11-14-2016, 12:46 PM | #1 |
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Blanco Bishop vs Legion - Legion WINS
NBL Season 10 Week 1 Due FRIDAY 11/18/16 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Blanco Bishop @Legion |
11-14-2016, 08:45 PM | #2 |
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Let's go 10
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11-14-2016, 11:30 PM | #3 |
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10 it is
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11-18-2016, 11:44 PM | #4 |
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I need an ext for the next couple hours. I can post tomorrow for sure
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11-18-2016, 11:56 PM | #5 |
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11-20-2016, 12:00 AM | #6 |
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Youve ducked enough competition to fill every slot on a calendar
Now I'll run your ass over in that Durango since all you do is Dodge Challengers Fuck text, I'm throwing hands cause this shit gets boring Or I can take him out back and shoot B.B. in his eye like a Christmas story And your broads on my dick. She said nobody's lamer than you Next time I'll make that Hotel her friends about me and make you pay for the room You not built for war. G code? Blanco be in the streets tellin' And for that my Tribe'll send more Arrows to your Head than a Chiefs helmet Fuck this last bar. Bro if you need material just use the search engine Or my Disciples'll splatter Bishop across the wall and turn his crib to a church session
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11-20-2016, 01:40 AM | #7 |
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this weirdo stealin stockings from hoars that wont give 'im rectum
so he stays making love to them nets like his name Odell Beckham I'm the best alive; Legion simply an obstacle on my road to winnin I'll put this Pest Aside by letting that seep in a room with him in it I'm a mastermind; u couldn't fathom leavin some1 that hates u dead but u can be the brain of the operation'f u survive this bullet thru ur head got youngins on the payroll; ninja stealth when they hit a crib with the nines srprise party at ur home that wont celebrate shit but the end to ur miserable life ur moniker's weak. plus ur clik dont bust toys or even own gats to brandish Legion your crew ain't no backstreet boys, more like a band of faggots |
11-20-2016, 06:05 AM | #8 |
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Legion, every single concept u used has been done exactly how u did them. I mean u used a Dodge Challenger line. BB line? Cmon it's obviously played. But the worst part of it all is u used a hotel wordplay. Yikes!
Blanco, opener was ok I guess. Pest aside I mean ugh ok, if u say so. Surprise party too obvious. Ender was weak I got blanco
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11-20-2016, 09:51 AM | #9 |
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Legion/ Thought that kansas city line was cool, couldve incorporated something more into the set up. Closer could have been dope too with a different set up.
Blanco/ The cleaner wording here with more creative concepts. The pest aside was good, had others that were decent too. Vote - Blanco Bishop |
11-20-2016, 11:01 PM | #10 |
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Fuck text, I'm throwing hands cause this shit gets boring
Or I can take him out back and shoot B.B. in his eye like a Christmas story And your broads on my dick. She said nobody's lamer than you Next time I'll make that Hotel her friends about me and make you pay for the room vs this weirdo stealin stockings from hoars that wont give 'im rectum so he stays making love to them nets like his name Odell Beckham i got legion, just smoother overall and a lil more consistent.. both were played af. |
11-21-2016, 08:46 AM | #11 |
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no hating but both sides came with some pretty played stuff as well as light jabs that didnt do much damage but as far as consistency goes, i'll have to give this to Legion
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11-21-2016, 11:16 AM | #12 |
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Legion
1 - dodge challengers was cool 2 - good name play I dig it 3 - hotel nahh 4 - tribe'll tribal word play? No sir 5 - nahhh too simple Started well then fell off Blanco 1 - I get it but it's dumb 2 - nah... 3 - okay 4 - blah 5 - predictable and no Umph Never really got off the ground here. MVGT Legion
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11-21-2016, 01:15 PM | #13 |
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I thought Legion had it with that BB line
didnt really enjoy that Dodge Challenger bit though the hotel punch was very random for me. I just had morning bowl & felt like I was transported back to the early 2000s Blanco had the pest aside, odell beckham & backstreet boys shit thought the rest was filler...overall nice verse though... v/gotta give it to Blanco here, I thought Legion had a few cool ideas... but that Hotel line just really lowered the enjoyment factor for me here. nice battle though...evenly fought
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11-21-2016, 02:07 PM | #14 |
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11-21-2016, 02:28 PM | #15 |
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youve ducked enough competition to fill every slot on a calendar
Now I'll run your ass over in that Durango since all you do is Dodge Challengers i like this, a little wordy though... Fuck text, I'm throwing hands cause this shit gets boring Or I can take him out back and shoot B.B. in his eye like a Christmas story decent at best, light jab And your broads on my dick. She said nobody's lamer than you Next time I'll make that Hotel her friends about me and make you pay for the room hotel lol nah bro, u doing a throwback bboys wp You not built for war. G code? Blanco be in the streets tellin' And for that my Tribe'll send more Arrows to your Head than a Chiefs helmet eh nah, decent wp, horrible flip Fuck this last bar. Bro if you need material just use the search engine Or my Disciples'll splatter Bishop across the wall and turn his crib to a church session i mean, kinda cool but awful execution this weirdo stealin stockings from hoars that wont give 'im rectum so he stays making love to them nets like his name Odell Beckham nah, soft I'm the best alive; Legion simply an obstacle on my road to winnin I'll put this Pest Aside by letting that seep in a room with him in it lol horrible flip bro I'm a mastermind; u couldn't fathom leavin some1 that hates u dead but u can be the brain of the operation'f u survive this bullet thru ur head eh didnt like this honestly, thought it was an ok concept got youngins on the payroll; ninja stealth when they hit a crib with the nines srprise party at ur home that wont celebrate shit but the end to ur miserable life ok, light ur moniker's weak. plus ur clik dont bust toys or even own gats to brandish Legion your crew ain't no backstreet boys, more like a band of faggots nah wasnt digging this honestly, i felt blanco felt a little rushed and just lacked original executions, thought legion had some played lines but fresher flips which landed harded...voting legion here
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11-21-2016, 02:40 PM | #16 |
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Got Blanco here
Like bb from legion but majority was played Blanco had some original concepts if sub par wording V/bb |
11-21-2016, 04:25 PM | #17 |
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11-21-2016, 04:32 PM | #18 |
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Fuck text, I'm throwing hands cause this shit gets boring
Or I can take him out back and shoot B.B. in his eye like a Christmas story Fuck this last bar. Bro if you need material just use the search engine Or my Disciples'll splatter Bishop across the wall and turn his crib to a church session vs this weirdo stealin stockings from hoars that wont give 'im rectum so he stays making love to them nets like his name Odell Beckham thought legion had a one more bar here that made the different, honestly both came soft but legion edges this
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1) played. Although I've seen it, you worded it well.
2) To me, abbreviations on names just kinda seem like a lazy way out. The bar was hella played. But worded coo. 3)sorry. Can't let the hotel playedousity slide on this one. Worded well again, but yeeaaaaaaa. 4) see 1,2, & 3. 5) I didn't like the execution. Vs 1) nah. I think you tried to give the bar too much. 2)pesticide was coo. 3) that's a no for me 4)pass. 5)meeeh. Legion had hella played bars. Blanco had a cool bar. I'm going to go w.leigon more consistent played bar. But feel if Blanco had an extra bar or 2 to my liking, he would've took this, overshadowing legion. Nothing is wrong with the wording on legion stuff though. Just played, but he gmv Leigon |
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