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08-14-2015, 10:17 PM
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Punchline Prettyboy
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Semi Finals: Cred vs Bust {Cred wins}
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08-16-2015, 02:49 PM
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The Biggest
Join Date: Jan 2015
Posts: 3,254
Battle Record: 67-32
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LET ME TALK MY SHIT!
u ain't cashing in every battle, that horrible punch vs Spaz wasn't funny ironically u cudnt come up wit 2 Lines to get thru S, no wonder ur verses ain't money leave u Infatuated wit guns, red laser on the glock n i might go reckless i'll make sure those Dots are ur Type like u sendin me a iphone message i'm directing bullets to ur chest, Bust ain't ballin like sports teams cus 14 to ur head, put ya face in different places like a Tom Brady court meme gotta aim the K in a angle, the Recoil alone from the chopper'll floor him bitch these Kicks so off the wall i thought i was in line coppin new Jordans i'm a Nigga Wit a Attitude, killin vets around the site so u kno i'm a bomb him this weeks so fuckin Eazy, s'like i dedicated 7 days to watch Straight Outta Compton this kid'll get snuffed, his Name alone shows this nigga ain't tough cus i'll T Off on this weak faggot til it feels like his bitch ass got hit by a Bus catch u n ur girl, u'll get offed quick. my whole click full of shooters turn around n put 2 rounds in ur bitchs shirt like that hoe worked at Hooters! @Bust |
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08-16-2015, 02:53 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 164
Battle Record: 5-7
Rep Power: 3710880 |
Where to start with cred? Hmmmm...
..Ill cut off ur arms n legs, put u in a bag to see if u can find an escape route Then again it's cred, he'll handle any tuff challange he faces.. By Bitin his way out hush made a vid puffin trees, u made 1 identical except the place n tha weather I mean we allready know u a slick biter, but damn! Ur FUCKIN imitations r clever Ur the weakest in ur crew kid, truth is U should silence ur mind cuz u SUCK, lame Then again, ain't no need to quiet ur thoughts.. ur allready all about givin Hush brain Lemme talk my shit.. Listen pussy, I gotta glock, 5 clips N I'll dump the entire 60 rounds on u if that's what it takes to get u OFF guys dicks I've been lazy AF lately n still win, but uve been bustin ur ass for tooooo long So whoever says hard work pays off.. Can look at ur stats to be proved wrong.. Type a fag to write a gun bar like BLAM! , as if he really bucked it at a dude Then blow his phone off...as he ducks behind a bush n tucks it in his boot.. U better bring ya best, meaning pm a vet ya verse so he can guide ya mind Feel me? This ain't the tag tourney but to win? U still gon need ya partner to write ur lines. |
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08-16-2015, 07:48 PM
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NJ Devil
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,042
Battle Record: Who Cares
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Up for votes.
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08-17-2015, 01:21 PM
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NJ Devil
Join Date: Jan 2013
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08-17-2015, 07:23 PM
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Super Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 7,407
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Cred..
First four were nice, bus line was cool... Jordan easy e and hooters I didn't like... Bust... Opener off sets his... The clever line coulda been better but ok, then I don't know what happened... The hush brain, the off dixk, boot and partner were very poor IMO I got Cred winning
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08-18-2015, 12:10 AM
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100%
Join Date: Jul 2015
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u ain't cashing in every battle, that horrible punch vs Spaz wasn't funny
ironically u cudnt come up wit 2 Lines to get thru S, no wonder ur verses ain't money --- this a obvious flip on bags Mr crab line last week, but its aite. leave u Infatuated wit guns, red laser on the glock n i might go reckless i'll make sure those Dots are ur Type like u sendin me a iphone message --- damn this a flip on a line I seen u do in the NBL. i'm directing bullets to ur chest, Bust ain't ballin like sports teams cus 14 to ur head, put ya face in different places like a Tom Brady court meme --- aite cool current event line gotta aim the K in a angle, the Recoil alone from the chopper'll floor him bitch these Kicks so off the wall i thought i was in line coppin new Jordans --- nah this feels dated i'm a Nigga Wit a Attitude, killin vets around the site so u kno i'm a bomb him this weeks so fuckin Eazy, s'like i dedicated 7 days to watch Straight Outta Compton --- too obvious. I knew where it was going when u said niggas with a attitude. Still aite tho. this kid'll get snuffed, his Name alone shows this nigga ain't tough cus i'll T Off on this weak faggot til it feels like his bitch ass got hit by a Bus --- aite, light tho. catch u n ur girl, u'll get offed quick. my whole click full of shooters turn around n put 2 rounds in ur bitchs shirt like that hoe worked at Hooters! --- OK. Vs. ..Ill cut off ur arms n legs, put u in a bag to see if u can find an escape route Then again it's cred, he'll handle any tuff challange he faces.. By Bitin his way out --- lol nice hush made a vid puffin trees, u made 1 identical except the place n tha weather I mean we allready know u a slick biter, but damn! Ur FUCKIN imitations r clever --- ehh, coulda worded the concept better. Ur the weakest in ur crew kid, truth is U should silence ur mind cuz u SUCK, lame Then again, ain't no need to quiet ur thoughts.. ur allready all about givin Hush brain --- not feeling it.. didn't like the flip. Lemme talk my shit.. Listen pussy, I gotta glock, 5 clips N I'll dump the entire 60 rounds on u if that's what it takes to get u OFF guys dicks --- I don't see the flip here. Am I missing something? I've been lazy AF lately n still win, but uve been bustin ur ass for tooooo long So whoever says hard work pays off.. Can look at ur stats to be proved wrong.. --- nice Type a fag to write a gun bar like BLAM! , as if he really bucked it at a dude Then blow his phone off...as he ducks behind a bush n tucks it in his boot.. --- I wanna like this but wasn't feeling the delivery. U better bring ya best, meaning pm a vet ya verse so he can guide ya mind Feel me? This ain't the tag tourney but to win? U still gon need ya partner to write ur lines. --- too simple. Overall: first read thru I thought bust had it but after breaking it down I got cred on consistently. V. Cred |
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08-18-2015, 03:19 AM
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Gang shit on my brain
Join Date: May 2015
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Battle Record: 10-11
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u ain't cashing in every battle, that horrible punch vs Spaz wasn't funny
ironically u cudnt come up wit 2 Lines to get thru S, no wonder ur verses ain't money // cool leave u Infatuated wit guns, red laser on the glock n i might go reckless i'll make sure those Dots are ur Type like u sendin me a iphone message // talk to em i'm directing bullets to ur chest, Bust ain't ballin like sports teams cus 14 to ur head, put ya face in different places like a Tom Brady court meme // nah gotta aim the K in a angle, the Recoil alone from the chopper'll floor him bitch these Kicks so off the wall i thought i was in line coppin new Jordans // i like it i'm a Nigga Wit a Attitude, killin vets around the site so u kno i'm a bomb him this weeks so fuckin Eazy, s'like i dedicated 7 days to watch Straight Outta Compton // ehh this kid'll get snuffed, his Name alone shows this nigga ain't tough cus i'll T Off on this weak faggot til it feels like his bitch ass got hit by a Bus // ok then catch u n ur girl, u'll get offed quick. my whole click full of shooters turn around n put 2 rounds in ur bitchs shirt like that hoe worked at Hooters! // hrmmm vs. ..Ill cut off ur arms n legs, put u in a bag to see if u can find an escape route Then again it's cred, he'll handle any tuff challange he faces.. By Bitin his way out // i liked hush made a vid puffin trees, u made 1 identical except the place n tha weather I mean we allready know u a slick biter, but damn! Ur FUCKIN imitations r clever // nah Ur the weakest in ur crew kid, truth is U should silence ur mind cuz u SUCK, lame Then again, ain't no need to quiet ur thoughts.. ur allready all about givin Hush brain // i see you Lemme talk my shit.. Listen pussy, I gotta glock, 5 clips N I'll dump the entire 60 rounds on u if that's what it takes to get u OFF guys dicks // ehem.. I've been lazy AF lately n still win, but uve been bustin ur ass for tooooo long So whoever says hard work pays off.. Can look at ur stats to be proved wrong.. // ok Type a fag to write a gun bar like BLAM! , as if he really bucked it at a dude Then blow his phone off...as he ducks behind a bush n tucks it in his boot.. // plz no U better bring ya best, meaning pm a vet ya verse so he can guide ya mind Feel me? This ain't the tag tourney but to win? U still gon need ya partner to write ur lines. // nah i got cred winning by one more bar i liked. his jabs were a little better as well imo.
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08-19-2015, 08:57 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2015
Posts: 302
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edged the cred, had a few more bars i felt hit a lil harder, bust was good too tho
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08-20-2015, 05:30 PM
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HE / HIM / FRAC
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
Posts: 11,592
Battle Record: 56-21
Accomplishments - 50+ Wins
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u ain't cashing in every battle, that horrible punch vs Spaz wasn't funny
ironically u cudnt come up wit 2 Lines to get thru S, no wonder ur verses ain't money ok leave u Infatuated wit guns, red laser on the glock n i might go reckless i'll make sure those Dots are ur Type like u sendin me a iphone message I've definitely seen dots and iphone message before but this is done ok i'm directing bullets to ur chest, Bust ain't ballin like sports teams cus 14 to ur head, put ya face in different places like a Tom Brady court meme funny gotta aim the K in a angle, the Recoil alone from the chopper'll floor him bitch these Kicks so off the wall i thought i was in line coppin new Jordans ehhh i'm a Nigga Wit a Attitude, killin vets around the site so u kno i'm a bomb him this weeks so fuckin Eazy, s'like i dedicated 7 days to watch Straight Outta Compton basic but ok this kid'll get snuffed, his Name alone shows this nigga ain't tough cus i'll T Off on this weak faggot til it feels like his bitch ass got hit by a Bus took me a sec... not really feeling it catch u n ur girl, u'll get offed quick. my whole click full of shooters turn around n put 2 rounds in ur bitchs shirt like that hoe worked at Hooters! not bad but not great ..Ill cut off ur arms n legs, put u in a bag to see if u can find an escape route Then again it's cred, he'll handle any tuff challange he faces.. By Bitin his way out I see what you're goin for but this coulda been flipped a lot harsher hush made a vid puffin trees, u made 1 identical except the place n tha weather I mean we allready know u a slick biter, but damn! Ur FUCKIN imitations r clever same as the last on tbh Ur the weakest in ur crew kid, truth is U should silence ur mind cuz u SUCK, lame Then again, ain't no need to quiet ur thoughts.. ur allready all about givin Hush brain quiet thoughts/hush brain is a cool idea in theory but execution makes me think it doesn't really work Lemme talk my shit.. Listen pussy, I gotta glock, 5 clips N I'll dump the entire 60 rounds on u if that's what it takes to get u OFF guys dicks Unless I'm missing something its pretty basic to me I've been lazy AF lately n still win, but uve been bustin ur ass for tooooo long So whoever says hard work pays off.. Can look at ur stats to be proved wrong... Really basic Type a fag to write a gun bar like BLAM! , as if he really bucked it at a dude Then blow his phone off...as he ducks behind a bush n tucks it in his boot.. Thought this was just funny U better bring ya best, meaning pm a vet ya verse so he can guide ya mind Feel me? This ain't the tag tourney but to win? U still gon need ya partner to write ur lines. Really statementy Yeah... cred was more consistent. Bust has cool ideas but I think he's kinda lacking with delivery/execution right now. Alright battle though v/cred |
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08-20-2015, 06:02 PM
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The Bad Guys.
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 9,166
Battle Record: 106-34
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u ain't cashing in every battle, that horrible punch vs Spaz wasn't funny
ironically u cudnt come up wit 2 Lines to get thru S, no wonder ur verses ain't money leave u Infatuated wit guns, red laser on the glock n i might go reckless i'll make sure those Dots are ur Type like u sendin me a iphone message i'm directing bullets to ur chest, Bust ain't ballin like sports teams cus 14 to ur head, put ya face in different places like a Tom Brady court meme Vs ..Ill cut off ur arms n legs, put u in a bag to see if u can find an escape route Then again it's cred, he'll handle any tuff challange he faces.. By Bitin his way out hush made a vid puffin trees, u made 1 identical except the place n tha weather I mean we allready know u a slick biter, but damn! Ur FUCKIN imitations r clever V/cred, another cool battle, cred eazy line coulda been fired but the execution was off. But he had a pretty solid verse the dot line was nice, bust had acouple of cool lines but he needs to work on being harsher, dude has concepts but needs to work on the wording & he'll be pretty good..props to both. |
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08-22-2015, 03:28 PM
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baz∞ka
Join Date: Aug 2013
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u ain't cashing in every battle, that horrible punch vs Spaz wasn't funny
ironically u cudnt come up wit 2 Lines to get thru S, no wonder ur verses ain't money leave u Infatuated wit guns, red laser on the glock n i might go reckless i'll make sure those Dots are ur Type like u sendin me a iphone message i'm directing bullets to ur chest, Bust ain't ballin like sports teams cus 14 to ur head, put ya face in different places like a Tom Brady court meme vs ..Ill cut off ur arms n legs, put u in a bag to see if u can find an escape route Then again it's cred, he'll handle any tuff challange he faces.. By Bitin his way out One had some decent ideas that just wasnt used properly the other came with a more consistent drop with some nice hits v/Cred
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