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Old 03-02-2015, 09:48 PM   #1
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King of the Spring

Round 1

Due Friday 2/6/15 @ 11:59PM West Coast.

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Old 03-03-2015, 08:05 AM   #2
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Sitting here for like 10 minutes trying to think of a name flip to embarrass ya
It's like all bags lines come out corny.. but I guess that's just your character
u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes
Ur life is clearly a mess, and ur bitch physique is grotesque
Bags always be on her head, but not cause he keeping her in check
Bitch look like kimbo, and ur video in the hush thread had me leaned
No hoes, this homo guile fuck a street fighter to the chun li theme
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Old 03-07-2015, 10:49 PM   #4
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Greed aka Pryde

I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky
Bitches? U guys r insane...out ur mind an ya brain
Lyin ass lame. pryde turned to greed an still dont got a fuckin dime to his name.
Homie u ben fake...U in arizona? WOAH. Check mate!
I aint large pro but yo G lets say ....i ain heard anything dope outta AZ in over a decade
Nigger. U try to buy sum garbage speakers an bargain cheaper
dark ass tweeker. Ur a worthless token that cant even pay for the parkin meter
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Old 03-12-2015, 04:36 PM   #5
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Sitting here for like 10 minutes trying to think of a name flip to embarrass ya
It's like all bags lines come out corny.. but I guess that's just your character
^well. idk. kiiiinda decent, but then u use a bags line in ur verse, and that's kinda counterproductive to say they're corny then.
u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
^idea is rly cool. execution was a little off. coulda been fire tho. rhyme was lazy
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes
^muff/pussy feels pretty old. otherwise, decent current events line. rhyme felt forced tho
Ur life is clearly a mess, and ur bitch physique is grotesque
Bags always be on her head, but not cause he keeping her in check
^rhyme felt forced again. u coulda just said 'keeps her in check' to make the syllables match. otherwise, the line felt some what old, but i never seen this flip before, so i'mma give u the benefit of the doubt.
Bitch look like kimbo, and ur video in the hush thread had me leaned
No hoes, this homo guile fuck a street fighter to the chun li theme
^meh. didn't like the rhyme either. seems like u coulda done more with this concept.

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I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
^lol
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky
^lol. not necessarily a great line, but i thought it was funny
Bitches? U guys r insane...out ur mind an ya brain
Lyin ass lame. pryde turned to greed an still dont got a fuckin dime to his name.
^okay i guess. execution was good, concept meh
Homie u ben fake...U in arizona? WOAH. Check mate!
I aint large pro but yo G lets say ....i ain heard anything dope outta AZ in over a decade
^aite
Nigger. U try to buy sum garbage speakers an bargain cheaper
dark ass tweeker. Ur a worthless token that cant even pay for the parkin meter
^dece

well, bags got it w/ his first 2 lines. plus he had waay crisper wording and all of his shit hit harder cuza that.
v/bags
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u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes

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I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky

Vote Bags. His verse was overall more creative and better worded. AZ line maqde me chuckle but not quote worthy. Greed had a couple serious misses as well
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Old 03-13-2015, 12:37 AM   #7
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u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes

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I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky

Closer battle then I woulda expected...
I thought that Muff line was pretty dope.
Arm bar was done well too, different play than I've seen before.
Greed coulda snatched this wit one more solid bar...
but I didn't like the rest. Opener & head/bag were played... closer just didn't work.
Bags had broken slinky... not a dope concept but executed nicely.
Ball & gag was funny. Dime to his name was pretty weak, AZ was ehh...
AZ had a few decent songs since then in my opinion too...
Parking meter ended up tippin it... although that set up was cringeworthy^100.
Bags got it by a small margin.

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Old 03-13-2015, 09:32 AM   #8
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Sitting here for like 10 minutes trying to think of a name flip to embarrass ya
It's like all bags lines come out corny.. but I guess that's just your character


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I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky
Homie u ben fake...U in arizona? WOAH. Check mate!
I aint large pro but yo G lets say ....i ain heard anything dope outta AZ in over a decade
Nigger. U try to buy sum garbage speakers an bargain cheaper
dark ass tweeker. Ur a worthless token that cant even pay for the parkin meter


Bags slaughtered him, crisper wording and concepts, Greed didnt have a whole lot other than the one I quoted. His shit just lacked that sting to me that Bags had. one-sided battle. King Of The Spring was a bit corny, but either way... Bags got 'em
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Hi...

Sitting here for like 10 minutes trying to think of a name flip to embarrass ya
It's like all bags lines come out corny.. but I guess that's just your character
dope personal...
u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
cool current event...
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes
this was ok...
Ur life is clearly a mess, and ur bitch physique is grotesque
Bags always be on her head, but not cause he keeping her in check
this was a missed...
Bitch look like kimbo, and ur video in the hush thread had me leaned
No hoes, this homo guile fuck a street fighter to the chun li theme
cool current event...

I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
gay shit...
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky
did you even try?...
Bitches? U guys r insane...out ur mind an ya brain
Lyin ass lame. pryde turned to greed an still dont got a fuckin dime to his name.
Where's the punchline?...
Homie u ben fake...U in arizona? WOAH. Check mate!
I aint large pro but yo G lets say ....i ain heard anything dope outta AZ in over a decade
What year is it?...
Nigger. U try to buy sum garbage speakers an bargain cheaper
dark ass tweeker. Ur a worthless token that cant even pay for the parkin meter
Where's the punchline?...

I thought this battle was pretty one sided...
I feel that this was Greed's greatest performance since beating Alvin Karpis...
not sure whether it was the consistency of his verse or the inconsistency of his his opponent's verse that won this for him...
maybe both...

Vote- Greed...

Bye...
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Sitting here for like 10 minutes trying to think of a name flip to embarrass ya
It's like all bags lines come out corny.. but I guess that's just your character


for me this is the crux of the issue and greed hits you right in the fact that you are an internet cornball

u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
Way to call out his inherent fraudiness and lack of hands or willingness to murk

Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes

This was a matter of fact punch that was stupid, but you bigged upped yourself like a bawse with your crack game refernece

Ur life is clearly a mess, and ur bitch physique is grotesque
Bags always be on her head, but not cause he keeping her in check

LOTB. I rolfzorded out of my sweatervest and disturbed the bar mitzvah. dead at you calling out how bags real life is a farce and his appearance is disgusting and how women control him.

Bitch look like kimbo, and ur video in the hush thread had me leaned
No hoes, this homo guile fuck a street fighter to the chun li theme

This that spinnin star kick ether my guy.



I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?

I don't get it?

Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky

This doesn't even rhyme and I do not see a punch. plus smoking stinky sound homosexual

Bitches? U guys r insane...out ur mind an ya brain
Lyin ass lame. pryde turned to greed an still dont got a fuckin dime to his name.

You honestly do not know if he has any money in his bank account, and even If he aint @Diode I am sure he has more than just a dime. smh @ u anthony


Homie u ben fake...U in arizona? WOAH. Check mate!
I aint large pro but yo G lets say ....i ain heard anything dope outta AZ in over a decade

I don't get it. this doesn't rhyme either.


Nigger. U try to buy sum garbage speakers an bargain cheaper
dark ass tweeker. Ur a worthless token that cant even pay for the parkin meter

I don't appreciate your racist comments. I also must refer back to the fact that you do not know what his bank account is like and I am sure he could afford tokens to pay for his parking space in the city of Tuscon.



Bags I am disappointed, they said you were a good battler, but all I see is failed words from a lame who has lost his sister to the myths of interracial dating. I can't f with this verse, or what ever you call it. On the other side, Greed came with the heat. Str8 murk ya heard? Dude put in work, his wording was polished and crisp. his metaphors were top notch and his flow was killer.

MVGT Greed. easy.

no hate guys, stay up.

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If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes


Bags:


I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?




Aero the Apex: This was a good short battle. greed had those bars and Bags only had a good opener. I felt Greed was more consistent whereas Bags attempted humor but kept failing at it...



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Sitting here for like 10 minutes trying to think of a name flip to embarrass ya
It's like all bags lines come out corny.. but I guess that's just your character
Mehhh.
u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
Horrible wording lol.
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes
This is not a punch.
Ur life is clearly a mess, and ur bitch physique is grotesque
Bags always be on her head, but not cause he keeping her in check
Didn't really like this either.
Bitch look like kimbo, and ur video in the hush thread had me leaned
No hoes, this homo guile fuck a street fighter to the chun li theme
This was your best line, which isn't saying much.
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I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
This was decent.
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky
What?
Bitches? U guys r insane...out ur mind an ya brain
Lyin ass lame. pryde turned to greed an still dont got a fuckin dime to his name.
Why are you doing so many multis?
Homie u ben fake...U in arizona? WOAH. Check mate!
I aint large pro but yo G lets say ....i ain heard anything dope outta AZ in over a decade
No.
Nigger. U try to buy sum garbage speakers an bargain cheaper
dark ass tweeker. Ur a worthless token that cant even pay for the parkin meter
No.
This was another terrible battle, wtf? Idk, neither verse had anything IMO. I'm going with Bags with the less terrible verse. Idk what happened to each of you here. Greed had a bad verse and bags had a bad verse, just less bad. Every bar with multis and shit barely making sense except for your opener? Greedy? WHat happened bro? This was a wack battle.

Bags bareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeely.
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