Yo these poem wiring unicorn loving haiku technicians might of been right

Hush · 02-22-2014, 02:23 PM

Open mic kinda cooler than battling in a type of way

God Of War · 02-22-2014, 02:42 PM

I always like the fact that you had MUCH more freedom when you wrote an open mic

Ghost1 · 02-22-2014, 02:42 PM

U are literally battlings only current hope.

Do this on an alias er something. Smh.

Dope girl · 02-22-2014, 02:46 PM

Difference between lyrics & Poets.

Lars · 02-22-2014, 02:51 PM

I concur

plz continue

Hush · 02-22-2014, 02:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lamborghini Bags

U are literally battlings only current hope.

Do this on an alias er something. Smh.

I don't rock alias

ill nik-A · 02-22-2014, 02:55 PM

Well u get fresher lines because of how many punch lines have been written

But I find constructing punch lines a bit more fun

neutral · 02-22-2014, 03:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush

In a time way before recognition two lovers stirred
Way Before the simplest colors merged or man discovered words
these endless entities since the days of young conferred
beyond space and times curves, they lay where none disturb
as raindrops became torrents then shrunk into fountains
an embrace that saw dust to stone and stone to a mountain
observing forests tower from the seeds of a flower
still they held fast with all strength an there power
gripping tighter as roots grew to trunks at there bower
to a love the minutes seconds an hours sought to devour
when summers was hottest an winters were colder
hope hung on un cowered shoulders as days made them older
volcanoes grew from boulders an hellfire burnt out to smolder
when all other wonders were over he still gasped to behold her
still holding as the world advanced at no more than a prance
forever entranced…
stuck in the bitterest curse if it isn’t romance

^ Poem wiring unicorn loving haiku technician i.e. faggot.

NYCSPITZ · 02-22-2014, 03:18 PM

^^^ tell me hush won an OM award for that so I can lol

Hush · 02-22-2014, 03:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by neutral

^ Poem wiring unicorn loving haiku technician i.e. faggot.

I fail to see your point here but I'm sure digging this up gave you a fulfilled feeling. Happy to help

Certain · 02-22-2014, 03:27 PM

When you're ready, Hush: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54744

Hush · 02-22-2014, 03:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Totoro

^^^ tell me hush won an OM award for that so I can lol

Your the special kind of loser who replies to my threads consistently yet I have no clue who you are

Certain · 02-22-2014, 03:33 PM

That's NYCSPITZ.

Hush · 02-22-2014, 03:36 PM

Oh, lol. Names familiar still don't know dude enough to care.

NYCSPITZ · 02-22-2014, 03:36 PM

you're the angry dude who...wait you're angry so that means you're not happy with your life probably lol

Hush · 02-22-2014, 03:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Totoro

you're the angry dude who...wait you're angry so that means you're not happy with your life probably lol

You are a lame.

NYCSPITZ · 02-22-2014, 03:38 PM

it's basic psychology hush

Hush · 02-22-2014, 03:39 PM

I'll keep replying so you don't feel like your wasting your time

NYCSPITZ · 02-22-2014, 03:40 PM

thanks u chubby lil metrosexual gawd u

NYCSPITZ · 02-22-2014, 03:41 PM

yo remember that time i called u out to a NYC beatdown and u got shook.................

LOL

02-22-2014, 02:23 PM	#1
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Yo these poem wiring unicorn loving haiku technicians might of been right Open mic kinda cooler than battling in a type of way __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

02-22-2014, 02:51 PM	#5
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809295	I concur plz continue __________________ PROVEN BITER

02-22-2014, 02:55 PM	#7
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Well u get fresher lines because of how many punch lines have been written But I find constructing punch lines a bit more fun __________________ Grumpy old man.

02-22-2014, 03:18 PM	#9
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	^^^ tell me hush won an OM award for that so I can lol __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

02-22-2014, 03:27 PM	#11
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	When you're ready, Hush: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54744 __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

02-22-2014, 02:42 PM	#2
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,825 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493980	I always like the fact that you had MUCH more freedom when you wrote an open mic

02-22-2014, 02:46 PM	#4
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Difference between lyrics & Poets.

02-22-2014, 03:33 PM	#13
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	That's NYCSPITZ. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

02-22-2014, 03:36 PM	#14
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Oh, lol. Names familiar still don't know dude enough to care. __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

02-22-2014, 03:38 PM	#17
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	it's basic psychology hush __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

02-22-2014, 03:39 PM	#18
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	I'll keep replying so you don't feel like your wasting your time __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

02-22-2014, 03:40 PM	#19
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	thanks u chubby lil metrosexual gawd u __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

02-22-2014, 03:41 PM	#20
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	yo remember that time i called u out to a NYC beatdown and u got shook................. LOL __________________ UNIFIED THEORY