It's too late for the doctor The only brush with great ness he's had......he was painting the monster
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[QUOTE=Bags;300603]spook is a damn neer jesus tier boarder.[/QUOTE] |
11-25-2014, 11:36 AM | #6 | ||
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11-25-2014, 02:11 PM | #7 |
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Only liked the first 2 bars from Tac. 3rd bar had potential, rest either didnt connect that well or just didnt understand
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11-25-2014, 03:45 PM | #8 |
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You’re never touchin a Weapon, just admit you’re a herb
Last time you Sparked the Chrome was pulling into a spot & hittin the curb okay. it's hard to make this type of phrase fresh due to the chromes aspect. shoulda said spark something else. it was okay tho the flip worked and it was a nice enough jab. I tried to be Civil, but one shot & this guy will hit the floor So trust it’s not Politics when I hit Spook with more Rights than 1964 this is a great flip. good. smooth. You say you’re Black, but to me it seems like something don’t go Because every post you make lets more & more Whiteout like Buffalo snow i looked it up and i get it. it's not really harsh tho I’m comin Fresh Off pussy, he spends his days in the park just lookin at hoes Ya bitch wanted it, Deep…so I ended up so Foreign I still had one foot in the Boat far in & foreign is forced to me man. i didn't like the concept or flip anyway tho. too much going on. keep it short and concise. Ya nothing but stupid bro, w/ those gun bars what the fuck are you provin tho? So if Spook is Thug to the Corey Gunz Blazin…it’s just < that faggot lightin up in the studio forced & too much going on sometimes you've got the style down but other times you veer back to the longbar way of cramming a lot of shit in to make it seem cleverer. just keep it short, sweet, & harsh. you have the potential to be dope af it's just the longbar tendencies holding you back. more bars like the politics & whiteout line (more so the wording on the last one not quite the flip). anyway decent enough verse man |
11-25-2014, 04:34 PM | #9 |
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As textcees ppl forget shit has to be somewhat spittable unless you just do it fast. You can keep your syllables even or under 15 the verse might be smoother. Your at 20 plus to often you got to get to the point quicker. i personally think for some ppl it doesnt matter there filler is entertaining enough. Spook 64 line was dope.
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11-25-2014, 11:37 PM | #10 |
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I liked the1964 line.
Spark the chrome was a cool flip to me. Foreign n Corey were forced to me tho. |
11-28-2014, 12:40 AM | #11 |
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I thought the spook with rights line was really solid, the rest was either kind of forced or just eh. For example, the spark the chrome bar was just eh....the rest were forced and buffalo line connection was weak....definitely needed something more. Cool verse.
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