Blue Bayou vs PiE - {Blue Bayou wins}

[Orc]

NBL
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Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY,
• Voting ends Tuesday July 23rd at 11:59 PM PST.
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  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Blue Bayou @PiE

[Blue Bayou]

The Return.

12 g'luck

[PiE]

ok

[Blue Bayou]

this is grown man shit. i don't need no gauges to off ya
i'll throw hands that'll have Pique Owed faster then player wages in Barca
faggot i get bitches. i'm known around this city as fly
& i don't need 90's comedy movies to know there's always a Big Jimmy in pie
lmao at ur whackness. must suck now all ya hype has decayed
i've seen better Fight Night no-show verses & u've been writtin for days
chain you up in my basement then assault you w/ stones and a blade
so fuck my UFC plans for tonight. i'll let u rot & really expose Bones in a cage
think you can beat me?! that shit is delerious holmes
Pie's on some Math shit .. & i'll have em lookin more bitchmade then Serious Jones
i'm throwin left and right combo's yaa i'm goin ape shit
so u better Duck Brother.. & i ain't talkin no Joe & Frank shit

[PiE]

you already set the line limit at 12 and I agreed so I'm gonna let you redo that mistake you've made while you still have time.. Im showing and I'm going 12 like we agreed

[PiE]

I've sent my 12 to Orc... but since you didn't ask for an ext or even respond.. 12 below

[PiE]

There's an exclusive list of voters I've heard you pooled to a crew
And I know you're the leader because they all were blew by you
And it's close to Halloween so your timing is plotted
To fit your costume so it matches when you climb out of the closet

You're appearing irrelevant.... currently, all I hear are embellishments
Your history's more forced and crooked than the Syrian president
You're wife's in love with PiE, crumbs and nuts in her eyes, she's horny for those
But to avoid kissing you, she'd rather eat the thorns of that rose
You get no love in your house, you're punched in the mouth whenever company's around
Just taking abuse and this match creates deja vu of how you're punished in house
And Fuck Yo Couch!!... my boots do engravings with manure flake shavings
Turning your blue bayou into a sewer like all your newest creations

[Blue Bayou]

u were late.. i can edit in more lines if you want or the mods can just give me the win

[Orc]

he sent me 12 so hurry up and edit 12 in or its closing @Blue Bayou

[Blue Bayou]

edited in 12

[Trag.]

Blue Bayou got this..


Pie came too simple for my tastes, his angles didnt hit anything for me, thorn was kind of funny, but eh.


Blue had wit content and seemed lackadaisical compared to what i've seen before. Clearly levels above in execution.


v/Blue.

[Neighbor]

Yeah, Blue was pretty consistent & hard-hitting, even tho he hasn't dropped in what.. a year?

Pie wasn't bad, but just couldn't match the experience Bayou has when formulating punchlines & executing them cleanly.. pretty good read from both

v/ BB

[R!canTheoryz]

Vote - Blue Bayou, Pie had some cool ideas and very good vocab I just felt like Blue was slightly better here better punches better execution creativity was also on point more harsh wins in my book.

[Cashius]

Pique owed, big jimmy, math

Vs.

Nothing stood out.

Blue.

[Beyond]

chain you up in my basement then assault you w/ stones and a blade
so fuck my UFC plans for tonight. i'll let u rot & really expose Bones in a cage
think you can beat me?! that shit is delerious holmes
Pie's on some Math shit .. & i'll have em lookin more bitchmade then Serious Jones
i'm throwin left and right combo's yaa i'm goin ape shit
so u better Duck Brother.. & i ain't talkin no Joe & Frank shit

vs

And it's close to Halloween so your timing is plotted
To fit your costume so it matches when you climb out of the closet
You're appearing irrelevant.... currently, all I hear are embellishments
Your history's more forced and crooked than the Syrian president


Ok battle. Wasn't feeling Blue's Pique owed line as I've seen tons of owed/something something K owed wordplays for many years now. That and I thought the word pique was pronounced peek/peak, unless the place is pronounced differently? I'll take your word for it, Canadian. Jimmy in PiE wasn't bad. Could of been set up better, though, with mentioning a condom in connection with Jimmy. Fight Night was pure filler even though it's true. Bones in a cage was dope and a lot of people agree about him being exposed right now. Those people are morons, but still. Serious Jones line is cool nameplay even though Math the one who look bitchmade. Duck brother is lol 'cause that whole situation is retarded as fuck. Internet poem battles being compared to boxing matches with millions of dollars and real life legacy/physical well-being on the line. Ridiculous. PiE had his opener which was one of most played Blue Bayou nameplays ever. I thought closet flowed nicely, not very good though. Syrian was probably his best line even though it wasn't the greatest connection ever. Rose line was weird. House was filler and off multies. Closer was a subpar nameplay attempt. Overall pretty one-sided battle with Blue taking it rather easily. Kind of showed signs of rust, but not really. Props to both.

/v your my boy blue

[Arch.]

Pique owed and math

vs

decent attempts but no real connection

Pie just didnt have sting... not awful though. Just outclassed

Vote Blue

[Dominate]

Piqué owed, math and duck brother were cool

Didn't dislike pie's verse, just nothing really hit though... Rhyming was good and it was kind of creative, just lacked cleverness/wordplays or hard hitting punches


Blue

[Sn00p]

this is grown man shit. i don't need no gauges to off ya
i'll throw hands that'll have Pique Owed faster then player wages in Barca
^woulda been dope if it wasn't pronounced peekay
faggot i get bitches. i'm known around this city as fly
& i don't need 90's comedy movies to know there's always a Big Jimmy in pie
chain you up in my basement then assault you w/ stones and a blade
so fuck my UFC plans for tonight. i'll let u rot & really expose Bones in a cage

vs.

no standouts

so yea. pie can rhyme and has the vocab. but his concepts are a bit too simple. like the syria line for example. yes, i get it. assad is crooked. u're saying he's crooked like assad. where's the cleverness in that? but pls don't take this as me hating on u. i'm just tryna help. u should really look at some of the other lines posted here and see how they're making lines sting by being witty & clever with them. u have the basics down. now it's time for some conceptuale expansion. look at the The Ultimate Writer mags in the archives. it's all explained there. applying that could really help u. anyways, bayou took this kinda clearly.
v/bb

[King Karaoke]

Hi...



this is grown man shit. i don't need no gauges to off ya
i'll throw hands that'll have Pique Owed faster then player wages in Barca
chain you up in my basement then assault you w/ stones and a blade
so fuck my UFC plans for tonight. i'll let u rot & really expose Bones in a cage
i'm throwin left and right combo's yaa i'm goin ape shit
so u better Duck Brother.. & i ain't talkin no Joe & Frank shit

Creative verse, wages line and UFC line were your best...

You're appearing irrelevant.... currently, all I hear are embellishments
Your history's more forced and crooked than the Syrian president

Your verse had potential but you had some wording issues and were too simple at times...
the opener has been done to death and the Halloween line could have been good if you worded it right...

BB was more creative and hit harder imo...

vote- Blue...

Bye...

[Allen Knight]

this is grown man shit. i don't need no gauges to off ya
i'll throw hands that'll have Pique Owed faster then player wages in Barca
lmao at ur whackness. must suck now all ya hype has decayed
i've seen better Fight Night no-show verses & u've been writtin for days
chain you up in my basement then assault you w/ stones and a blade
so fuck my UFC plans for tonight. i'll let u rot & really expose Bones in a cage

vs


You're appearing irrelevant.... currently, all I hear are embellishments
Your history's more forced and crooked than the Syrian president

v/blue, i thought that bones bar was fire tbh, blue had a good verse. pie u have the idea but ur concepts lackin need more creativity ur wordings good. but i thought blue took this one wit a more consistent verse an acouple of nice bars. props yahll