Cashius Vs namesake - {Cashius wins}

[Orc]

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@Cashius @namesake

[namesake]

Match me, gl C.

[Cashius]

Check.

[namesake]

...

I know you paid for those punches, In a desperate bid to cement the title
b'cause those concepts are so tired & worn out it proves cash is spent on writing
just put a bit more effort in your typing, & I'll promise a win you can leave with
cuz i'm shor u ken come up with a personal?... who cares if only Allen believes it?
Cash's been through a break up, chin up, at least knights vote means your winning
well? maybe for the time being... b'cause i'll come back where your girlfriend didn't
yup he can't keep a girl, I know of 6 different chicks who were quick to split
b'cause ironically your relationships are like your punchlines, always hitting miss
your always acting like your hench, yeah I'm afraid... I won't caress your ego
faggot I'll just knock you the fuck out, and defeat big C like successful chemo

...

[Cashius]

Lol.

This faggot's a bitch. Came here for e-friends...ain't happening, kid
NOONE thanks Godforsaken I don't blame them...cuz that's what he is
And his bitch is a wiiiide load. There's nothing he can even say
I've got proof...and a pie chart that shows she eats like three a day
But you're obsessed w/ that girl. No matter what, this faggot is at her side
The way you Clingon, you'd think you were launching an attack on The Enterprise
Everyone hates you...clowning you under threads. The kid is such a pest
And all those name tags get under his skin, it's like he pinned one to his chest
Taking money shots all over the place. This grimey flamer blows
I'd tell you to take a load off...but you do that everytime you change your clothes

[namesake]

Clingon shit was nice lol.

[namesake]

Allen?...

[Geno]

Cash got this

Sakes had some ok ideas, felt like they could of been executed better for more impact though. Cash was pretty consistent, wording seemed a little goofy at times. Godforsaken was cool, clingon was lol. Good shit

V-cash

[Neighbor]

Pretty much agree w/ Geno here.. Namesake wasn't bad at all, but he lacked on execution & delivery.. Cash was pretty consistent, had a couple big misses, but overall more well-rounded & sharp

Good battle, guys

v/ Cash

[Trag.]

Cashius won.


namesake came well... some of the lines were predictable whereas Cash had the wording and showed more experience... cool lil battle ya'll

v/cash

[Unfukwitable]

Good battle just felt one had better wording and better lines period, I felt both had a good verses though just ones craft was much more on point .

v/Cash

[DLB]

v/ cashius

son came fresher and dropped harder hitting bars. the shoryuken bar was a forced wp, and an example of some of the things namesake did wrong w/ his verse. cash didn't really try but he gave enough to get the W

[Arch.]

Namesake has the basics down, but is lacking in execution... closer was the best punch but just came off lazy... Cash was ok enough... really a case of his wording giving him the win

vote Cash

[namesake]

Even I'd vote for cash so can't be mad....

Cash wins

[Cashius]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18263
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18269
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18266
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18272

[Beyond]

just put a bit more effort in your typing, & I'll promise a win you can leave with
cuz i'm shor u ken come up with a personal?... who cares if only Allen believes it?
Cash's been through a break up, chin up, at least knights vote means your winning
well? maybe for the time being... b'cause i'll come back where your girlfriend didn't
your always acting like your hench, yeah I'm afraid... I won't caress your ego
faggot I'll just knock you the fuck out, and defeat big C like successful chemo

vs

This faggot's a bitch. Came here for e-friends...ain't happening, kid
NOONE thanks Godforsaken I don't blame them...cuz that's what he is
And his bitch is a wiiiide load. There's nothing he can even say
I've got proof...and a pie chart that shows she eats like three a day
Taking money shots all over the place. This grimey flamer blows
I'd tell you to take a load off...but you do that everytime you change your clothes


Decent battle. namesake had opener which didn't really rhyme. Title/writing. Shoryuken kind of rough, but I like the attempt. I did do a double take and thought it was Bags vs. namesake for some reason, though. Got share a den and their trollish 'hatred' for eachother confizzled. I only quoted gf line because I was still thinking he was battling Bags for some reason and fuck that faggot (although his video mag and recent abuse of power has made him grown on me, though). Hitting miss was a little off. Needed to make it hit'n miss or hittin' miss or something. I see you. Closer was ok. Just quoted it for shits. Salamander had cool swag & flow nameplay. PiE chart was funny. I liked Clingon, too. One of those wordplays where you're not sure if you saw it before or not. Seems obvious. Who knows? Let's make it look more even, though. Name tags was technically sound, too. Closer more of the same. Very consistent verse, I'd say between Cash and Aero for verse of the week. Overall it's clear Cash got it pretty convincingly. namesake has some potential, though. Props to both.

/v clay

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

just put a bit more effort in your typing, & I'll promise a win you can leave with
cuz i'm shor u ken come up with a personal?... who cares if only Allen believes it?

this line was dope to me, a little forced but dope nonetheless...
the rest of your verse wasn't as good...
Nothing hit hard and nothing else was as creative...


And his bitch is a wiiiide load. There's nothing he can even say
I've got proof...and a pie chart that shows she eats like three a day
But you're obsessed w/ that girl. No matter what, this faggot is at her side
The way you Clingon, you'd think you were launching an attack on The Enterprise
Everyone hates you...clowning you under threads. The kid is such a pest
And all those name tags get under his skin, it's like he pinned one to his chest

Good verse, pie chart and clingon were your best...

Cash was more consistent and creative...

Vote- Cash...

Bye...

[Sn00p]

Cashius wins. Don't vote anymore.