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05-11-2013, 12:57 AM | #1 |
The Throne, The Crown
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AOWL Spotlight Match #3: Frank (6-3) VS. VERITAS (4-7) [VERITAS WINS BY NO SHOW.]
16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.)
Verses are due WEDNESDAY 5/15 at 11:59 PST. Extensions are due THURSDAY 5/16 at 11:59 PST. (There is a 6 hour grace period following the end of the extension deadline. If you fail to post anything by the end of the grace period time, you will be given the no show loss.) You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links in the Voting Thread. For every absent vote, you will be deducted ONE vote next week. Voting ends MONDAY 5/20 at 11:59 PST.(Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.) You MUSTcheck in. If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league. NOTE: Swaying, excessive freeposting, voter fraud etc. are grounds for vote deductions at discretion of the moderators. Editing your verse after the grace period, after your opponent posts, or after the first vote (especially this)- as well as biting- are grounds for disqualification at discretion of the moderators. TOPIC: Your job this week is simple.... you can either use the title of the book or the image on the cover as your main idea for your piece this week. Whatever you are able to come up with. Good luck to both participants. @Frank @VERITAS Last edited by King Ra.; 05-11-2013 at 08:46 AM. |
05-15-2013, 10:50 PM | #2 | |
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The fire, the flame, the mire, the pain
Wire and chain to pyre my brain I wax and wane, I struggle and strain Heartless darkness, dryness parches kamikaze marches thru Boggy marshes, The Harness markets’ harshest harvest Of a living karkass Sailing Tarsus…. Flailing limbs torn, flesh punctured Aborted newborn fresh ruptured Constant burning, flames ascent Heavently yearning, GOD ab-sent The tear hits my cheek and turns to vapor instantly * I never gave a crap, bet that I thought the afterlife was inconsequential No Novocain for the pain as a demon drills microscopic holes in my dental Doomed to descend downward for the devil’s dastardly dance In life I was a coward, now eaten alive by a horde of fire ants Getting sodomized by cruel machinations Payment for my twisted pornographic inclinations Try to scream out but my voice is just a whisper in the wind If only I would have known, I wouldn’t have loved the sin …. * Year number 73,000…still here, the pain remains constant, horrible, and severe Every moment is now filled with the pain, coupled with a never ending fear The devils all laugh at me as they fill my body with flesh eating worms I still try to fight it, but the only riot is my loss of dignity as it squirms I finally cry out..”Jesus! I am sorry I believe!!! I am sorry I forsook you!!!” Silence……no answer….and then the real pain began as the truth shook thru * I awoke…sweat drenched, afraid….my life suddenly much clearer I stumbled to the bathroom, wiped the tears, and looked in the mirror. * *
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05-16-2013, 02:14 AM | #3 |
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05-17-2013, 06:53 AM | #4 |
The Throne, The Crown
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VERITAS WINS BY NO SHOW.
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