05-11-2013, 12:49 AM | #1 |
The Throne, The Crown
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AOWL WK12: NYCSPITZ (1-3) VS. Mr. J (0-0) [NYCSPITZ WINS BY NO SHOW.]
16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.)
Verses are due WEDNESDAY 5/15 at 11:59 PST. Extensions are due THURSDAY 5/16 at 11:59 PST. (There is a 6 hour grace period following the end of the extension deadline. If you fail to post anything by the end of the grace period time, you will be given the no show loss.) You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links in the Voting Thread. For every absent vote, you will be deducted ONE vote next week. Voting ends MONDAY 5/20 at 11:59 PST.(Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.) You MUSTcheck in. If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league. NOTE: Swaying, excessive freeposting, voter fraud etc. are grounds for vote deductions at discretion of the moderators. Editing your verse after the grace period, after your opponent posts, or after the first vote (especially this)- as well as biting- are grounds for disqualification at discretion of the moderators. TOPIC: Your job this week is simple.... you can either use the title of the book or the image on the cover as your main idea for your piece this week. Whatever you are able to come up with. Good luck to both participants. @NYCSPITZ @Mr. J Last edited by King Ra.; 05-11-2013 at 08:33 AM. |
05-11-2013, 09:53 AM | #2 |
SYRACUSE
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got u playa
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05-12-2013, 12:32 AM | #3 |
The Clown Prince
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good luck champ
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05-14-2013, 01:11 PM | #4 |
SYRACUSE
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Giddyup, boy...
Oppressive sunlight. Wanderer in search of crystal clout. Spurs dig, the horse bucks and his pistol's out Apex - his spirit battles with abysmal doubts and the mocking horizon shakes in this dismal drought. It stirred him. The transience of molten lust in her eyes badass mien, hiding oceans of justice inside combustible pride. July, such a suitable birth Moonlit chasm: apogee of Luna and Earth El Paso outskirts - cowboy hub where violence'll bloom Hoes, money, gunslingers and...the Silent Saloon. He walks in, face dirt-streaked - the mileage of dunes searching for fire and more treasure than Midas' bloom It might've been noon. Goons listened to spiraling tunes existential fuckery, Sartre dialing Camus... whoever said that only Neo's bending time with a spoon? She was there - corsetted dress in a set of swell blue the most beautiful lass he'd ever seen - Jezebel Sue alone at the bar with whiskey sour and ice in her mouth dark hair and a pair of exotic eyes from the South Time froze... she held his gaze under the guise of a pout. No doubts. Just ruptured lust hiding demons inside Mars raising his regal head and casting Venus aside arched backs, a strange land, belted ammo of lead Rendezvoused every day until their shadows had fled but one noon the doors creaked and brought an ominous breeze Proprietor - that giant of a man, Johnny McGee. Veins bulged from his one arm so oddly diseased slow strut, the floors creak and there's a pause in his steez chatter dies. Eyes narrowed above the scar on his cheek when ol' Johnny saw Sue sit at the bar with a geek "Listen here, cowboy - Johnny growls a modest demand: a duel for the girl, cause I'm the fastest shot in the land." She turned - "NO, John-..." glaring with dark wolves eyes so Johnny McGee shot her in the heart, bullseye. smile of sinister yellow: "Well you should've kept it casual, friend" he dropped his gun and was never seen in El Paso again. Oppresive light. Riding under the tawny and bleak sun searching for the dull echo of Johnny McGee's gun. . Last edited by NYCSPITZ; 05-14-2013 at 02:19 PM. |
05-16-2013, 09:45 PM | #5 |
The Clown Prince
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just doing some finishing touches shouldn't take too long...hopefully
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05-17-2013, 06:54 AM | #6 |
The Throne, The Crown
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NYCSPITZ WINS BY NO SHOW.
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