MCFly vs Cheif Wiggins - MCFLY WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Alias Tourney

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday,
  October 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Friday, October 17th 2014
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

First to 7, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

[Sharp]

Chief has checked in

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MCFly is in

[Sharp]

Mcfly sent 10

[Sharp]

Chief Wiggins


when MC battles on stage he chokes in minutes vs rivals
stuck on mic check..so known for his "one two" Broke goin relinquish the title
u don't move crowds..if u charged u better give every quarter back
u couldn't put some1 in motion..if u were under center to decide if it's zone or man
n u don't rap tight so u shouldn't even put a Hand on a damn mic
only thing u have in the Clutch..is panic attacks n stage fright.
they'll b missing ya..the Chief will pull heat n start hurting u quick
when i tell em "zip him up, cuz Fly's down"..it won't mean I'm being courteous bitch.
Fly's not wise..man, if he devised a plan its one he gobbles in
cuz he'd have suck off all the voters for him to Concoct a win.


Mcfly
when this is over, better heal up quick, and make it a habit, friend
cuz after this battle, I'm goin back to the future to whip ur faggot ass again
won't need roads where I'm goin, cuz Mcfly stays miles up above u
and lookin at his initials is the only way this bitch is gonna CW
trust me when I tell u that this fellow is madly hated
cuz I say fuck the police... even if they're yellow and animated
Mcfly stay blazed, blowing out strains with a big cough
& he will be chief ins too, but only after I pull his wig off
I got kids and I'm coming out swingin, eager to slight this lame
& this family guy crossover will put the Homer/Peter fight to shame

[Swerve]

u don't move crowds..if u charged u better give every quarter back
u couldn't put some1 in motion..if u were under center to decide if it's zone or man
they'll b missing ya..the Chief will pull heat n start hurting u quick
when i tell em "zip him up, cuz Fly's down"..it won't mean I'm being courteous bitch.


when this is over, better heal up quick, and make it a habit, friend
cuz after this battle, I'm goin back to the future to whip ur faggot ass again
trust me when I tell u that this fellow is madly hated
cuz I say fuck the police... even if they're yellow and animated
I got kids and I'm coming out swingin, eager to slight this lame
& this family guy crossover will put the Homer/Peter fight to shame


Mcfly - First two I quoted were just nice direct hits on both names. I liked family guy cross-over too but the setup was kind of forced....good to know you have kids though? The rest was eh. CW = played/easy/wig off was bad.

Wiggy - man in motion was cool...the zip em up line was hard to actually catch a flow on, but it was okay....courteous bitch was kind of a weak ending. The rest, I just wasnt feeling.


V/ McFly barely

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by Sharp

Chief Wiggins


when MC battles on stage he chokes in minutes vs rivals
stuck on mic check..so known for his "one two" Broke goin relinquish the title

☆☆☆☆☆

u don't move crowds..if u charged u better give every quarter back
u couldn't put some1 in motion..if u were under center to decide if it's zone or man

☆☆☆☆☆

n u don't rap tight so u shouldn't even put a Hand on a damn mic
only thing u have in the Clutch..is panic attacks n stage fright.

☆☆☆

they'll b missing ya..the Chief will pull heat n start hurting u quick
when i tell em "zip him up, cuz Fly's down"..it won't mean I'm being courteous bitch.

☆☆☆☆☆

Fly's not wise..man, if he devised a plan its one he gobbles in
cuz he'd have suck off all the voters for him to Concoct a win.

☆☆☆





☆☆☆☆☆ - 3
☆☆☆☆
☆☆☆ - 2
☆☆
☆

Mcfly

when this is over, better heal up quick, and make it a habit, friend
cuz after this battle, I'm goin back to the future to whip ur faggot ass again

☆☆☆☆☆

won't need roads where I'm goin, cuz Mcfly stays miles up above u
and lookin at his initials is the only way this bitch is gonna CW

☆☆

trust me when I tell u that this fellow is madly hated
cuz I say fuck the police... even if they're yellow and animated

☆☆☆☆☆

Mcfly stay blazed, blowing out strains with a big cough
& he will be chief ins too, but only after I pull his wig off

☆☆

I got kids and I'm coming out swingin, eager to slight this lame
& this family guy crossover will put the Homer/Peter fight to shame

☆☆☆☆☆




☆☆☆☆☆ - 3
☆☆☆☆
☆☆☆
☆☆ - 2
☆

Close but I have CW winning. Both had the same amount of ☆☆☆☆☆'s but Chief managed to be more consistent, amassing 2 ☆☆☆'s while McFly slipped up a bit with 2 ☆☆'s.

v-CW

[Mercules]

Chief Wiggins

when MC battles on stage he chokes in minutes vs rivals
stuck on mic check..so known for his "one two" Broke goin relinquish the title
------NAH, NOT FEELING THIS

u don't move crowds..if u charged u better give every quarter back
u couldn't put some1 in motion..if u were under center to decide if it's zone or man
--------------DECENT

n u don't rap tight so u shouldn't even put a Hand on a damn mic
only thing u have in the Clutch..is panic attacks n stage fright.
---------------MEH OK

they'll b missing ya..the Chief will pull heat n start hurting u quick
when i tell em "zip him up, cuz Fly's down"..it won't mean I'm being courteous bitch.
--------------COOL

Fly's not wise..man, if he devised a plan its one he gobbles in
cuz he'd have suck off all the voters for him to Concoct a win.
-----------CREATIVE BUT NOT TOO HARD HITTING.

Mcfly
when this is over, better heal up quick, and make it a habit, friend
cuz after this battle, I'm goin back to the future to whip ur faggot ass again
----------------OK

won't need roads where I'm goin, cuz Mcfly stays miles up above u
and lookin at his initials is the only way this bitch is gonna CW
----------NICE

trust me when I tell u that this fellow is madly hated
cuz I say fuck the police... even if they're yellow and animated
----------HAHA

Mcfly stay blazed, blowing out strains with a big cough
& he will be chief ins too, but only after I pull his wig off
-----------MEH I LIKE THE CONCEPT BUT THE EXECUTION IS POOR

I got kids and I'm coming out swingin, eager to slight this lame
& this family guy crossover will put the Homer/Peter fight to shame
-------------------NAH

CLOSE BATTLE. I GOT MCFLY EDGING THIS ONE OUT. LOTB WAS YELLOW & ANIMATED. BOTH HAD SOME MISSES BUT MCFLYS VERSE HIT A LITTLE HARDER AND SEEMED LESS FORCED. DECENT BATTLE

VOTE MCFLY

[Beyond]

when MC battles on stage he chokes in minutes vs rivals
stuck on mic check..so known for his "one two" Broke goin relinquish the title
Linking is non-existent. WTF? Also sounds like you can barely speak English.
u don't move crowds..if u charged u better give every quarter back
u couldn't put some1 in motion..if u were under center to decide if it's zone or man
Ok.
n u don't rap tight so u shouldn't even put a Hand on a damn mic
only thing u have in the Clutch..is panic attacks n stage fright.
Eh, ok I guess.
they'll b missing ya..the Chief will pull heat n start hurting u quick
when i tell em "zip him up, cuz Fly's down"..it won't mean I'm being courteous bitch.
Best line yet, but you're a faggot for revealing who you are, boy.
Fly's not wise..man, if he devised a plan its one he gobbles in
cuz he'd have suck off all the voters for him to Concoct a win.
A dick line? Eh, wordplay kinda weird saying he con cocked a win. Odd.

vs

when this is over, better heal up quick, and make it a habit, friend
cuz after this battle, I'm goin back to the future to whip ur faggot ass again
lmao, leaneddd, but not that great, tbh.
won't need roads where I'm goin, cuz Mcfly stays miles up above u
and lookin at his initials is the only way this bitch is gonna CW
Decent, liked 'won't need roads where I'm goin'. Stayin' in character, I dig it.
trust me when I tell u that this fellow is madly hated
cuz I say fuck the police... even if they're yellow and animated
Not bad, funny misdirect.
Mcfly stay blazed, blowing out strains with a big cough
& he will be chief ins too, but only after I pull his wig off
Kind of weird 'chief ins'. Forced, but decent idea.
I got kids and I'm coming out swingin, eager to slight this lame
& this family guy crossover will put the Homer/Peter fight to shame
Solid closer.


Overall, this battle was kind of close, but I think the winner was obvious. I think Wiggins may be someone considered kind of good (I don't personally think he's that good, but I digress), but McFly is higher rated I think still. Wiggins had that zip him up line that I thought was his best line, but wasn't feeling too much else. McFly was just way more consistent and funnier. Liked how his lines also had to do with his alias, too. That was cool. Props to both.

/v mcfaggot

[El Muffin]

Cw

Opener=pretty good.
Motion= above average
Clutch= naw
Zip him up= thats dope af tbh
Closer= nah


Mcfly= pretty good. Easy tho
C.w= way too simplistic
Fuck police= ok
Chief= fukkk no
Closer= ok

I got chief wiggins

Had lotb.

Mcfly had alot of ok lines but no real haymakers imho

V/ cw

[Packed Graves]

Flys down was the only quoted line from your verse, other then that it wasn't tovdirect or hard hitting. You had a few good concepts but just didn't come off to harsh.

Vs

Cw & yellow animated where decent, feel you stayed a little more consistent rhen your opponent & had better direction through out the verse which made it connect better.

2 quotes to 1

Mcfly

[Unfukwitable]

hey'll b missing ya..the Chief will pull heat n start hurting u quick
when i tell em "zip him up, cuz Fly's down"..it won't mean I'm being courteous bitch.

vs.

I got kids and I'm coming out swingin, eager to slight this lame
& this family guy crossover will put the Homer/Peter fight to shame


Besides the bars that I quoted one had the more consistant drop, It was alot of bad wording from one & a couple creative ideas that feel flat. The other had some misses but a much more solid verse in comparison.. v/McFly

[Allen Knight]

they'll b missing ya..the Chief will pull heat n start hurting u quick
when i tell em "zip him up, cuz Fly's down"..it won't mean I'm being courteous bitch.

Vs

when this is over, better heal up quick, and make it a habit, friend
cuz after this battle, I'm goin back to the future to whip ur faggot ass again
I got kids and I'm coming out swingin, eager to slight this lame
& this family guy crossover will put the Homer/Peter fight to shame

V/mcfly, this shit was close wiggins had some good ideas but excution was off
an that in motion bar didnt even rhyme lol but mcfly had one more decent bar
he was a lil more consistent but not by much could go either way.