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Old 05-11-2013, 12:57 AM   #1
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Default AOWL Spotlight Match #3: Frank (6-3) VS. VERITAS (4-7) [VERITAS WINS BY NO SHOW.]

16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.)

Verses are due WEDNESDAY 5/15 at 11:59 PST.
Extensions are due THURSDAY 5/16 at 11:59 PST.

(There is a 6 hour grace period following the end of the extension deadline. If you fail to post anything by the end of the grace period time, you will be given the no show loss.)

You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links in the Voting Thread. For every absent vote, you will be deducted ONE vote next week.

Voting ends MONDAY 5/20 at 11:59 PST.(Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.)

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Editing your verse after the grace period, after your opponent posts, or after the first vote (especially this)- as well as biting- are grounds for disqualification at discretion of the moderators.


TOPIC: Your job this week is simple.... you can either use the title of the book or the image on the cover as your main idea for your piece this week. Whatever you are able to come up with.




Good luck to both participants. @Frank @VERITAS

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Old 05-15-2013, 10:50 PM   #2
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The fire, the flame, the mire, the pain
Wire and chain to pyre my brain
I wax and wane, I struggle and strain
Heartless darkness, dryness parches
kamikaze marches thru Boggy marshes,
The Harness markets’ harshest harvest
Of a living karkass
Sailing Tarsus….
Flailing limbs torn, flesh punctured
Aborted newborn fresh ruptured
Constant burning, flames ascent
Heavently yearning, GOD ab-sent
The tear hits my cheek and turns to vapor instantly
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I never gave a crap, bet that I thought the afterlife was inconsequential
No Novocain for the pain as a demon drills microscopic holes in my dental
Doomed to descend downward for the devil’s dastardly dance
In life I was a coward, now eaten alive by a horde of fire ants
Getting sodomized by cruel machinations
Payment for my twisted pornographic inclinations
Try to scream out but my voice is just a whisper in the wind
If only I would have known, I wouldn’t have loved the sin ….
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Year number 73,000…still here, the pain remains constant, horrible, and severe
Every moment is now filled with the pain, coupled with a never ending fear
The devils all laugh at me as they fill my body with flesh eating worms
I still try to fight it, but the only riot is my loss of dignity as it squirms
I finally cry out..”Jesus! I am sorry I believe!!! I am sorry I forsook you!!!”
Silence……no answer….and then the real pain began as the truth shook thru
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I awoke…sweat drenched, afraid….my life suddenly much clearer
I stumbled to the bathroom, wiped the tears, and looked in the mirror.
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The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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Old 05-16-2013, 02:14 AM   #3
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Old 05-17-2013, 06:53 AM   #4
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